Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
jep77 (Signed) on Jan 31, 2009 10:24 pm (Chapter 17)
posting on this chapter cause i don't want to be tempted yet,....but i love that the next chapter is 3 parts!!!

Author's Response: YAY! I'm glad everyone is loving the three parts. I was afraid that people would be like HOLY CRAP I can't read all that but once again you guys have proved that you're awesome and are willing to sacrifice a little extra of your time. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!



alimera (Signed) on Jan 11, 2009 10:58 am (Chapter 17)
Ugh NO. I was fully expecting Amelia to jump up and down and Justin was going to see that she's nothing but a bossy bitch and HARDLY a woman worth marrying but nooooooooo. She had to actually look like she was trying to listen. Ugh. Can I just tell you that this line: "Amelia nods “For her dress for the party. I gave her one of the wedding dresses I’m not using,” " totally made me space out and have a vision of Amelia doing something awful right before the wedding and/or Justin realizing that Charlotte is the right girl for him and they don't even have to plan a wedding because she already has a dress and a venue...but then that dream disappeared in a puff of smoke and I realized that I could just have an extremely overactive imagination. Guilty, lol. Well, hope school doesn't take you away from us for too long...and you can update again soon!!

Author's Response: That Amelia. she's a crafty sucker lol. Just when you think you know her she goes and shows that she does have a soul hiding in there somewhere. I LIKE your over active imagination! I love hearing where people think it's gonna go. That's a lot of the fun of writing this. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Jan 10, 2009 02:19 am (Chapter 17)

Wow, I love Amelia, but that reaction was a surprise! A little voice in my head, though, is saying that it won't last long (if it was even real--homegirl WOULD be that manipulative), and even if it does, it doesn't matter because Justin and Charlie have to get together at some point. LOL Not that I’m (that) disappointed about that. As far as Amelstin goes, I've just accepted that, as much as Justin and Amelia may have fit together in the past, they just don't anymore and no matter how much shape-shifting either of them does, I think they're ultimately in different places looking for different things. Hopefully, the break-up will be amicable-ish, because as we know, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned and Amelia WOULD be the one to hunt his ass down for dumping her for Charlotte. lol

 

What I really love about this story is the fact that you don't love or hate any of the characters. They all have flaws, but they all have redeeming qualities, you want to punch them in one scene, and hug them in the next, which is probably why it's so hard to pick a side! Plus, I love how the title applies to each character and works into all the storylines... It's really cool.

 

Also! And this is SUPER random, but, I don't know if you watch "The Office," but for some reason Amelia reminds me of Angela (pretty straight-laced, uptight, opinionated, bitchy) and Justin sorta reminds me of Andy, Angela's fiance (kinda hammy, doting, sometimes clueless, goofy and bubbly). It's pretty funny actually. lol. Anyway! More soon!!!



Author's Response: OMG THE OFFICE!!!! I never made that connection before but you're kinda right!!! That's so weird!!! I'm so glad you like that you can't love or hate any of the characters. That's really what I'm going for and its the challenge of writing this story. I've said from the beginning that it's an experimentation with character and what drives people to do the things they do. I'm really proud of how it's turning out and of course I'm glad you're enjoying it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Jan 07, 2009 10:04 pm (Chapter 17)
not liking amelia becomes a conflict when reading this update. it's hard to be like, "ugh i hate her!" when reading it through justin's pov like that. he was so hopeful, and how he could see the old her coming back, and she's shifting awkwardly and stuttering and really trying, it almost made me be like, "whoop! stick with her!"...almost. aha! you almost got me! lol as uncomfortable as it made me feel at times since i was like, "yay a breakthrough!" then immediately, "but no! he needs charlie!" i really enjoyed reading this update. but of course, change doesn't come overnight and i don't think things are going to be ok for very long.

Author's Response: YAY CONFLICTED EMOTIONS!!! EXACTLY what I was going for with this chapter! I'm glad you enjoyed this one! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jan 07, 2009 03:14 am (Chapter 17)
Justin...you are in such denial it's not even FUNNY! What a great chapter. I was glad to see Justin put his foot down and stand up for something. I just don't know how this is gonna work out. I loved that the first thing he wanted to do was tell Charlotte. :) Cute! Awesome job as usual. Good luck with your new semester mine starts in Feb :) I still have a few weeks to enjoy. Hope more is coming soon! -Traci

Author's Response: GUH FEBUARY!!!! *jelliiiiiiiiis* Yeah school's gonna kick my ass this quarter. My time management skills are certainly gonna get a work out! Glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Vikki (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 11:17 pm (Chapter 17)

she needs to add actress to her freakin resume.... fake ass bitch.

