Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted to weave more of an intricate storyline this time around and I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
god i just had to reread everything cause i wasn't online here for like...uhm forever.
i love that story.:)
but hell...justin needs to figure himself out...he's all confused and...well he should grow some balls and finally dump that amelia bitch.
Author's Response: YAY thanks for taking the time to catch up! I'm glad you're liking the story! I will agree Justin is seriously killing me right now *smacks him* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: SERIOUSLY!!! Poor Charlotte *sigh* If Justin doesn't start acting right i'm gonna start smacking him on the nose with a rolled up news paper lol. I'm working on the update but things are coming pretty slow. Hopefully I'll get it out soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad youlove it!!! I'm working on an update I swear!! School is batshit crazy right now but I swear I'm gonna carve out some time in my schedule if it kills me! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Author's Response: YAAAAAAAY for good writing. Guh it was HARD! Thanks for your help btw. I don't know if I ever tell YOU that hahaha. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
GAH! First of all I truly despise that person for hacking this site right after you updated! It was pure torture to have to wait! haha
Second, OMG!!! I swear this chapter was beyond amazing. I don't think you understand how fantastic it is! The way you wrote their reactions was just perfect and so well written!
Lastly, despite the fact that I loved it so much and I wouldn't have had Justin react any other way than how he did, I still hate him! lol. How he sucked up to Amelia, the shaving of his hair made me feel sick! haha. and I especially hated this line “We should fly commercial,” Gah! He's so dumb, so dumb, so dumb! Poor Charlotte. I know he's probably just terrified about what might happen if they are alone together but he doesn't have to make her feel like absolute shit! (BTW I loved how you used Southwest, I instantly looked up the photo and imagined Charlotte trailing behind him hehe)
But as always, despite all this, I still love him! hahaha Thank you for updating! I'm so excited about this week long LA trip!!
Author's Response:
YEAH WTF??? Why does the archive always go screwy right after I update -_- But I'm glad that Vikki got it back up pretty quick!!! I'm SO GLAD you liked the chapter. I worked so hard on it so its great that people are liking it and responding well to it. Don't worry I hate Justin too that bastard *smacks him* *pets Charlie*
OMG when that picture of him boarding the commercial flight came out it was like a godsend! I had always planned on him and Charlie flying commercial but I was always kind of hesitant about it like "would Justin REALLY fly commercial?" and lo and behold theres our boy flyin first class lol I'm glad you liked the section! thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Yeah I just kinda noticed that this story has a lot of cliff hanger type chapters. Not like CLIFF HANGERS but stuff that kinda has me being like "shit I need to write the next one!" and it seems like it's got you guys wanting to keep reading so THAT's good lol. Hahaha I know what you mean by right girl. No promises, that's all I'm sayin. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Yeah Charlotte wins the sympathy card for this chapter. Hands down. I dunno about more lovin in LA.....no promises...you know...that's all I'm sayin' lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YES GUH It was so hard to write I just felt so bad for both of them *pets them* I loved the idea of Amelia forcing them to go together because it's just a literal manifestation of what she's doing to them emotionally, forcing them together by being such a bitch lol. I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
"When he’d found out about her past infidelity he’d done both." HMMMM.....anyway.....
OK IT'S OFFICIAL. I AM UTTERLY WITHOUT A DOUBT FUSTRATED AND PISSED OFF WITH EVERY SINGLE CHARACTER IN THIS STORY!!!! I ALSO THINK THEY NEED BEAT DOWNS. THEY ARE ALL DOUCHE-BAGS! UGH!!!!!! THEY NEED BRAIN TRANSPLANTS OR SOMETHING! HOW DUMB CAN YOU BE PEOPLE!? COME ON! IT'S A LOVE-HATE THING. HAHA...
Gosh, I'm so into this I feel like they're real. :)
Now with that said...lol...that was a horrible aftermath, but amazingly written and I loved it. haha. You're awesome Heather!!!
But Justin, that punk!!!! he's a punk! A scared little chicken shit. Guh. He needs to man up. And Amelia is just....*sigh* no word can describe that woman right now. And Charlie is just....I feel for her I do, but just...*sigh* again.
I can't say much here. I don't know where to begin or what to say or think really anymore. I'm just waiting patiently for the next update girl!
Their LA trip should be interesting.
And, I wouldn't count Amelia as totally clueless. That woman, she's sneaky among other things....humph.
Love the unpredictability of this story. It keeps us guessing and on edge. Update soon!
Hope all is well with school!
Author's Response: BRAIN TRANSPLANTS!!! HAHAHAHAHA This is an EXCELLENT solution. Wouldn't it be funny if I or someone else wrote some kind of crack fic where everyone in the story had brain transplants like Justin and Charlotte switched brains and Amelia got...I dunno Felicity's or something...okay its really late here please disregard that last statement lol. I'm glad you feel like they're real!!! I swear they are so real to me its kinda sad hahaha. Glad you're enjoying the rollercoaster ride! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Justin IS a selfish asshole! Thats one of the things I really love about writing his character in this is that he's just so damn flawed. Like it's easy to write him as perfect and I've done that before but making him such a friggin douche has been challenging and a lot of fun lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW! They're all crazy I'm convinced *sigh* Can't make em act right for nothin' I'm working on the update I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
omg...im speechless. you wrote this so beautfiully and perfect.
can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens in LA.
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! This section was particularly hard to write just because the emotions had to be JUST right so I'm glad that it turned out as well as it did and that you appreciate the writing as well as the plotline! Working on the next chapter I swear! thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Oh. My. Heck. My jaw is on the floor right now! This...this is not good. As much as I love Justin and Charlotte together, this is not a good idea.
Yikes! lol...I'm on the edge of my seat! Writer faster!!
Author's Response: I'm trying to write fast I swear!!! School sucks right now *kicks it and its deadlines* LA is gonna be intense. That's all I'm sayin' lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Justin is such a douche in this chapter! Like WTF!?
"...he'd gone and fucked some girl in his office..."
EXCUSE ME DOUCHE-STIN!
She is not SOME GIRL! She's Charlotte a.k.a. The Shining Light in your f/cked up life!
They better get crazy nasty in L.A. or I will take one of Amelia's Jimmy Choos and shove it in her eye, and then shove it up Justin's ass! Or vice versa! Either way, one of these bitches is getting pink eye!
That woman makes me angry. Friggin' $^@#!
Poor Charlie, she has to deal with two idiots.
Author's Response: HAHAHA DOUCHE-STIN!!!!! Best. Name. Ever. I'm glad that you caught the "some girl" part. He's totally trying to justify what he did and its NOT working. You think he'd take a hint *sigh* AND PINK EYE!!! Dude that was funny! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
