Comments For In Fear of Close Objects
tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Aug 13, 2008 03:56 pm (Just To Rub It In)
Every time I read those Rihanna lyrics, I laugh, because they're so hilariously cruel. I liked this chapter -- I think everyone is at the point that they should be. Justin finally kicked her out, and seems to be "happy" with Rie. Talis has been literally forced to stop trying to get the life back that she had before she walked out on her wedding. Rie seems content with life (I LOVE her character, by the way). And Jessica is still trying to be perfect for everyone. Awesome! haha I'm waiting for the Rie-Justin-Jessica-Ryan-Talis pentagon? to form... Trouble is a-brewin'
Author's Response: Yeah, I think I laughed all the way through the song the first time I heard it lmao. But it was fitting! And yay! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Everyone (save Talis) is doing okay for themselves, and although that's kinda boring, it's necessary sometimes! So glad you love Rie (in all caps too!) because she's my favoritest person evar and that just makes me happy. And yeah, Jess will never stop trying to perfect, so someone will proooobably have to stop her, yes? Which very well could cause that whole pentagon thing you see on the horizon. Ooh, stay tuned! :giggle Thanks so very much for the review, Taina! Love hearing from ya.
Author's Response: Yeah, I think I laughed all the way through the song the first time I heard it lmao. But it was fitting! And yay! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Everyone (save Talis) is doing okay for themselves, and although that's kinda boring, it's necessary sometimes! So glad you love Rie (in all caps too!) because she's my favoritest person evar and that just makes me happy. And yeah, Jess will never stop trying to perfect, so someone will proooobably have to stop her, yes? Which very well could cause that whole pentagon thing you see on the horizon. Ooh, stay tuned! :giggle Thanks so very much for the review, Taina! Love hearing from ya.
just a girl (Signed) on Aug 13, 2008 10:46 am (Just To Rub It In)
Damn I kind of feel bad for talis now, not sure why. that's a tough break on christmas even though she brought it on herself. But this made me reallize how much I love rie. She was trying to be respectful even though talis was being a total bitch and deserved justin kicking her out. Oh well., i'm glad jess is getting her own life even though she may not want to it looks like she knows she needs it. Loved it, update soon!
Author's Response: Don't feel bad for Talis! Don't forget that it's all her fault! And yeah, Rie is a class act, unlike SOME people, right? lol. I'm glad/excited for Jess too, because she could be onto something great if she lets herself. I just haven't decided if I'm going to let herself. Ah, stay tuned! lol Thanks for the review, girl!
Author's Response: Don't feel bad for Talis! Don't forget that it's all her fault! And yeah, Rie is a class act, unlike SOME people, right? lol. I'm glad/excited for Jess too, because she could be onto something great if she lets herself. I just haven't decided if I'm going to let herself. Ah, stay tuned! lol Thanks for the review, girl!
MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 11:13 pm (Just To Rub It In)
Good for Jess. She can't let Justin and Talis and their bullshit take up all her time and attention. She has to have her own life outside of them and they aren't making that easy. It was harsh for Justin to throw Talis' stuff outside but I am glad that he kicked her out. She deserved it. And clearly she doesn't know how to cooperate with a request if she's asked nicely. It's her own damn fault, I say. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Yeah, Jess was definitely getting lost in the shuffle there, with all their hotmessness lol. Ryan needs to keep her phone for a while and just let them do what they do! And Justin... well, he's hurt right now, so he's allowed to be mean. It's better than releasing a song about it! lmao. This is all on Talis anyway, because they'd be married now otherwise! But that goes without saying, huh? Thanks for the review, girl!
Author's Response: Yeah, Jess was definitely getting lost in the shuffle there, with all their hotmessness lol. Ryan needs to keep her phone for a while and just let them do what they do! And Justin... well, he's hurt right now, so he's allowed to be mean. It's better than releasing a song about it! lmao. This is all on Talis anyway, because they'd be married now otherwise! But that goes without saying, huh? Thanks for the review, girl!
SJane (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 10:44 pm (Just To Rub It In)
and the bitch is finally out lol mind you i feel bad that yeah it's christmas time but if she didn't have the shop open for other ppl in the first place she wouldn't be in the place she is now.
