Author's Response: They really kinda did. Once they kinda eased up around each other they found it easier to be normal...lol If that makes sense. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response:
I agree on all counts! Glad you're loving it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
she has to ask him why he stopped making music and why he's such a pussy and lets amelia stomp all over his live. =)
damn i really want them together soon, is it gonna take long??
Author's Response: Together? Justin and Charlotte? Now why would that happen? *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
I love the fact that this chapter came in two parts!
I really hope Justin is realizing that someone (mainly Charlotte) would be much better for him than Amelia. I can't believe that he doesn't realize that Amelia makes him miserable.
Author's Response: HAHAHA Yeah the archive doesn't let you post over a certain number of characters so I had to split it up *sigh* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
“I loathe you,” Charlotte scowls and he bursts out laughing
That was like the best line. I totally LOL reading it.
Awesome job as usual Heather, the chapter was nice and long :) Always nice. And as usual, I can't wait to see where this is gonna go! Their relationship is growing more and more and I hope that she will stay on as Justin's PA and it will continue to grow! :) Anyway, I know you jus tupdated but I hope more is comin soon! ttyl -Traci
Author's Response: Hahahahah thanks! I really liked that line too. Hopefully I'll have an update soon. I'm gonna be going back to school soon and I'm still doing that challenge so I don't know how much free time I'm gonna have. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Guuuuuuuuh yeah they're really growing on each other huh? Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Okay, the second part of my review.
Part Two:
1. The more and more Justin's thoughts are revealed...I kind of hate Amelia more and more. I mean they're so different and he points out everything he doesn't like about her. What kind of relationship is he stuck in? And why?
2. Justin on a diet? That boy would fade away! lol I hate Amelia! lol but seriously when Justin asked what Charlotte hated about working for Amelia...I wanted her to say 'seeing the way she treats you'...but it's Charlotte and she wouldn't.
3. And then his reaction to her getting the wrong thing on her salad...priceless. I'm sure he was relieved and grateful beyond belief....sometimes I think he needs to remind himself that "normal laid back" girls still exist...outside of his Amelia induced cage.
4. I'm glad that Charlotte confided in Justin about just not liking her job and quitting because of that. Maybe it'll snap something in Justin's head to get back to doing what he loved instead of settling.
5. I'm almost done....I swear! lol How sneaky, yet cute, is Justin talking to Charlotte's dad on the phone? That my dear was superb!
I love love love this story Heather! And I love you for writing it! Love ya Bish!
Author's Response: YAY more review...lol I really enjoy getting into Justin's head. Seeing both his and Charlotte's reactions was the main reason I decided to do this in third person which isn't the easiest POV for me to write for some odd reason but I guess that's good as well, helping me be well rounded and what not. Justin's diet is of course less about his weight and more about control. She's trying to make him eat healthy or something, that crazy bitch lol The salad thing was actually one of the very first ideas I had for this story hahahaha. I mean if you think about it he's kind of been trained to think that if women don't get what they want they freak out. It was like an instinctual reaction and then when it broke the cycle he was just dumbfounded lol. Can I just say that I LOVE that you got the parallel between Charlotte and Justin on the job thing *gives you cookies* And Justin talking to Charlotte's dad was great mostly because he and Justin are kind of alike. Goofy yet endearing...lol I'm really glad you're liking the story and I'm LOVING your reviews!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing...again..lol
Author's Response: Maybe that's it. Maybe Justin's CRAZY!!!!!!!! o_O or not...hahahahaha Thanks for readin and reviewin bish!
Author's Response: Yeah she seems to be growin in him and vice versa. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm glad you liked the section. It's been one of my favorites to write so far. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YES EXACTLY! I really like your analysis of Justin. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Hahahahah you're pretty good indeed, not quite there but very very close. I'm glad you liked the section! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Author's Response: Awwww he IS cute *cuddles him* All will be revealed in time I promise. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!
