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SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Sep 02, 2008 06:58 pm (Chapter 4)

where to begin....

1) they need to try and get to know Hellena....

2)Britney's (future bald-headed) ass cant be callin NO body out they nameor even bring up the whole race card. She has GOT to be on fukin CRACK cause if she called me out my name or said some shit like she did....homegirl would be gettin knocked the fuck out. (sorry....her comments hit home....)

3) Justin needs to just admit to Hellena that he like her...cause WE know she like him back....

4) Lynn should've made sure that Justin paid attention to the fact that he has a SIBLING(im using that word loosely....VERY LOOSELY)

5) Hellena...she needs to be more out there. I get that she's scared but she should know as long as Justin or Mama Lynn is there...nothing is gonna happen to her.

 

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!! I THINK U ARE AND AMAZING WRITER AND SHOULD NEVER STOP WRITING!!!! :)




SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Sep 02, 2008 06:58 pm (Chapter 4)

where to begin....

1) they need to try and get to know Hellena....

2)Britney's (future bald-headed) ass cant be callin NO body out they nameor even bring up the whole race card. She has GOT to be on fukin CRACK cause if she called me out my name or said some shit like she did....homegirl would be gettin knocked the fuck out. (sorry....her comments hit home....)

3) Justin needs to just admit to Hellena that he like her...cause WE know she like him back....

4) Lynn should've made sure that Justin paid attention to the fact that he has a SIBLING(im using that word loosely....VERY LOOSELY)

5) Hellena...she needs to be more out there. I get that she's scared but she should know as long as Justin or Mama Lynn is there...nothing is gonna happen to her.

 

I LOVE THIS STORY SO FAR!!! I THINK U ARE AND AMAZING WRITER AND SHOULD NEVER STOP WRITING!!!! :)




Whtny (Anonymous) on Sep 02, 2008 01:11 pm (Chapter 4)
Ugh BRIT, I want LENA  to beat her ass,lol





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