I'm glad Ryan picked up on that fact with Jess i was tarting to wonder when she was going to live her own life and not through her friends. Loved the update girl
Author's Response: Yeah, don't feel bad. She shouldn't have been all bitchass the two previous months, right?! lol And yeah, Jess needs to stop living vicariously through Talistin, and Ryan juuuust might be the guy to help her do that. We shall see! Thanks for the review!
I'm glad Ryan picked up on that fact with Jess i was tarting to wonder when she was going to live her own life and not through her friends. Loved the update girl
Author's Response: Yeah, don't feel bad. She shouldn't have been all bitchass the two previous months, right?! lol And yeah, Jess needs to stop living vicariously through Talistin, and Ryan juuuust might be the guy to help her do that. We shall see! Thanks for the review!
princess (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 10:25 pm (Just To Rub It In)
i have to give jess a round of applause for putting her foot down with Talis. damn that is one selfish little heffa. Ok more soon. You know you are the best ever right. ok mwah. buh bye now
Author's Response: Haha, round of applause. Yeah, she deserves one for not falling into that trap yet again. Talis... SMH. She'll probably get better too, though, I have to say. Maybe. At any rate, THANK YOU. But really, you're the best ever. Srsly.
Author's Response: Haha, round of applause. Yeah, she deserves one for not falling into that trap yet again. Talis... SMH. She'll probably get better too, though, I have to say. Maybe. At any rate, THANK YOU. But really, you're the best ever. Srsly.
band nerd (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 10:16 pm (Just To Rub It In)
Author's Response: Yes, Jess is finally learning her lesson! Who knew. To be honest, I'm not sure what I'm gonna do with Jess and Ryan now, so... I hope it works out for them too lmao. And Justin's rage for Talis is always fun, isn't it? Thanks again for reading, I love hearing from you!
Hahahahahahah!!! I love that Jess won't drop everything for Talis' ass! Yay!
I really hope things go well for Jess/Ryan. And yay for Justin's rage! Awesome chapter!
and as I always say MORE MORE MORE!
Author's Response: Yes, Jess is finally learning her lesson! Who knew. To be honest, I'm not sure what I'm gonna do with Jess and Ryan now, so... I hope it works out for them too lmao. And Justin's rage for Talis is always fun, isn't it? Thanks again for reading, I love hearing from you!
band nerd (Signed) on Aug 12, 2008 09:39 pm (Just To Rub It In)
Author's Response: LOL you're cracking me up!
OMG I'M SO GLAD I CHECKED ONCE AGAIN BEFORE I WENT TO BED! I haven't even read this and yay! Gymnastics AND a new chapter . .life's good!
*off to read*
Author's Response: LOL you're cracking me up!
band nerd (Signed) on Aug 09, 2008 03:49 pm (And Now It's Raining)
Author's Response: Dudette, thank you so, so much. What a hugely immensely awesome compliment! I hope that I can keep you squealing like you did back in the day, because yeah, after all this time, it's definitely hard to do. Thank you! And you can be Rie after I finish figuring out how I can be her! LOL
I've read this chapter about 3-4 times already and have yet to leave a review! Sorry about that!
This is a great story! This has me squeeing and squealing much like the stories did back when I discovered fan fic . .and that's hard to do! I tip my hat off to you girl!
Rie is the best thing ever. I want to be her! Can you make that happen? Thanks!!
Author's Response: Dudette, thank you so, so much. What a hugely immensely awesome compliment! I hope that I can keep you squealing like you did back in the day, because yeah, after all this time, it's definitely hard to do. Thank you! And you can be Rie after I finish figuring out how I can be her! LOL
just a girl (Signed) on Aug 09, 2008 12:23 pm (And Now It's Raining)
I can't even tell you how happy I am with you right now!!! I'm scared for what you're going to do to them but I really excited at the same time. and I just have to say that your an amazing writer, you bring alot of depth to your characters and i love that. I could read this chapter over and over and over again! keep up the great work ashley!!!
Author's Response: Aww, why's everyone so scared! Be happy with the now lmao. And can I just give you a big ass hug and kiss for that? I really, really appreciate you saying that because that's always what I try to do. So if I've succeeded in that at all, well... yay! Thanks for reviewing, hun!
