Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
im (Anonymous) on Jun 16, 2009 07:39 pm (Chapter 23 pt 2)
please update soon im desperate to know whats gonna happen after their lil fun(but lots of trouble) in the tub!!!
Author's Response: I swear it's in my thoughts! I'm a bridesmaid in my friends wedding and I'm staying with her and her family so it doesn't give me a lot of quiet writing time. The wedding is Saturday and I'm hoping to get it started when I get back home. Keep on top of me I promise I'll get it out as soon as I can! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I swear it's in my thoughts! I'm a bridesmaid in my friends wedding and I'm staying with her and her family so it doesn't give me a lot of quiet writing time. The wedding is Saturday and I'm hoping to get it started when I get back home. Keep on top of me I promise I'll get it out as soon as I can! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on Jun 07, 2009 01:01 pm (Chapter 23 pt 2)
I am having withdrawls here, please update soon, I am dying to know how the rest of their trip goes, I just hope it's as sexy and hot as the last chapter.
Author's Response: I'm working on it I promise. I'm still kind of trying to decide how I want this next section to go and I'm still trying to settle from my trip. Hopefully it'll be out soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I'm working on it I promise. I'm still kind of trying to decide how I want this next section to go and I'm still trying to settle from my trip. Hopefully it'll be out soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
MochaB (Signed) on Jun 03, 2009 02:19 pm (Chapter 23 pt 2)
Ohmydaaaaaaayuuuuum. Lol! OH.MY.FREAKING.GOSH!!! Ugh! Somebody get me a bucket of ice water please! That was so incredibly sexy...and sensual...and on fire! Ohmygosh. I've already said so much on what justin should do and it remains the same, especially since he learned that she's keeping tabs on him. And I'd like to think that his no-balls self is going to do what needs to be done, what we all hope he will do, after this, but I have high doubts that he will. He's let me down so much that I don't have much hope that he'll make the right decision at this moment. Maybe after a few more moments of letting amelia belittle him and treat him like dirt, and after his pride comes back along with his balls, he will. I have hope that he will eventually, but I foresee myself wanting to slap him silly a few more times before I want to hug him silly. Lol! I can't wait to see how the rest of this trip goes. I don't even know what to expect! This story always has my emotions and thoughts all over the place so I will just try to patiently wait for the next update. *sigh* haha. Update soon!! :o)
Author's Response: Everything that you've expressed in your review is EXACTLY how Charlotte feels GUH!!! I'm so glad that that's coming through and you guys are feeling all this stuff right along with her! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Everything that you've expressed in your review is EXACTLY how Charlotte feels GUH!!! I'm so glad that that's coming through and you guys are feeling all this stuff right along with her! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on May 30, 2009 02:29 am (Chapter 23 pt 2)
Okay, that settles it. He needs to leave Amelia and be with Charlie. Like now! This can't wait. LoL. Anyway, you're doing a great job! I can't thank you enough for continuing to update even though you're SO busy. I love it. I can't wait to see where this is gonna go! It's gonna be good I hope. Awesome job! -Traci
Author's Response: GUH THANK YOU!!! One of the more difficult parts of writing this stuff is balancing it with all of my RL obligations and it's so great to know that you guys appreciate it. I'm gonna be a big ball of cheese right now and say that I have the best readers in the world lol *is lame* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: GUH THANK YOU!!! One of the more difficult parts of writing this stuff is balancing it with all of my RL obligations and it's so great to know that you guys appreciate it. I'm gonna be a big ball of cheese right now and say that I have the best readers in the world lol *is lame* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
sarah1988 (Signed) on May 29, 2009 11:21 pm (Chapter 23 pt 2)
Author's Response: YES someone thinking ahead!!! What WOULD be Amelia's grand plan if she were to catch Justin in the clever little trap she has set? Hmmmm lol I'm trying very very hard to get them together but they are being rather obstinate at the moment!!! I'm glad you're loving it! THanks for reading and reviewing!!!
hell what is there to be confused about?? god dammit! i mean they're both in love with each other, obviously. and amelia is a bitch, no doubt.
the only thing i'm kinda concerened about is that: if amelia finds out,...i mean she's gonna get justin the worst way possible, i'm pretty sure she already made up that BIG revenge plan on him if he cheated. oh god she's gonna call the media and ...destroy him. or well she's gonna try cause then...then...justin's gonna bring sexy back (okay that one was lame).
come on,...please let them be together, please?? charlie and justin are made for each other, she cares about him big time. and he really needs someone like charlie in his life, she likes him for personal reasons not like amelia who is only concerned about herself and her reputation.
god i love that story i could ramble on forever so ..now i'm gonna stop.
Author's Response: YES someone thinking ahead!!! What WOULD be Amelia's grand plan if she were to catch Justin in the clever little trap she has set? Hmmmm lol I'm trying very very hard to get them together but they are being rather obstinate at the moment!!! I'm glad you're loving it! THanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 29, 2009 04:40 am (Chapter 23 pt 2)
ok this is what I think will happen - they have an affair in LA and on the way back decide together that it can't work - Trace shows up (I love him in the story) Justin confesses and the loss of Charlie is over powering. Charlie somehow finds out that Amelia is having an affair. Charlie can't hurt Justin and tell him in the meantime finds out she's pregnant and quits to go home keeping her secert. they do get married but Justin finally realizes that his heart is no longer with Amelia and he is desparate for Charlie. Trace bumps into charlie very pregnant and finds out from her Amelia's secert and Charlie's secert. Justin of course is hurt by charlie quiting and running away from him but he soon realizes from Trace the sorid details of his wife and mistress. Then there is a part two divorce and the special love that Justin and Charlie have it won't be easy but in the end true love wins - all this I only hope. just me begging for an update soon please.
