megzor (Signed) on May 23, 2010 10:36 pm (
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yea, so what i said about jess in the second chapter.. i take it back. she is a whore.
sChErZo (Signed) on Dec 30, 2008 02:28 am (
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ok, so i probably should've reviewed earlier...but this songis one of my absolute favorites! ...and this chapter just made me look at it in a different light...not bad, just different...lol. great story so far, but what else is there to expect from you?
just a girl (Signed) on Sep 03, 2008 06:25 pm (
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oh wow, i am stunned! I can't believe he slept with jess. i thought forsure that he would tell her he was in love with rie and that it wouldn't be goin down like that. he just effed up big time!!! unless he's thinking about leaving Rie in which case i am all for a rumble because she can not go without a fight. i love her so and i just don't understand this, he was so happy with rie just a few minutes before wasn't he?? whyyyyy?? Please please pretty please update soon!!!
Marissa (Signed) on Aug 31, 2008 07:32 pm (
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What the f??? Jess annoys the crap out of me and then you throw us for a loop and a half with Justin sleeping with her?!? You're a mean, mean person! lol
Well, no...great writing and please, make it better with Justin and Rie. I like them together.
MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 08:14 pm (
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What. The. Fuck. Just. Happened? What. The. Fuck? What. The. Fuck? What. The. Fuck? I don't even know what else to say. I wanted Jess to tell him how she felt and I wanted him to feel the same way. I was not expecting this. Wow. I want them together but this scandilous shit was not the plan. Wow. This is the best chapter yet. I loved it. I'm shocked but I really, really loved it. Please update soon. Wow. Just wow.
kkhbtb (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 02:46 pm (
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I know i'm a little behind in the feedback, but i've had some family issues so i'm a little behind...
down to business... WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO ME?!?!?! I was just getting over the Rie and Talis rumble now... now i want a Rie and Jess rumble... i really like Rie... This is going to suck isn't it? damn you!! hahaha :)
Vessy (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 09:51 am (
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Once again great chapter!
sarah1988 (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 09:48 am (
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sorry to say it but i'm all for jessica and justin. i mean...that's so romantic. yeah rie is alright and saved him out of his misery but jessica is...adorable in this story.
so...TEAM JESSICA!!! =)
alimera (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 08:33 am (
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Oh wow, now what's going to happen? I wish I could know what is in Justin's head right now...is he regretting sleepingwith Jess, or did he just realize that he loved her instead of Rie? Either way Rie is NOT going to be happy...update again soon!
Jessicalli (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 07:22 am (
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OMG! NO NO NO! I could kill Jessica but I feel bad for her at the same time LOL. I can't believe this just happened. What is Justing doing? OMG! That was an a mazing chapter but OMG. This is BAD. Ahhhhhh great work!
Shufflee (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 03:19 am (
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Woah
tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 01:53 am (
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Not only did you use my Sara Bareilles AMAZING-ness in this chapter (I about stopped reading and immediately started a review when I saw the lyrics... no lie) but you just had to include some CRAZY FOOLISHNESS in this chapter to torture me.
Where it stops, nobody knowssss hahaha. In the words of John Mayer/Kanye, I hate you and I love you at the very same time. I can't wait for the bitchassness to continue!
SJane (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 01:47 am (
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I just...really don't know who is at fault in this situation. Justin because he should know if he feels for jess like that and if not why sleep with her and wat about Rie. But then jess i'm sorry but he's not going to leave being all weird then do a 180 and feel the same and bang your in bed just.... i kinda wnat to smack both of them lol
princess (Signed) on Aug 29, 2008 01:17 am (
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NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! *clutches heart and falls to the floor* I thought you said it wouldn't be that bad. I feel like I just died a little inside. *Hangs head and discreetly wipes tear*
classicbeauty (Signed) on Aug 28, 2008 11:03 pm (
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I know I already left a review, but i just had to say how i love these characters.
Like this story came at the prefect time for right because i know personally, the things that Rie said in her fear list touch me. because I have some of those same fears, as im sure others do. but i think princess said it best about a chapter, "just made one of the shittiest weeks ever worth it. You are truly talented to be able to take us away from our problems with this beautifully complicated...", but thats how i feel about this story.
Rie, i love how she is vunerable at home but im public you never know, the fear commitment, im not going to lie, makes me want to make an early resolution right now. and her losing her mom made me sad.
Justin, love the fear of close objects and the way you showed it at the begin of the story, makes this so addicting.
Jess, its a love hate thing, cause i love her as the best friend, but she needs to back up and give Rie and Justin fifty feet man. like im happy she let it out that she loves him, but damn, i hope he didnt fuck it up with Rie. whatever happen to just being b.f.f.l best friends for life
Kelis or whatever- B*tch (will do), cant stand her, how you going to be Jess b.f. and tell her shes not getting any younger? what kind of shit is that. Got some nerve to want everyone else life to shut down, just cause karma came and bit her in the ass. B please!
so much more to say, not enough room nor time to say it now. but dont be surpise if i do catch up on my feedback later.
Dani
