heartsevolve (Signed) on Jun 19, 2010 03:53 pm (
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"Last night, I watched Justin on SNL, seeing that no matter how low he gets, he’s still sitting on top of the rest of the world. Depressing."
OH DAMN, WHAT A GOOD LINE. But really, I love Jessica and Justin in this story, and I'm sort of sad it didn't work out that way...at least I think it won't?
BUT THEN THERE'S ALL THIS WONDERFUL WONDERFUL INTERACTION BETWEEN RIE AND JUSTIN AND IDK HOW TO FEEL.
Your dialog is seriously some of the best I've ever read on this site. It's funny and serious and sometimes profound and that letter from Tina made me cryyyyy cry cry.
This is seriously a wonderful story and I'm sad to see it's almost over.
mzmillion (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:35 pm (
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Ashley, what is with you and your abhorrance of happy ever after stories, yours are too real. Damn, can a girl get a "and she fell into his arms and knew it would be okay" or something corny like that...lol.
The second part better be "and she placed her hand in his and let him lead the way" or something like that....or I will hunt you down j/k...mostly...lol.
Great chapter though, the letter was amazing...
toesinthesand (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 03:14 am (
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That was heartbreaking. you have me really crying here, so much emotion in that chapter. Amazing writing but godd I hope you fix this. If jess gets to be happy then Rie and Justin should be too! Update soon!
LuLu (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 01:33 am (
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No, no, no. That can't be it. Damnit Rie! She needs to get it together and not let Justin walk out of her life. More soon please!
SJane (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:53 am (
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Oh no no u don't missy don't be leaving it like that jessica can't have her happy ending but justin and rie can't nope dnt agree lol
The letter from her mom was so touching and emotional I had the tears crancking
MissTasha (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:16 am (
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You made me cry. Full on cry. And almost cry two more times. Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome chapter.
the fresh princess (Signed) on Jan 06, 2009 12:06 am (
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girl you got me tearing up here, that letter from rie's momma was heartbreaking. and she still don't have it in her to let him love her, so sad. so sad. i'm hopin for a miracle in the next one but i just don't know. that was one helluva chapter, you got a way with words girl.
tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Jan 05, 2009 11:48 pm (
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Okay, first off... points for having Justin nonchalantly quote what I consider one of John Mayer's best songs in the history of mayer-ness. Secondly, do you have some sort of guide for how to create heartwrenching writing that applies way too well to my life? SERIOUSLY. There are so many things in this that I'd love to pretend I came up with myself... this is my favorite:
“I’ve learned that people come into your life randomly, they leave randomly. And if they add something to your life, if they make it just a little bit better than it was, then all you can really do is hope that they stay.”
Co.Sign.
And that letter was just ... holy balls. I don't have anything else to say that isn't just me basking you in compliments because you're a fantastic writer/ this chapter was sensational. I hate you. The end hahaha.
