Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
alimera (Signed) on Oct 31, 2009 09:36 am (Chapter 27)
ugh NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. All I have to say lol. Update again soon!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA A very valid feeling overall I would say. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Keediluv (Signed) on Oct 31, 2009 01:45 am (Chapter 27)

I don't know what I'm going to do with them.  He pulls her in then bam...let's her go again.  It's really amazing what love does to people.  It's like Justin doesn't know the difference between loving someone (Amelia) and being in love with someone (Charlie).  I'm ready for someone to have an intervention with shaking involved.  Just to see if something clicks and one of them comes to their senses.

Awesome update...loved it!

Ki

P.S- Thanks for showing the softer side of Amelia...if only for a moment. LOL! 



Author's Response: YES I love your thoughts on the whole situation. Its exactly what I'm trying to portray! I'm glad you appreciated seeing Amelia's more huma side. As I was writing it I wondered if anyone would feel bad for her at all. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



princess (Anonymous) on Oct 31, 2009 12:03 am (Chapter 27)
kill her. that's all. 

Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA I'll definitely consider it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Vikki (Signed) on Oct 30, 2009 09:43 pm (Chapter 27)

this is just.... no this is wrong. i think. maybe. right? lol!

i'm so confused! am i cheering for charlie? or Justin doing the "right" thing and focusing on his relationship with Amelia?

I dont like her... 99% of the time anyway. but at the same time Charlie doesnt derserve her sloppy seconds.

damn you! i'm just as lost as Justin now! lol!



Author's Response: SEE!!! Now you know how I feel. I get all twisted and turned around too a lot of times. Its good to know I have you thinking! And I just wanna say again how awesome I think you are for all the work you put into the archive. Its so great to have this place where everyone is so talented and generous with feedback and I know we wouldn't have it if it wasn't for you Vikki! *hugs* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



meggie (Signed) on Oct 30, 2009 05:02 pm (Chapter 27)
he annoys the piss outta me. ugh. i don't care how much he knows her and how unhappy poor little rich girls childhood was- the bitch is banging some other dude! and i don't care if you, yes you heather, haven't come out and said it, i KNOW she is! hahaha

Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHA yeah Justin's a little punk. And I like the idea that Amelia has had everything she's ever wanted growing up and she even thinks so to this day. I like how its the simple, unattainable things that she doesn't have and she tries to belittle it by thinking it doesn't matter. I also like your theory. I'm not confirming it or denying it but I like it. haha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



ninabina (Anonymous) on Oct 30, 2009 06:11 am (Chapter 27)

OHHHHHHHH, it's killing me.  How can he do this to himself?  I just.  I don't get it.

 

Good for Charlotte, though--trying to figure out her future.  But it just makes me so angry that Justin doesn't see that he really loves Charlotte and that he just loves the idea of Amelia beause he's afraid of change. 



Author's Response: I KNOW!!! Justin is such a freakin masochist I sweaaaar. And you hit the nail right on the head with him being afraid of change. Now if only we could get his dumb ass to see it haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Tina (Anonymous) on Oct 30, 2009 03:28 am (Chapter 27)
Ugh, every relationship is this story is frustrating.

Author's Response: I KNOW RIGHT!!! I've said it from the beginning this whole story is a character study, how their relationships with each other affect their other relationships. Its such a challenge to write and so much fun. I'm glad that you're as frustrated with them as I am haha. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Devon (Signed) on Oct 29, 2009 11:45 pm (Chapter 27)
*throws said rocks*

Author's Response: Hey if you kids can't play nice I'll make you go inside hahaha. Its so funny to see people's reactions to Amelia in this chapter. That was my main question at the end of this. "will anyone feel bad for her?" Its nice to see its kind of drawn down the middle with people being fed up and some people feeling something for her. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Oct 29, 2009 11:34 pm (Chapter 27)
Why in the hell does Justin think that he has to be a freaking martyr? He always has this incessant need to fix people, and he can't. Thats the reason it's so easy to be with Charlie other than Roxanne. Charlie may not have all her shit together, but damn it at least she's working on it and not pushing it aside or putting all the pent up saddness and anger onto someone else like Roxanne. Her relationship is the only thing that she thinks she can control and she knows, she HAS to fucking know, that sooner rather than later she won't be in control of that because Justin will have had enough of her shit and walked away so she's grasping at straws. Thus, slowly killing me in the process because JUSTIN HAS TO BE FREAKIN...god, I don't know. LOL. Wow, that was a really long sentence. If you'd even call it a sentence. Girl, seriously. Every stinkin chapter I am getting even more hooked. And i hate to admit it...but I actually felt bad for Roxie. *ducks from the rocks being thrown*

