SJane (Signed) on Aug 03, 2008 02:48 am (The Last One)
I loved this story I love how u added sly little cameos of other ppl and I loved how she made him the better man he wanted to be but he also made her come to life



d_simplicity (Signed) on May 27, 2008 09:44 pm (The Last One)
I remember reading this some time ago, but read it over anyway because I couldn't rememeber how it ended or maybe I read it while you were still writing it. Anyway, this is an amazing little story which I loved every minute of and would love if you made a sequeal lol. But it's still a great story on it's own. I'm glad they had a happy ending but sad that Justin couldn't find it in his heart to forgive his mother. I'll just take it as eventually he comes around yes? hehe.



calinewgirl (Signed) on May 22, 2008 01:29 pm (The Last One)
I absolutely loved this story! The dialogue was seriously some of the best I've read. Too funny lol. That's how my guy friends and I speak to each other, so I felt very akin to it. I hope you maybe think about making a part 2 (even a DJ/JT series hint, hint) to this story if you haven't already. Kudos and well done!

~N~



classicbeauty (Signed) on May 22, 2008 03:57 am (The Last One)
OMG!

O M to da G!!!!! that shit was off the hain!

what do i gotta do for like a squeal it can be short or loooooooooooong, i mean i cant walk away from that. im going to go to sleep dreaming of what could it be.

what do i gotta do? beg? pay? something anything? free coffee at starbucks? justin timberlake first child?

think about it, let me know, i can make things happen!

*leans against the desk and holds head* its just absoulately too too much mooooore!

L O V E...this story and me, its love.

Dani

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it deserves more, but you get my drift





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