UGH! this chapter was an emotional rollar coaster, lol! at first i was worried, thinking Justin would cave and meet her at the sushi place.

then i was shocked beyond belief when she showed up. but her pissy attitude began pissing me off. but WOW she actually has a heart? and I think that ... well... maybe she's not Satan and I began noticing why Justin was so hung up on her.

BUT SURPRISE! Bitch showed up again! Justin better listen to the inkling of doubt that's nagging at him. its called intuition baby... eat your pork pulled sandwitch and wake the fuck up! lol!

*sigh* ... if this story was reality I think i'd pull all my hair out by now, lol! :)



Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHAHA VIKKI! I love your review! Hearing your reactions to the key parts of the chapter is awesome and great because they're the exact reactions I was looking for! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 10:24 pm (Chapter 17)
Is that...is that actually a glimpse of a soul I see in Amelia?  I think I must be hallucinating...because we all know Amelia has no soul lol

Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHAHA She is indeed quite souless I must agree. Who knows maybe Amelia's turning around? Maybe they'll live happily ever after and have little blond babies in Dolce & Gabanna chest carriers? *snigger* Thanks for readin and reviewin bish!!!



hp5010 (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 09:40 pm (Chapter 17)

Yeah, Justin, keep telling yourself y'all will be ok and it will magically happen...

 

Good update, I'm glad Justin finally stood up to her.



Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Hopefully Justin will leave behind his doormat-y ways! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



a_nonymous (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 04:23 pm (Chapter 17)
He can’t help but realize that somewhere in the back of his mind an inkling of doubt is nagging at him. Something in the way Amelia looked at him, a mix of frustration and tolerance and something else he couldn’t quite place.

Go with that feeling, Justin. She's not gonna change!

Author's Response: You tell him Roz. The boy is certainly not listening to me lol! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MissM69 (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 09:52 am (Chapter 17)

now that's what I call putting somebody in their place you go justin :P

 

update soon :D



Author's Response: YES! He's finally coming around! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ambs07 (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 03:33 am (Chapter 17)

Yes finally he spoke an told her what he wanted. but i can't help but think this is going to be the end of them... hmmm great update girl! please update soon



Author's Response: It's about damn time right? I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 03:33 am (Chapter 17)
Okay I just started reading this (I don't know WHY I waited so long to do so) and I have a few gripes...

*clears throat*

This bitch is like Godzilla, all the dinosaurs from Jurassic Park, the Boogey man, and Chucky all rolled into one. By bitch I mean Amelia. I mean damn. And she's calling the Sexy Beast (Justin) selfish? She's about as selfish as they come. I don't think I've read anything where the girl is THAT big of a bitch. I mean I really wanted to just come through the screen and slap the ever loving mess out of the ho! God, I hope Charlie tells him about the whole plot to catch him with Patti deal. Grrr...

I said I had a few gripes...but she was the only one. I mean hell that woman is enough to make any person feel like they have a million gripes.

Anyway, I love it. I can't wait for the next update!! Like..NOW! LOL. Honestly though...awesomeness!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAH Godzilla and the SexyBeast!!! Some power couple huh? Glad you took the time to catch up and super glad you're liking it!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Joy (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 02:34 am (Chapter 17)
Nooooooo! They're supposed to call it all off. End it. Splitsville. lol :( Justin needs to start seeing what everyone else sees already or at least let Trace offer him some guidance.

Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!!! Justin's a stubborn bastard. Don't worry Trace will make another appearence soon and hopefully knock some sense into him. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Karlita (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:57 am (Chapter 17)
Aww, I love how adorably naive he is.  He's such a good guy.  It's sweet that he's trying so hard to make things work with Amelia, but one conversation isn't going to fix a broken relationship.  Plus he's always thinking about Charlotte because he knows deep down that she's so much better for him than the bitch.  Great update as usual. 

Author's Response: He really is incredibly naive so much so that it kinda breaks my heart. Hopefully he gets his head on straight soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:43 am (Chapter 17)
Oh, Justin. Poor, naive Justin. Blindy desperate to believe Justin. *shakes head* Tisk, tisk. I love the boy but he is in for a world of disappointment. Nothing changes that fast especially when that something's name is Amelia. I feel bad for him because I know that she'll go back to her old ways and he'll be so hurt. :( I'm glad that he stood up to her, though. I'm glad that he finally stood up for himself and wasn't swayed by Amelia as usual. And I admire that he wants to try and make their relationship work. He loves her and he wants to be with her so badly. It's kind of romantic. Makes me like him more that he's so dedicated to her and their relationship. And here goes the crazy: I actually kind of like Amelia now. *end of the world undoubtedly approaches* This chapter was awesomeness, missy. Please update soon.

Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHA "blindly desperate to believe Justin" That cracked me up! I agree there is something really noble and romantic about Justin and his determination to make it work with Amelia. Its also really kinda sad *pets him* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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