Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Dec 12, 2008 02:59 am (Chapter 15 pt 2)
Haha! Trace see's it! Great job as usual! I can't wait to see where this goes. Seriously though, Char and Justin are just made for each other! Now they just need to see it :) Fantastic job! Lovin the long update :-D! ttyl -Traci

Author's Response: Hahaha girl I just can't shut myself up these days. Glad you're liking this! And Trace...guh Trace owns my soul in this chapter. He's so fun to write! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Dec 11, 2008 10:49 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)

this story, despite how sad justin is, makes me so happy. trace totally stole this chapter. it was awesome! haha. i also love the looks that have been going on between rachel and trace, but especially the many between lynn and sadie. besides trace, they know justin the best, and i'd bet a lot of money on knowing exactly what they are thinking and hoping for. "A lot can change" yes justin. you are getting closer to the light, but ugh. i wanted to cry for him when she treated the cd like it was junk. :o( and charlotte should've slapped her when she talked about her bag. i know she wouldn't, but yeah. haha. amelia feels like that guest that you can't wait to leave, while charlotte is the one that feels like she could belong in the family. and of course, amelia's gift to charlotte...it's not even about consideration or thoughtfulness. it's still about just showing what she can buy. showing how classy/high she is. nothing she does is based on feelings anymore.  and how sad is it that justin liked charlotte's gift more than amelia's? UUUGH!! the gift from justin to charlotte... so sweet and meangingful. :o) oh! and then coming away from their embrace...the touches! eeeeek!!! :o) :o) you should see and hear me when i read this story. update soon! now that i'm done with finals i can concentrate on what's important; my stories! haha. :o)



Author's Response: GUH YES!!!!!! Seriously writing the part where she dropped the CD ripped my heart out. Like I almost didn't wanna put it in because it was so sad but that's how Amelia is *sigh* and YES NO MORE FINALS!!!! Glad you enjoyed the section! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



crestbaby (Signed) on Dec 10, 2008 04:08 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)
I am loving this story. I have only one request though. Update soon!

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you're loving it! Hopefully I'll have updates soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Dec 10, 2008 12:23 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)
i love your stories! they are from the same person yet completely different each one everytime. i look for updates on this one everytime i log in. keep up the fantastic work. lol

Author's Response: Wow thank you! Its nice that you appreciate not just the story but the uniqueness of the plot as well. Hopefully updates will come soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Rocio Vazquez (Signed) on Dec 10, 2008 12:08 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)
i love your stories! they are from the same person yet completely different each one everytime. i look for updates on this one everytime i log in. keep up the fantastic work. lol

Author's Response: Wow thank you! Its nice that you appreciate not just the story but the uniqueness of the plot as well. Hopefully updates will come soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



alimera (Signed) on Dec 09, 2008 04:23 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)
Omg, Justin is so incredibly cute, giving her two presents with lots of meaning. Yeah, I totally agree with Trace--nothing has happened YET. But it will!! Lol, update again soon!

Author's Response: GUH yes!!! And notice how Charlotte totally appreciated them and the meaning behind them? Unlike SOMEONE else we know *pointed look at Amelia* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Dec 08, 2008 04:50 am (Chapter 15 pt 2)

God I love Trace in this...he reminds me of my best friend. He's amazing and I love his personality. He really cares and a true friend tells you when you've fucked up without sugar coating it. I liked how he was honest with Charlotte.

And, I agree with what everyone was saying about Amelia and Justin and their situation. I don't hate Ameila completely. I just wished she wasn't so uptight. I mean, does she even know that her soon to be husband is unhappy and slowly drifting while questioning himself about her and his present life? I felt bad when she brushed off the song he made for her. That was from the heart and her joy over the diamond earings made her seem so materialistic. I love how Charlotte makes Justin quesiton himself and really put his life into perspective but I'm a little worried about her. She needs to toughen up some. Sometimes, it feels like she doesn't really fit into the equation and other times I'm all for team Charltin. I honestly wish there was a way for everyone to be happy...can you make that happen? please? LOL. 

God, when is this wedding going to happen? I'd hate it if Justin made it all the way to the alter and when it was his turn to say I do realization would hit and he'd realize he was in love with Charlotte or something. That would be...terrible. LOL But make for some good drama. I'd just like to get into Amelia's head and understand how she works and why she's the way she is even if now it's clear now that her Dad has a part to play in it.

I'm glad that everyone is seeing the connection that Justin and Charlotte share and I love how they're progressing but I'm still worried about how all of this will turn out. Anyway amazing update. I hope you're not ending this one anytime soon. This is one of my new favs and I always look forward to what you come up with next. 

Love your writing Heather! I get sucked in every time! And every chapter is better than the last and leaves me wanting more. Gah. Speaking of...I need to check out those Skystin shorts too some time. :) Ok, I'm done with this longass review. lol Update soon!



Author's Response: Guh Trace is getting so much love and that makes me squee with fangirly joy lol I love that he feels like he can be honest with Charlotte. Like its almost like "J trusts you. I trust you" kinda thing you know? Aaaaaaand trust me the ending is no where in sight *headdesk* lol I'm glad you're liking it and you know I LOVE long reviews so keep em coming! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



SJane (Signed) on Dec 08, 2008 04:28 am (Chapter 15 pt 2)
Oh trace I am so with u on that bet lol those 2 together just make me wanna smile so big and do a little jig...oh hell *does happy dance* lol see what they do to me??

