Comments For Paradise Lost
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 07:42 pm (The Nature Of Lying)

Just had a chance to catch up on this chapter...and I must say that I think Justin Timberlake is a pussy and I think he should have come out with the truth.  I mean, Addy could very well be upset, but I feel that they've gotten to know each other enough now that she wouldn't care one way or another about his fame...

ah...you do this on purpose.  Because now this problem is just going to hang over his head even longer which means the blow up will be even bigger.

Gah...I think I'm entirely too involved. lol



Author's Response: Me? On purpose? How could you say such a... oh, wait, yeah. Fair point.



alimera (Signed) on Jul 19, 2008 08:40 am (The Nature Of Lying)
Oh boy, he's digging himself a DEEP one. How on Earth will he be able to get himself out of the doghouse when Addy finds out the truth? Ugh. Dreading that moment! Update again soon.

Author's Response: The boy is headed for China at this rate...



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 09:11 pm (The Nature Of Lying)
Ughhhh. I thought he would finally come clean. But he just has to draaaag it out. Someone should tell him that he's only making things worse for himself. Tisk tisk. Great chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Someone should.. unfortunately anybody that knows enough to do so has been left in America *lol*



Gigi (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 04:22 pm (The Nature Of Lying)

Watch something happens to Lily's flight and she ends up staying.



Author's Response: *mouth is zipped*



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 11:57 am (The Nature Of Lying)
That bastard got so lucky! Ah, when the truth comes out, it's really going to get ugly. It's really going to hurt Addy that she was lied to yet again. Man, Justin is a piece of work! He's sitting there saying that being lied to and hurt is terrible, but he's setting her up for the same thing! :( Not cool.

Author's Response: You'd think that this would occur to the boy, but no...



glowbug917 (Signed) on Jul 18, 2008 09:04 am (The Nature Of Lying)

Hollie, I love you most of all for curing my work-induced boredom.  

Justin, you stupid boy. You get presented an opportunity to come clean and you don't use it. That little superficial lie is going to come back and bite him in the ass way harder than he thinks, lol. 

I love the 'untruth' bit. Sort of reminds me of Alice in  Wonderland, the whole unbirthday thing. And Justin's inner monologue is hysterical, in the general miserable self-deprecating way of course. 

 



Author's Response: Work induced boredom sucks, happy to be assistance. Especially when I get such amusing reviews and JJB comments out of it! :o)





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