heartsevolve (Signed) on Jun 15, 2010 04:56 pm (What's Wrong)
Ahh, this is the first story i've read where I seriously don't know who he's going to end up with...if ANYONE. And I love it :)



Jessicalli (Signed) on Jul 23, 2008 10:46 pm (What's Wrong)
Yeah I really really like Jess and not just because we have the same name LOL. She's really sweet and I think she will def. take care of him. It sucks she has to be against her own friend like that but I love how she is standing up for Justin. Another great chapter.

Author's Response: Awww, I'm glad you like her! She's definitely got both of their best interests at heart, so it could get difficult for her, but she's got her head and heart in the right place. Thanks so much for reading; I really appreciate it!



toesinthesand (Signed) on Jul 22, 2008 05:03 pm (What's Wrong)
Ahhh I can't believe she cheated. I feel so bad for justin!! i wish she would just tell him though she's making it so much worse. Can jessica at least tell him? and i get the feeling he will go after her on his new album!!

Author's Response: Yeah, he's a little bit fucked up, it appears, huh? At this point, it's hard for Talis to make it any worse, but she's definitely doing it! Jess telling him sounds easy enough... I dunnoooo. And you're probably right about the album -- it wouldn't be Justin if he didn't! Thanks for the review, hun!



princess (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 08:55 pm (What's Wrong)
Can i kill her? pweeaazzze? pwetty pweaze? *holds hand up to ear* Yes? Do you really mean it? *jumps up an down clapping hands in delight and runs off to get chainsaw and mike myers mask* More soon lady. This is tony the tiger great.

Author's Response: *imitates Brad in Mr. & Mrs. Smith* Noooo, you're not gonna kill her. lol. Hey, maybe someone else will, though! I mean, probably not, but anything is possibleeeee! I'm glad you're diggin' it, though. Thanks for reviewing!



a_nonymous (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 07:05 pm (What's Wrong)
Aww! I feel so bad for Justin. I'm glad Jess is looking out for him, even if he says he doesn't need the help.

Author's Response: Yeah, I'm definitely glad he has a Jess too, because he's gonna need her, whether he knows to acknowledge it or not. Don't worry, he's in repair; it'll get better. Thanks so much for reading!



just a girl (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 06:54 pm (What's Wrong)
Uggghhh she needs to tell him the truth!

Author's Response: She does need to tell him, but will she? I dunnnooooo. Stay tuned!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 05:21 pm (What's Wrong)
Dang!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now that's some messy shit. All these lives: Justin, Talis, Jess and Rie are going to be intertwined in something crazy huh? I just know, you're about to take us on one hell of a ride girl. lol But I can't wait! That's all I have to say for now. LOL. update soon.

Author's Response: Yep, Talis has created this big ridiculous mess for all these people to get their hands dirty in. Yeah, it might get a liiiittle crazy, but hopefully it'll be in a good way. And more importantly, I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for the review, girl!



MissTasha (Signed) on Jul 20, 2008 01:47 pm (What's Wrong)
Damn. Twice? And once in his house? That's out cold. SMH. But she owes him an explanation and she needs to man up and tell him what she did. It's selfish for her to refuse to talk to him or tell him what happened. I completely agree with Jessica on that. Talis isn't protecting anyone but herself by keeping her secret. I'm glad that Jess is being stern with her and refusing to let her get away with the shit she's tying to pull. I'm glad Talis had enough guts and honesty to not go through with the marriage after cheating but the way she went about the whole thing is just wrong. I'm liking Jessica more and more in this story. I think if Justin starts hooking up with Rie, I'll be rooting for him to ditch her for Jess. She's a cool chick that would really take care of him and be good for him. I want those two crazy kids to get together. Hint, hint. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, she definitely did him dirty and now she won't even own up to it. It's sad, isn't it? I mean, I guess I wouldn't know what to do after that either, but after all that time with Justin, I wouldn't go all punkass like that. The girl has issues lol! But yeah, Jess isn't gonna play that game (for now, anyway). And she probably is the best choice for Justin, but I'm not sure when/if either of them will see that! Stayyy tuned! Thanks for the awesome review, hun.





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