Author's Response: YAY *joins in the dance* *does the Continental* Learned that one from Fiance!J lol I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



CJasmine (Signed) on Dec 08, 2008 01:50 am (Chapter 15 pt 2)
I'm extremely addicted to this story, just so you know! You are very talented and I cannot wait to read more!

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'm glad you not only like the story but appreciate the writing as well! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



DeadandGone (Signed) on Dec 07, 2008 10:49 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)

We've taken over the review section lol 

Not a front per say ( I don't really know how to express it) but maybe like you said Justin was her escape/rebellion from her lifestyle ( a breath of fresh air, which she thought she wanted), but then realized/thinks had to revert to this Amelia in order to be successful. I don't want to burn her at the stake, yet I am team CharlStin and simply want to see Justin happy. Like "Trace" said he's himself with her and I just don't see Amelia changing her ways ( she's capable, we've seen flashes of old Amelia) and Justin has been through enough already. 

 

O/T I totally see her saying she doesn't want kids latter on if they do get married.  

 

Heather see what you've caused?! lol  



Author's Response: I LOVE IT OMG!!!! I wish there was a better place to have discussions like this because I love hearing what everyone thinks about Amelia before she was with Justin and now that shes with him and how it effects their lives and the lives of everyone around them (Charlotte, Trace, Justin's fam, etc.) Thanks for taking the time to read, review, and DISCUSS!!! YAY!



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Dec 07, 2008 10:20 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)
ok so, reply to a reply to a reply. looool.

DeadAndGone-- Amelia doesn't really strike me as a person who'd put on a front to get some guy's attention. Still, I don't think it was an easy change necessarily, quick maybe since they've only been together for a few years, but not easy. It just seems like (and I'm going by what Justin says about her when they first met) she used to be this upper crust girl who kinda saw Justin as a form of rebellion or escape in one way or another and between growing up and being caught between her past and her upbringing, her career, and their relationship, she kind of sobered up and hardened or just wised up to some kind of duty she thought she had.

Still, I totally hear you. Like I said, Amelia can be a bitch and I'm definitely not condoning her actions, but I'm not trying to burn her at the stake...yet. Especially since, as I said before, I'm not exactly Team Charlstin. loool

Author's Response: GUH YES!!!! I'm seriously loving this dialogue lol. Your thoughts on Amelia's past are pretty much dead on. We'll see more of it as the story progresses. Thank you for your thoughts and for reading and reviewing!!!



MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 07, 2008 09:53 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)

“If it’s not I’m gonna chuck it through their store window.”

LOL! Love it.

“You fuckin my best friend?”

Dude, I gasped and my mouth dropped open and my eyes bugged at at this line. lol. I love Trace in this story now.

Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome chapter. I absolutely adore Justin in this story. He makes me all giddy and such. You didn't come through with the nookie that I requested but I guess I can forgive you for that. Please update soon.

 



Author's Response: EEP YAY I'm glad you liked it! Fun fact: the line about chucking it through the store window was inspired from Usher's episode of cribs when he was talking about some ridiculously expensive table some guy talked him into buying and he said if he ever saw the table anywhere else he would throw it through the guys store window lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Dec 07, 2008 09:38 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)
Soooo I know this section was a bitch for you (which seems to coincide with other things right now) but I think it turned out really well.  Trace is seriously turning out to be one of my favorite characters in this whole thing, just because he's so funny and keeps contributing to the failure of Justin and Amelia hahaha.  Oh and yeah I seriously almost CRIED when Justin had to pick his CD up off the floor.  Amelia can go DIAF...a big, bitchy fire.  THANKS FOR WRITING AND POSTING OMG!

Author's Response: GUH TRACE *cuddles him* You know the CD thing was tough for me to leave in. Mah poor wittle Fiance!J's super sweet gift just discarded on the floor *pets him* THANKS FOR READING AND REVIEWING BISH!!!!!!!!



DeadandGone (Signed) on Dec 07, 2008 09:20 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)
This is a first for me, replying to a reply lol

justinzgirlkb I see what you're saying about Amelia, and she's one of my favorite characters as well ( she is unlike anything we have read), but her complete dismissal and lack of respect for Justin and his opinion makes me wonder if she was truly that woman Justin fell in love with. If she so easily changed into this hard and cold woman, was that carefree Amelia just a front? I understand the demands her career and the society she comes from places on her, but what she has done and continues to do goes beyond that. This is the man she'll be spending her life with ( hopefully Heather can change that *wink wink* ) and the family she is marrying into, and she treats them like they're beneath her. I feel that Justin has given up so much to be with her, and any relationship ( especially marriage) is a give and take, their relationship is completely one sided. While Justin is striving to keep the flame alive she does everything in her power to push him into the arms of Charlotte. 



Author's Response: YAY DISCUSSION!!!! This is great! I love hearing your guys' thoughts! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



princess (Anonymous) on Dec 07, 2008 08:22 pm (Chapter 15 pt 2)
they need to hurry up and get to it already.  Stop dancing around each other.  But I love this story.  Please don't keep us waiting long

Author's Response: *GASP* Justin and Charlotte can't get TOGETHER!!! he's engaged! *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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