Author's Response: You know I never really realized it before but he IS such a freakin martyr!!! Like he's constantly thinking he can fix his relationships and his life and the responsibiility of it falls on him. I was wondering if anyone would feel bad for Roxie in this chapter. She's such a mondo bitch most of the time but I think it was good for everyone to see her show her more vulnerable side. I really wanna do a crack fic where she and Justin do couples counciling. I think it would be hilarious haha /random. Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!!



imikimi (Signed) on Oct 29, 2009 11:11 pm (Chapter 27)
First of all THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!
Secondly *sigh*... yeah you're right justin it all comes back to the same thing.
I really don't know how to feel about him. I'm hating him and feeling sorry for him all at the same time. It happens in every chapter - I love him at the beginning for being so cute and then hate him at the end for being such a pussy. I'm glad charlie has decided to (kind of) move on. I just want her to hurt Justin in someway so that he gets a dose of his own medicine. Great update as usual. The kitchen scene was so hot but i don't want to think about it because i'm hating him right now. And i have a request Pls don't take this long to update. It literally hurts to stay so long without my charlstin fix. I know you're thinking I have no life haha. btw i'm loving all your dirty tags lol.

Author's Response: Awww no one has ever thanked me for updating before! You're welcome haha! That's the thing I really love about Justin's character is you can just hate his whimpy guts but still love the crap outta him. It's what makes him so fun to write. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!!



Devon (Signed) on Oct 29, 2009 10:59 pm (Chapter 27)
Justin is pissing me the eff off. I love this story, but it just makes me realize how emotionally involved I am with it.

Justin, you can't be all flirting, teasing, and fucking Charlotte one minute and then when Amelia shows some sense of warped emotion be cold and distant toward her. IT'S DRIVING ME CRAZY.

Sometimes I really want Charlotte to tell Justin where to shove it and not exactly where she likes it to be shoved. *SMH*

This story has my feelings all over the place, but most importantly I want Charlotte and Justin to be okay. I can't see them having a stable relationship even if Justin were to break up with Amelia, so even if I hate the very womb she was created from ...she does serve a purpose.

I dunno. Great as always, hopefully we can get something soon! This story is my loveee.

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA "hate the very womb she was created from" that is seriously epic. I'm gonna start saying that haha. I'm glad to hear that its not just me that the characters are driving crazy. The back and forth back and forth is killing me too! I'm glad you liked it and hopefully the next chapter will come quick *crosses fingers* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



musicmel (Signed) on Oct 29, 2009 09:08 pm (Chapter 27)

This seriously made my week.. but I already told you that. I want to scream at Justin sometimes. I am glad that he and Charlotte had this talk about their "relationship." I can totally see her just walking away from Justin. She is strong in that way.



Author's Response: YAY that's such an awesome compliment! I love how their talk wasn't even really a talk like she ventured onto the subject and he pretty much shut her down. He can't avoid the subject for long though. and you're right she IS strong. For awhile she kinda turned all wishy washy but some of her real character is coming back again and I'm liking writing her more and more now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



violet (Signed) on Oct 29, 2009 08:27 pm (Chapter 27)
Gah! There's something so... hot... about them having almost!sex in the kitchen while Amelia's upstairs...

And NO! They're not good! Wtf is wrong with you Justin?! *screams* And I can't even feel sorry for Amelia. Don't know why, not even an "Awe, her Mom didn't come to her shower" came to mind... Hmmm...

MISSED this while I was away! Missed YOU! *smooch* Awesome update!

Author's Response: YAY JO! So glad you're back!!! We miss you round JTPC! I know I know Justin is a rediculous moron *smacks him* I was wondering if anyone would have any sympathy for Amelia. I mean so far she's been horrible but this is like one of the first time I've portrayed her in a really human way. It was fun to see how that played out! Now update Let Me Be Your Shelter haha! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ram4 (Signed) on Oct 07, 2009 02:50 am (Chapter 26)

I only just realised that I didn't leave a review for this last chapter!!

I'm so excited!! I just know something big is going to happen soon! but I'm also scared because I have no idea what it is that is going to happen but at the same time that just adds to the excitement! Oh the joy of reading fiction! haha.

I really hope Charlotte gets everything sorted out because I hate seeing her life turn shitty because of stupid Amelia!!!!

Anyway, I loved the chapter and I can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response: Yeah there's a pretty huge build in this story. I never really realized it until a few chapters ago but its all leading to something pretty big and now I'm all nervous about it hahaha. I'm glad you're liking it so far and I'm hacking away at this next chapter I promise! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



musicmel (Signed) on Sep 25, 2009 03:42 pm (Chapter 26)

I have been readying this over at JJB(Hillbillyrckstr) for a very long time. I am in love this this story.

Of course there are many times that I would like to shove my 4" heel in Amelia's eye but I think she is a great character in the story. Plus I can't wait to see her finally (maybe) get what she deserves!

Keep the chapters coming Heather!



Author's Response: YAY hahaha I love that Amelia drives people crazy. Poor Justin needs some company lol Thanks for coming over here and dropping me a review!!!





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