i love it. this story just keeps getting better and better. 

update soon please! 

Okay when I read this story I sometimes forget that I am reading fiction and not reading what REALLY is in JC's head. Like that last paragraph seems like something that could really truely be going through his mind. Like you just opened up a part of his head saw what he was thinking and put it in your story. I LOVE that you make is so realistic, totally sucks me in...

Oh and why hasn't Rachel told him yet?? I realize that they were on opposite sides of the country in this chapter, but I am dying to see how JC handles the situation!! Don't make me come after you throwing shoes. Trust me I have good aim (just ask my roommate).  

Great update hon! I'm anxious for Rachel to come clean about her traumatic past so that JC can better understand her! Hell yeah..he  needs to work on his life..he's been lonely before Rachel!

LOL...LOVING the olympic swimming! *Whew*...