Author's Response: Aww, why's everyone so scared! Be happy with the now lmao. And can I just give you a big ass hug and kiss for that? I really, really appreciate you saying that because that's always what I try to do. So if I've succeeded in that at all, well... yay! Thanks for reviewing, hun!
princess (Signed) on Aug 08, 2008 08:41 pm (And Now It's Raining)
that was disgustingly wonderful. i am so glad I told me infected eye to go fuck itself and read it anyway. I don't whether I am crying or said eye is just running. I am terrified anticipating what you are about to do to us. I think I really am gonna cry now. One of the girls said that she still smells smoke. Well I have read every story you have ever posted and I have to say fuck the smoke my nose hairs are already burning. One justin hasn't shown enough asshole yet and jess has to fuck something up because in everyone of your stories there is some shitty triangle some where. Please update again like now. thank you for all of this wonderfulness
Author's Response: Okay, you're totally one of my favorite people right now because you're making me feel so good about writing this story! Although... I'm sorry about your infected eye and stuff, but I'm glad you're diggin' it! And as for smoke, I won't lie since you know it's coming. A triangle-pentagon-square-octagon-something is on its way, but I will try not to hurt you too badly. I promise! By the way, thank you for reading my stories, in all their fuckedupness lmao. You're fabulous!
Author's Response: Okay, you're totally one of my favorite people right now because you're making me feel so good about writing this story! Although... I'm sorry about your infected eye and stuff, but I'm glad you're diggin' it! And as for smoke, I won't lie since you know it's coming. A triangle-pentagon-square-octagon-something is on its way, but I will try not to hurt you too badly. I promise! By the way, thank you for reading my stories, in all their fuckedupness lmao. You're fabulous!
a_nonymous (Signed) on Aug 08, 2008 07:38 pm (And Now It's Raining)
“This is gonna change everything, you know.”
He smiled at the thought and squeezed her hand a little tighter. “You promise?”
LOVE this chapter ending!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I mayormaynot have stolen that line from Jerry Maguire (favoritest movie evar), but I'm glad you liked it. I thought it fit in quite nicely! lol
He smiled at the thought and squeezed her hand a little tighter. “You promise?”
LOVE this chapter ending!
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I mayormaynot have stolen that line from Jerry Maguire (favoritest movie evar), but I'm glad you liked it. I thought it fit in quite nicely! lol
Jessicalli (Signed) on Aug 08, 2008 09:18 am (And Now It's Raining)
All right I am falling so in love with them now, you have no idea. I love how honest Rie is with him and how that makes him be honest with her. She is the best! The arguement, the hot sex, the honesty at the end, this is just so good and I am scared of what's going to happen next. they can't stay this way can they? Ahh, great work! Update soon as you can please!!
Author's Response: Yay, I'm pretty much in love with them right now too! Rie is a little crazy for being so honest, but that's why she's my fave. But yeah, you should probably be a little scared if I'm being honest. As I said, teh dramaz is on the way! :giggle
Author's Response: Yay, I'm pretty much in love with them right now too! Rie is a little crazy for being so honest, but that's why she's my fave. But yeah, you should probably be a little scared if I'm being honest. As I said, teh dramaz is on the way! :giggle
Vessy (Signed) on Aug 08, 2008 08:20 am (And Now It's Raining)
I just read all the chapters, its such a great story, good job! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I really appreciate that!
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much. I really appreciate that!
lyss2118 (Signed) on Aug 08, 2008 03:13 am (And Now It's Raining)
eeh... i still smell smoke.
Author's Response: Orly?! I wonder why lol. Chances are, you're right though. Stay tuned!
Author's Response: Orly?! I wonder why lol. Chances are, you're right though. Stay tuned!
SJane (Signed) on Aug 08, 2008 03:05 am (And Now It's Raining)
Yyyaaaayyy I love how straight to the point rie is. It takes a lot of balls to tell the man u have feelings for that maybe it could happen to forgive his ex pushing aside her feelings...plus the hot sex was a bonus lol
Author's Response: Yeah, I love Rie because she's honest. The kind of honest that Justin needs right now, for sure. I'm not sure I'd be pushin' him back to his ex if I were her, but she just wants to make sure he's thinking clearly. 'Tis why I love her so. *sigh* So glad you enjoyed it!
Author's Response: Yeah, I love Rie because she's honest. The kind of honest that Justin needs right now, for sure. I'm not sure I'd be pushin' him back to his ex if I were her, but she just wants to make sure he's thinking clearly. 'Tis why I love her so. *sigh* So glad you enjoyed it!
