Comments For (Un)Tying the Knot
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 31, 2008 01:48 am (Chapter 13)
What a fantastic chapter! and so worth the wait. Awesome job once again Heather :) I can't wait to see where this goes. Char and Justin seriously NEED to hook up already! C'mon! Amelia is ALL wrong for him. LoL. Anyway, as usual great job! I loved the interaction between Char, Justin, Rachel and Trace! Great stuff! Hope more is coming soon! ttyl -Traci

Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you liked it!!! More should be coming soon. I'm interntless until Wednesday so I should have some time to work on the next section. I'm swinging for next weekend but no promises lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Ambs07 (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 11:30 pm (Chapter 1)
That was so freakin funny i tried so hard not to laugh too hard cuz my little brother is asleep on the couch.. but i dont think it worked... Now the Amelia business i hate her even more after this chapter. Poor justin is whipped, he needs to grow a set (like trace said) and stick up for himself. I love how he went back in an got another peice of cobbler Go Justin! Omg i was so hoping Charlie and Justin would just kiss! there so perfect for each other!!!!! Grr just get rid of Amelia's bitch ass and get with charlie already! Well it was a great update can't wait for more! please update soon!

Author's Response: HAHAHAHA I'm glad it made you laugh! And NO one not even Amelia gets between Justin and his Granny's peach cobbler hahaha Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MochaB (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 09:13 pm (Chapter 13)
i absolutely loved this chapter. it was so freaking wonderful. the dialogue was just awesome and had me rolling the whole time. and it made me feel so many ways. reading about the interactions between justin and amelia are so uncomfortable because i feel so mad that she controls him so much, and there is no reason behind it. maybe he's stuck in who she was in the past, but he needs to come to terms with the change. how can you let somebody treat your family the way she does? she feels like she's better than justin's family. the family she is marrying into. he's not going to just be part of her family, she'll be part of his family, and for her to treat and behave that way with them...i mean, his grandma pats her shoulder stiffly, then pats charlotte's and squeezes it too. amazing. genuine affection for your grandson's fiance's assistant who you just recently met, but none (rightfully so) for your grandson's fiance. everything amelia does revolves around social status, material possessions, and money, not feelings. justin voicing in his head all these little things he has come to notice and appreciate about charlotte, stomach curling, licking his lips, and body shivers...i love it!! then the end...man...i figured they wouldn't actually kiss, but that was awesome anyway. what trace said may have hurt, but the truth hurts sometimes. maybe justin needs to hear more of it. i'm wondering what charlotte's waiting on too. i'm waiting on the thing that snaps them together. gaaah. sorry so long. i got carried away. lol update soon please! again, wonderful chapter. :o)

Author's Response: YAAAAY this was such a great review! I love your thoughts on how Amelia fits into (or doens't rather) Justin's life and his family! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



brittbratt (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 07:20 pm (Chapter 13)
EEEEP I love this chapter!!  The dialogue was AWESOME (and hilarious).  I especially love the reference to Trace's hobbit hole hahahaha :)

Author's Response: YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY Bish you know I love the hobbit hole line *snigger* Thanks for readin' and reviewin'!!!



Karlita (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 06:40 pm (Chapter 13)

I love this line.  I keep re-reading it. 

She turns to him, placing a hand on his chest her green eyes crashing into his and she pats him gently, trying to soothe the ache in his chest and he marvels that she even knows it’s there.

So good!  Grr, they need do it already or at least some kissing!  Great update. 



Author's Response: GUH I love that line too!!! One of my favorites from the section. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



hp5010 (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 04:34 pm (Chapter 13)

Crap, damn Amelia, just go away.

Loved the chapter, can't wait for more!



Author's Response: Things would be so much better without Amelia I would agree. But Justin loves her *smacks him* lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



a_nonymous (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 03:33 pm (Chapter 13)
OMG WHY DIDN'T THEY KISS OR SOMETHING?!

Author's Response: Rooooz they can't kiiiiiiiiiiss Justin is engaaaaaaaged *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 01:49 pm (Chapter 13)
That bitch needs to go back to NY and leave everyone alone. Justin and Charlie are perfect for each other. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: I love everyone's strong reactions to Amelia and also everyone rooting for Charlie and Justin...although I don't know why since Justin is engaged *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Vessy (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 12:43 pm (Chapter 13)
great work!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



alimera (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 11:18 am (Chapter 13)
Well that was tons of fun, until the wicked witch broke up their party and Trace was a little too honest--but maybe that's something Justin had to hear. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Yeah Amelia's pretty much the biggest killjoy ever lol and Trace probably would have never said that if he'd been sober but I agree it was probably something Justin needed to hear. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



Shufflee (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 07:44 am (Chapter 13)

She was waiting for kiss.duh

where's that damn kiss, already??????



Author's Response: Kiss? What kiss? *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 02:33 am (Chapter 13)
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm...I can't predict the future here since you're the writer, but uh, this made for quite the interesting and entertaining chapter. loved it. lol. I won't really say much on what I'm thinking yet. I'd write a novel if I did lol. I'll just wait to see what other goodies you have in store for us. hehe. update soon.

Author's Response: Awww but I love the predictions! I'm glad you have some thoughts on where its going though. I love when you can read something and your brain spirals out in all the different directions it can go. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



wittylyricst27 (Anonymous) on Oct 29, 2008 01:38 am (Chapter 1)
Would they just kiss already. lol Great update love that drunken dirty twenty questions.  UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Charlotte and Justin? Kiss? He's engaged!!! *snigger* Glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



SJane (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 12:49 am (Chapter 13)
good at home drunk times...and oh the confessions lol i thought j had it i the bag but gotta love Charlie...it's the quiet ones you have to worry about lol.

Glad they are feeling the sexual chemistry and shame on Justin for missing the funeral Bros over hos man lol

Author's Response: YESSSSSSS that's EXACTLY what I was going for with the confessions! Always the quiet ones indeed *snigger* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!



MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 29, 2008 12:06 am (Chapter 13)

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!  So exciting!!! He likes Chariiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiie!!! I'm so excited!!! They almost maybe sort of kind of kissed!!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!! Please update soon. Dude, your writing is so fucking good. That is all. And I'm glad Trace told him about the granddad thing. Hmph. Okay, done.



Author's Response: HAHAHAHA A SCREAM!!! Gotta love those! Thanks so much for appreciating not just the story but the writing as well. It means a lot. Next update in a couple weeks or so. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!





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