Author's Response: Wow that is a REALLY cool idea! See that's what I totally LOVE about writing is that there are so many different ways that you can take the plot. I'm not saying if you're right or if you're wrong because that would spoil the fun ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Wow that is a REALLY cool idea! See that's what I totally LOVE about writing is that there are so many different ways that you can take the plot. I'm not saying if you're right or if you're wrong because that would spoil the fun ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
alimera (Signed) on May 28, 2009 11:45 am (Chapter 23 pt 2)
EEEEEEEEEEEEEK! Holy effing crap. Now what the hell are they going to do?! They're either going to embrace the passion and lust they have for each other and spend the whole trip like the end of this chapter, or they're going to go back to ignoring each other. The second choice is the smarter of the 2 but I don't like it at all. The first choice is AWESOME but they'd be in for a world of hurt when reality hits and they're back in NY. Jeez. I don't know how you're going to fix it but they better end up together!! Lol, update again soon, have fun in Switzerland!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA YES!!!! Exactly the reaction I was looking for! They're kinda screwed (literally *giggle) but that makes for more fun reading anyway...we'll see what happens. Thanks for the well wishes and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA YES!!!! Exactly the reaction I was looking for! They're kinda screwed (literally *giggle) but that makes for more fun reading anyway...we'll see what happens. Thanks for the well wishes and thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Ram4 (Signed) on May 27, 2009 10:03 am (Chapter 23 pt 2)
Author's Response: NO! Why does the internet always eat things? Seriously its kinda ridiculous lol. But thank you for taking the time to type another review to send!!! I've come to realize that with this story I've been doing cliff-hanger-esque type endings of chapters lol It was not intentional I promise! But I'm glad you liked the chapter!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Dang! The internet ate up my long and detailed review!!
I haven't got time to rewrite it :( but the key points were:
a) That I hate you for stopping where you did because I neeeeeeeeed to know how they are going to react this time! I feel like Justin is going to act even crazier than last time but I'm reeeeeeeeally hoping that he doesn't! haha
and b) that I don't really hate you at all because I loved this chapter so so much!
aand lastly c) I'm becoming increasingly scared of Amelia and all the ways she could possibly react if/when she finds out about all this! eeeeeek!
I know you're probably wondering what my original review was like if this is only a summary of it but really it was exactly the same but with more emotion like this: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!! THEY DID WHAT!!! OMG!!!!!! THIS IS BAD! BUT SO SO GREAT AT THE SAME TIME... something like that. hahaha!
Author's Response: NO! Why does the internet always eat things? Seriously its kinda ridiculous lol. But thank you for taking the time to type another review to send!!! I've come to realize that with this story I've been doing cliff-hanger-esque type endings of chapters lol It was not intentional I promise! But I'm glad you liked the chapter!!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
JoJo (Anonymous) on May 26, 2009 05:18 pm (Chapter 23 pt 2)
First time I've read the story and I couldn't stop! Charlotte and Justin seem like a great match, better than Amelia. Amelia is just annoying! And Justin...I feel bad because he seems confused and in his head he knows he loves Amelia but he tries to deny he feels something with Charlotte! I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you're liking it! I agree Justin is just so confused and doesn't know where to turn. Hopefully it's to Charlotte lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you're liking it! I agree Justin is just so confused and doesn't know where to turn. Hopefully it's to Charlotte lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Shufflee (Signed) on May 26, 2009 02:14 pm (Chapter 23 pt 2)
Author's Response: Wow seriously that just made my day! lol I'm really glad you're loving the story!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
do you realize how amazing you are??
I'm in love with this story!!
Author's Response: Wow seriously that just made my day! lol I'm really glad you're loving the story!! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
kahnechick85 (Signed) on May 26, 2009 01:41 pm (Chapter 23 pt 2)
This should be a clue to both of them. Charlie needs to tell Justin how she feels and they need to be together. I love this, PMS.
Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!! You'd think they'd get it *smacks them* I'm glad you're loving it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!! You'd think they'd get it *smacks them* I'm glad you're loving it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Joanne (Anonymous) on May 26, 2009 09:37 am (Chapter 23 pt 2)
You are truly an imazing writter, this story is one of the best! I doubt Justin has the balls yet to leave the B.... but I really think he and Charles have something very special that either one will admit yet. maybe it will take a suddent unexpected welcome from the stork to bring them together. Even then it won't be perfect like Charlie described but worthwhile.
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I'm glad you not only like the story but my writing as well! We'll see where the story goes from here, I'm not giving anythign away just yet ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Wow thank you so much! I'm glad you not only like the story but my writing as well! We'll see where the story goes from here, I'm not giving anythign away just yet ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 26, 2009 08:18 am (Chapter 23 pt 2)
i hope they don't get more awkward around each other after this.
Author's Response: Yeah that's the old double edged sword. Years of pent up sexual frustration manifests itself in some delicious hot tub!sex but then here comes the guilt train...maybe *is mean and vague* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: Yeah that's the old double edged sword. Years of pent up sexual frustration manifests itself in some delicious hot tub!sex but then here comes the guilt train...maybe *is mean and vague* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Tink (Anonymous) on May 26, 2009 03:52 am (Chapter 23 pt 2)
So glad you posted again! I love this story and can't wait to read more, he really needs to break up with amelia
Author's Response: HE DOES!!! Hopefully he wakes up soon but knowing him he's gonna have to mull around about it for awhile *sigh* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HE DOES!!! Hopefully he wakes up soon but knowing him he's gonna have to mull around about it for awhile *sigh* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
SJane (Signed) on May 26, 2009 01:53 am (Chapter 23 pt 2)
*thud*
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Can't ask for more than that! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Can't ask for more than that! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
