Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
heartsevolve (Signed) on Sep 19, 2010 01:48 am (Chapter 13)

Charlotte wonders what exactly she was waiting for.

Just thought I'd let you know exactly how much that line killed me the first time I read it, and still kills me now - A LOTTTTTT A LOT A LOT.

It kills me a lot. 

P.S. thanks for writinggggg, I wish this was a book :)



Author's Response: HAHAHA That is probably one of my favorite lines in the entire story just because it was really when they started to realize that there was something there between them *cuddles them* I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



DeadandGone (Signed) on Nov 08, 2008 07:13 pm (Chapter 13)
Heather oh Heather where are you? I'm suffering from withdrawal :( 

Author's Response: I'm working on it I sweaaaaaaar. Its not going well -_- but I'm trying! Stick with me!



Vikki (Signed) on Nov 05, 2008 11:11 pm (Chapter 13)

omg! this story is SICK! and i mean that in a good way, LOL! I love Charlie, basically because i am SO her in SO many ways....its crazy. And Amelia, omg... where did this alien come from? Justin hunny...wake up and smell the overpriced roses! Its hard...i know, three years is a long time to invest in a woman, a relationship, a lifestyle. but she/that/it is NOT what you want to wake up to for the REST of your LIFE! now....Charlie on the other hand... *wink wink*. Hopefully Trace and Mama Lynn express this to him and open his fucking EYES a bit. Sheesh! 

ok sweetie....now that I am all caught up, you have to gimme a new chap, ooook? good! :)



Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you're liking it! Thanks for taking the time to catch up! Hopefully I'll have the next chap by the end of the weekend middle of the week at the most. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



DeadandGone (Signed) on Nov 01, 2008 10:59 pm (Chapter 13)

This chapter was such a roller coaster of emotions, I laughed and almost cried ( yea I'm a sap) and I wanted to slap the shit out of Amelia. How dare she come between a man and his cobbler?! I felt so bad for Justin, but Trace is right, how did he let Amelia take over his life? They are so not right for each other to the point that I'm so mad at him for being so blind. 

Um Charlie + Justin now please? Y/Y?  



Author's Response: Awwwwww emotions!!! What every writer loves to evoke...lol! Charlie + Justin??? What is this of which you speak? *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



jep77 (Signed) on Nov 01, 2008 02:52 pm (Chapter 13)

OMG.  I had to re read this chapter so I could review.  Actually I just really wanted to read it again.  And I'm procrastinating from writing 2 papers.  AMAZING.  I want more.  Like tomorrow.  But I can wait....as long as good things happen in the next chapter.

 

 



Author's Response: YAY REREADS!!!! but get on them papers girl!!! I'm working on more I swear. Hopefully by the end of the weekend I'll have an update for you guys. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 31, 2008 01:48 am (Chapter 13)
What a fantastic chapter! and so worth the wait. Awesome job once again Heather :) I can't wait to see where this goes. Char and Justin seriously NEED to hook up already! C'mon! Amelia is ALL wrong for him. LoL. Anyway, as usual great job! I loved the interaction between Char, Justin, Rachel and Trace! Great stuff! Hope more is coming soon! ttyl -Traci

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it!!! More should be coming soon. I'm interntless until Wednesday so I should have some time to work on the next section. I'm swinging for next weekend but no promises lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 09:13 pm (Chapter 13)
i absolutely loved this chapter. it was so freaking wonderful. the dialogue was just awesome and had me rolling the whole time. and it made me feel so many ways. reading about the interactions between justin and amelia are so uncomfortable because i feel so mad that she controls him so much, and there is no reason behind it. maybe he's stuck in who she was in the past, but he needs to come to terms with the change. how can you let somebody treat your family the way she does? she feels like she's better than justin's family. the family she is marrying into. he's not going to just be part of her family, she'll be part of his family, and for her to treat and behave that way with them...i mean, his grandma pats her shoulder stiffly, then pats charlotte's and squeezes it too. amazing. genuine affection for your grandson's fiance's assistant who you just recently met, but none (rightfully so) for your grandson's fiance. everything amelia does revolves around social status, material possessions, and money, not feelings. justin voicing in his head all these little things he has come to notice and appreciate about charlotte, stomach curling, licking his lips, and body shivers...i love it!! then the end...man...i figured they wouldn't actually kiss, but that was awesome anyway. what trace said may have hurt, but the truth hurts sometimes. maybe justin needs to hear more of it. i'm wondering what charlotte's waiting on too. i'm waiting on the thing that snaps them together. gaaah. sorry so long. i got carried away. lol update soon please! again, wonderful chapter. :o)

Author's Response: YAAAAY this was such a great review! I love your thoughts on how Amelia fits into (or doens't rather) Justin's life and his family! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 07:20 pm (Chapter 13)
EEEEP I love this chapter!!  The dialogue was AWESOME (and hilarious).  I especially love the reference to Trace's hobbit hole hahahaha :)

Author's Response: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY Bish you know I love the hobbit hole line *snigger* Thanks for readin' and reviewin'!!!



Karlita (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 06:40 pm (Chapter 13)

I love this line.  I keep re-reading it. 

She turns to him, placing a hand on his chest her green eyes crashing into his and she pats him gently, trying to soothe the ache in his chest and he marvels that she even knows it’s there.

So good!  Grr, they need do it already or at least some kissing!  Great update. 



Author's Response: GUH I love that line too!!! One of my favorites from the section. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



hp5010 (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 04:34 pm (Chapter 13)

Crap, damn Amelia, just go away.

Loved the chapter, can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Things would be so much better without Amelia I would agree. But Justin loves her *smacks him* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



a_nonymous (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 03:33 pm (Chapter 13)
OMG WHY DIDN'T THEY KISS OR SOMETHING?!

Author's Response: Rooooz they can't kiiiiiiiiiiss Justin is engaaaaaaaged *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 01:49 pm (Chapter 13)
That bitch needs to go back to NY and leave everyone alone. Justin and Charlie are perfect for each other. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: I love everyone's strong reactions to Amelia and also everyone rooting for Charlie and Justin...although I don't know why since Justin is engaged *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Vessy (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 12:43 pm (Chapter 13)
great work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



alimera (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 11:18 am (Chapter 13)
Well that was tons of fun, until the wicked witch broke up their party and Trace was a little too honest--but maybe that's something Justin had to hear. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Yeah Amelia's pretty much the biggest killjoy ever lol and Trace probably would have never said that if he'd been sober but I agree it was probably something Justin needed to hear. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Shufflee (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 07:44 am (Chapter 13)

She was waiting for kiss.duh

where's that damn kiss, already??????



Author's Response: Kiss? What kiss? *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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