I really cannot wait until the next story.  To be honest, this story partly inspired my characterization of Justin in the story I just started.

I'm not sure where you're going with it--but I thought--hmm, what would Justin act like if he really did marry the wench that was the wrong person?  Thus, part of the premise in my story.  So thanks for the inspiration :)

God, I really don't want him to marry Amelia. And your characterization of Charlie is just amazing.  Seriously, you are a tremendously talented writer.

OMG! He was so close! All he needed to say was "Fuck this shit I'm outta here!" and then storm out of the car, jump into the next taxi he sees, arrive on Charlie's doorstep and never look back!

Hahaha despite how lovely this sounds, I doubt it would give me the closure I need. I feel like this story is leading up to some sort of gigantic moment where everything is going to come together and the entire plot is going to implode. Am I right?? No, don't answer that.... hahaha. I think it's all the tension, there's so much tension in this story I practically have to stand up when I read it because I can't keep still!

Also, I hate this crap they are saying about Charlotte! Justin better not believe it for a second!!!

Ok ok so that is all for now. As usual I thought it was an amazingly perfect update!! Thank you so much! 

I'm SO ready for him to be a GROWN ASS MAN and tell that BITCH that he can say whatever the FUCK he wants.  You like how I capatilized all the curse words...I do.  Hehehehehe!  I feel bad for Charlotte but what she's doing to herself is not healthy.  And poor Justin...maybe he'll get out of it.  Not for Charlie but truly for himself.  That shit can kill him.

It's like he's the cheese and Roxie's the grater...shredding the hell outta him.

P.S-Can Amelia have a family member or another friend who's disgustingly rich and completely down to earth?  Not afraid to cut her down like she does so many others?  Just a happy thought.  Awesome update hon!

I swear...Justin is an idiot!  Why is he with Amelia, again?  I can't remember...Someone needs to slap him upside the head.

Great update!  :)

I think the general frustration with Justin has reached an all time high. I don't think I have to add to the sentiment that we all want him to go. But sadly, as he's petrified in this kind of attitude, it'll take a while for him to leave her.

I just recently realized how apt the title is for this story. In a sense, the title expresses the central allegory of the story, Justin's untying himself from Amelia. When you tie a knot, you make sure it's secure and it won't unravel easily. But when you have to undo it, it's all sorts of frustrating and difficult because you realize you've did a heck of a job doing so. And that's Justin for me. He did love her before but now that he realizes how bad she is for him he finds it difficult to leave this life behind.

I would really love to see more his reason for staying with her fleshed out. I get the explanation they were very into each other before and he's become so annoyingly dormat and complacent but it lacks in this aspect for me. It's not just stupidity or stubborness. I just don't find it in his character (the way you've made him) to stay this long in a relationship he isn't happy with. Or I don't know. Maybe I need to re-read again @ __ @;

But again, hats off to the technical and formalistic aspect of this chapter. I can literally empathize with Justin in the suffocating bit in the restaurant.

Lovely update as always~ Will patiently await for the next installment. <3


Ps. I've been itching to point this out since I noticed this error before, and I'm really sorry that I nit-pick but it's only because I covet his shoes, it's Blahnik not Blanik ^^;;;;;