Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
Schnessa (Signed) on Aug 31, 2008 02:13 am (Chapter 9 pt I)

Oh Heather, I'm going to have to do two reviews since I have so much to say about each part! lol I'm sure you'll love it though! lol

Part One:

1. Zuit Suit-I just imagined Justin making a joke about wanting to get married in a Zuit Suit and it was always a dream of his and Amelia...well not getting it. So she brings it up to Charlotte (in all seriousness...as is Amelia's way)

2. How cute is Charlotte's dad? But I have a feeling maybe Charlotte is embarrassed a bit about her dad's occupation compared to say...Amelia's and Justin's.

3. Leo just got me laughing my bum off. And Charlie giggles and Justin's stomach flutters? He would have kissed her if he wasn't engaged? Ahh...that my dear, is you writing torture! lol

4. It kind of made me sad reading this as well though too just because Justin misses being Justin. Does that make sense? I just wish he would do something that he loved, I mean besides Golf and playing the piano...I mean really something that he loved just because he wanted too regardless of what Amelia said. But he's so pussy whipped it's not funny.

 

Off to read and review part two. By the way, I do love the update! MUAH! 



Author's Response: Okay first of all let me say that BOTH your reviews made my friggin day!!! And you're totally right about Amelia and the zuit suit hahahaha. Justin's sarcasm is lost on her. I dunno if Charlotte is so much embarrassed by what her dad does as opposed to embarrassed by the reactions that Justin and Amelia (mainly Amelia) would have to it. Does that make sense...hahaha probably not. Seriously, Leo was one of my favorite parts to write hahaha He reminds me of Christian Siriano from Project Runway...lol And what you said totally makes sense. Justin misses who he was and who he and Amelia were as a couple before she went all prim and proper. More on that in later chapters... Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!!!!!





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