heartsevolve (Signed) on Jun 19, 2010 12:03 am (Just To Rub It In)
P.S. I'M A TOTAL ASSHOLE AND MEANT RIE BUT SAID RAE. Sorrrryyyyyyy.



heartsevolve (Signed) on Jun 19, 2010 12:03 am (Just To Rub It In)

So...not gonna lie..Rae was kind of a bitch this chapter. I'm so for Justin/Jessica right now, but I DON'T EVEN KNOW IF THAT'S A COUPLE IN YOUR STORY!

 Seriously I am so blown away by the mystery of pairings in this story! Normally you can totally tell who's going to end up together, but this could just go any which way and I love it! :) 

Sort of. Haha. I JUST REALLY WANT JUSTIN WITH JESSICA :(




Jessicalli (Signed) on Aug 15, 2008 07:12 pm (Just To Rub It In)
Ohh I'm so happy for Jess, it looks like she is slowly getting out of from under Justin and Talis and I think she deserves to be happy after dealing with those 2 for so long. I think its cute that her and Justin dated a little and I wonder if she ever resented Talis for staying with him all these years. Oh and Justin throwing her stuff out the window was great! I love where this is going, great work!



mzmillion (Signed) on Aug 15, 2008 12:12 am (Just To Rub It In)
Ash, you know you always write GREAT stories so I'm not surprised that is one is great also....read all the chapters today and I must admit when I read that jessica biel was a main character, I was a little put off but......I'm IN LOVE with Rie and Justin, I even like Talis' needy ass! Can't wait for more....

Author's Response: Eep! THANK YOU so much! And what's wrong with Jessica Biel?! I luff her lol. Seriously though, so glad you're diggin' on Rie and Justin, 'cause loOoOoOoOoOve them. Liking Talis though, that has to be some kind of precedent you're setting. I think that's the first time I've heard that! lmao. Again, thank you x297927 for reading and reviewing!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Aug 13, 2008 06:25 pm (Just To Rub It In)

So...I just got caught up on these last two chapters (amazing sex scene, btw...it was hot!) and is it bad that I don't feel any bit of sadness for Talis that JT kicked her out? even on Christmas....I dunno...I don't like the chick, lol.

and again...I'm getting way too involved ;)



Author's Response: Aww, thank you very much. And no, it's quite all right that you don't feel bad for Talis! *whispers* You weren't really supposed to. You may never like her, and that is a-okay lol. I love that you're getting involved though, I hope it stays that way!



tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Aug 13, 2008 03:56 pm (Just To Rub It In)
Every time I read those Rihanna lyrics, I laugh, because they're so hilariously cruel. I liked this chapter -- I think everyone is at the point that they should be. Justin finally kicked her out, and seems to be "happy" with Rie. Talis has been literally forced to stop trying to get the life back that she had before she walked out on her wedding. Rie seems content with life (I LOVE her character, by the way). And Jessica is still trying to be perfect for everyone. Awesome! haha I'm waiting for the Rie-Justin-Jessica-Ryan-Talis pentagon? to form... Trouble is a-brewin'

Author's Response: Yeah, I think I laughed all the way through the song the first time I heard it lmao. But it was fitting! And yay! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Everyone (save Talis) is doing okay for themselves, and although that's kinda boring, it's necessary sometimes! So glad you love Rie (in all caps too!) because she's my favoritest person evar and that just makes me happy. And yeah, Jess will never stop trying to perfect, so someone will proooobably have to stop her, yes? Which very well could cause that whole pentagon thing you see on the horizon. Ooh, stay tuned! :giggle Thanks so very much for the review, Taina! Love hearing from ya.



just a girl (Signed) on Aug 13, 2008 10:46 am (Just To Rub It In)
Damn I kind of feel bad for talis now, not sure why. that's a tough break on christmas even though she brought it on herself. But this made me reallize how much I love rie. She was trying to be respectful even though talis was being a total bitch and deserved justin kicking her out. Oh well., i'm glad jess is getting her own life even though she may not want to it looks like she knows she needs it. Loved it, update soon!

Author's Response: Don't feel bad for Talis! Don't forget that it's all her fault! And yeah, Rie is a class act, unlike SOME people, right? lol. I'm glad/excited for Jess too, because she could be onto something great if she lets herself. I just haven't decided if I'm going to let herself. Ah, stay tuned! lol Thanks for the review, girl!



MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 11:13 pm (Just To Rub It In)
Good for Jess. She can't let Justin and Talis and their bullshit take up all her time and attention. She has to have her own life outside of them and they aren't making that easy. It was harsh for Justin to throw Talis' stuff outside but I am glad that he kicked her out. She deserved it. And clearly she doesn't know how to cooperate with a request if she's asked nicely. It's her own damn fault, I say. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, Jess was definitely getting lost in the shuffle there, with all their hotmessness lol. Ryan needs to keep her phone for a while and just let them do what they do! And Justin... well, he's hurt right now, so he's allowed to be mean. It's better than releasing a song about it! lmao. This is all on Talis anyway, because they'd be married now otherwise! But that goes without saying, huh? Thanks for the review, girl!



SJane (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 10:44 pm (Just To Rub It In)
and the bitch is finally out lol mind you i feel bad that yeah it's christmas time but if she didn't have the shop open for other ppl in the first place she wouldn't be in the place she is now.

I'm glad Ryan picked up on that fact with Jess i was tarting to wonder when she was going to live her own life and not through her friends. Loved the update girl

Author's Response: Yeah, don't feel bad. She shouldn't have been all bitchass the two previous months, right?! lol And yeah, Jess needs to stop living vicariously through Talistin, and Ryan juuuust might be the guy to help her do that. We shall see! Thanks for the review!



princess (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 10:25 pm (Just To Rub It In)
i have to give jess a round of applause for putting her foot down with Talis. damn that is one selfish little heffa. Ok more soon. You know you are the best ever right. ok mwah. buh bye now

Author's Response: Haha, round of applause. Yeah, she deserves one for not falling into that trap yet again. Talis... SMH. She'll probably get better too, though, I have to say. Maybe. At any rate, THANK YOU. But really, you're the best ever. Srsly.



band nerd (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 10:16 pm (Just To Rub It In)

Hahahahahahah!!! I love that Jess won't drop everything for Talis' ass!  Yay!

 I really hope things go well for Jess/Ryan.  And yay for Justin's rage!  Awesome chapter! 

and as I always say MORE MORE MORE!



Author's Response: Yes, Jess is finally learning her lesson! Who knew. To be honest, I'm not sure what I'm gonna do with Jess and Ryan now, so... I hope it works out for them too lmao. And Justin's rage for Talis is always fun, isn't it? Thanks again for reading, I love hearing from you!



band nerd (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 09:39 pm (Just To Rub It In)

OMG I'M SO GLAD I CHECKED ONCE AGAIN BEFORE I WENT TO BED!  I haven't even read this and yay! Gymnastics AND a new chapter . .life's good! 

 *off to read*



Author's Response: LOL you're cracking me up!





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