princess (Signed) on Aug 02, 2008 01:00 am (Say What You Need To Say)
oh god. I so love you right now. this chapter just made one of the shittiest weeks ever worth it. You are truly talented to be able to take us away from our problems with this beautifully complicated and slightly self destructive characters of yours. Please please update real soon. Love and peace. *wipes eyes and sniffs* sorry now I feel all contemplative and shit. *goes off to read tears for water and write poetry*

Author's Response: I was really hoping you'd like it, because I know how much you appreciate my precious Rie! But to hear that I could take you away from any problems, even if only for a few minutes, means the world, seriously. I definitely wanted to make them beautiful disasters, so I'm glad to see that I'm succeeding with that. And contemplative is good! ...Sometimes lol. Really though, thank you so, so much for reading and enjoying and reviewing. And I hope this week is going better for ya! :love



Marissa (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 11:10 pm (Say What You Need To Say)
That was SUCH an awesome chapter, you don't even understand! I'm teary-eyed right now...great, great job!

Author's Response: EEP! Thanks so much. I've been excited about it since I began the story, so I'm reeeeeeally glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!



kkhbtb (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 09:46 pm (Say What You Need To Say)

Good Good Good :) I'm so glad he made her do that and i can't wait to see what happens with them :) I think i still want to see a rie and Talis rumble though HAHA!



Author's Response: Yay! So glad you enjoyed it! :love You still wanna see a smackdown, though, huh? Hmmmm. Maybe a verbal rumble will occur at some point? LOL. Thanks for the review, hun!



band nerd (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 07:34 pm (Say What You Need To Say)
fajiowe;agvjewioagjeio!!!!!!! BEST CHAPTER EVER IN LIFE! OMG!!!!  I need an update pronto!  OMG make him kick talis out right now and move rie in!  OMG OMGOMG!  Please tell me we aren't close to the end!!!!!! 

Author's Response: AWWWWW what an awesome compliment. Except now, I have a lot to live up to lmao. But seriously, thank you! As for the future, we shall see what happens, but I promise you we're not close to the end. Still a lot of loose ends to untie and re-tie and stuff lol. Thanks again for the review!



SexualCoco (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 07:04 pm (Say What You Need To Say)
Even though I haven't reviewed on all the other chapters, I just had to let you know that I've been reading and after reading this chapter, I had to come in and review.

It was so good and now I understand why it's one of your favorite chapters. I really liked it because it's so relatable to anyone who reads it and needs to let go of all the things that are holding them down because it's obvious that everyone has baggage, ya know? And the whole skydiving mixed with the writing of the lists was amazing too. Great job girl and I'm really enjoying this story.

Author's Response: Eep! I'm so glad to see you're reading, Bri! :love Thank you so much, and I'm stoked that you enjoyed it. And you're so right that anyone can relate. We all have demons and heartache and things we wish could fly on out the window, and hopefully, this made Rie and Justin a little more human in that regard. Again, I'm so glad you're reading. I hope to hear from ya again! :love x 2694792



just a girl (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 07:03 pm (Say What You Need To Say)
ohhhh such a great chapter! i cried when she read her letter and when she jumped, that was amazing. and they kissed! I'm so happy with you right now, amaaaazing job!

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much. I have to confess, I cried a little while writing it lol. I'm glad it hit a nerve, though (in a good way)! And I'm super glad you're happy with me. Thanks so much, hun.



Shufflee (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 06:20 pm (Say What You Need To Say)
All I can say is awwwwwwwwwwwwww

Author's Response: And all I can say is THANK YOU! I really appreciate it!



MissTasha (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 06:18 pm (Say What You Need To Say)
Faaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaabulous chapter. I really, really loved it. Thank God for clarity. Talis' ass, it seems, may be headed out the door. *happy dance* Please update soon.

Author's Response: Awwww, thank you soooo much. I was hoping it would please you guys, so I'm glad the mission was accomplished. As for Talis... we shall seeee! Thanks for the review!



mozie (Anonymous) on Aug 01, 2008 05:43 pm (Moving Mountains)
LOVE IT!!!!! get rid of Talis. I LOVE RIE

Author's Response: Yayyy, so glad to hear it. I love Rie too... As for Talis, I'll try to get rid of her soon. Maybe. Thanks so much for reading!



a_nonymous (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 05:36 pm (Say What You Need To Say)
YES YES YES!

Author's Response: I'm gonna take that as a good sign! lol Thanks for the review!



sarah1988 (Signed) on Aug 01, 2008 09:31 am (Hate That I Love You)

lol that message is awesome... go and kick his ass. 

COME ON, Justin needs to know about talis' infidelity. :D PLS??!?!! 



Author's Response: Yeeeahhh, I think Rie is all kinds of awesome. And Justin does need to know what Talis did, but will she tell him when he's thisclose to forgiving her? I dunnnno. I'll work on that lol. Thanks for the review, girl!



a_nonymous (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 09:34 pm (Hate That I Love You)
NOOOO! Talis left him on his WEDDING DAY, remember? And she CHEATED on him! He should not still love her!

Author's Response: I know, right? But to be fair, he doesn't know about the cheating yet, so he's still kinda somewhat in love with her. Le sigh. I'll try to fix that soon, I promise!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 08:23 pm (Hate That I Love You)

Wow...so...I just caught up on all this gloriousness I like to call fan-fiction...and damn, girl!

I'm hooked, and terribly dissapointed that there aren't more chapters posted :) you are amazing.



Author's Response: Awwww, dude, thank you so much. That's a ridiculously awesome compliment, and I'm stoked to see you're enjoying it. I hope I can keep you hooked! THANK YOU.



Marissa (Signed) on Jul 31, 2008 07:49 pm (Hate That I Love You)
Ugh, I'm sick of Talis. Get rid of her....Rie FTW! haha

Author's Response: I will get rid of her, I promise! Eventually. For a while. Maybe. But I'm with you on the Rie, FTW... so I'll see what I can do lol. Thanks for the review!



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Jul 31, 2008 05:48 am (Hate That I Love You)
So, I'm sorry I've been stupid about feedback with this story, but I have been reading and absolutely loooove this!! I really like the dynamic between Justin and Talis at this point and what's funny is that while Talis annoys the HELL out of me (especially since she's basically just trying to surreptitiously re-insert herself back into Justin's life and get back in his good graces), I can really understand and kinda sympathize with each of their points-of-view. Still, I really think Talis needs to stop taking advantage of Justin when it suits her and walk the hell away since that's what she seems prone to doing! Oh and poor Rie, I can understand how she feels like she's consistently coming in at "second" best (and she basically is), so hopefully Justin will get his shit together, realize that Talis is frankly disposable (not to mention, manipulative) and (FINALLY) pursue something with Rie. lol, sorry this is so long but I'm just that into this story. love ya, dear. UPDATE SOON(ish)

Author's Response: KALEEEEENA! :love So glad to have you reading because I love getting your insight. And I'm super happy that you're enjoying the awkwardness between them because I was questioning whether it was necessary. But now, I feel good about it. And yes, she definitely needs to bow out and maybe even, I dunno, tell him the truth at some point. But clearly, people aren't doing what they need to be doing right now! I will try to resolve all that pretty soon, and in the meantime, poor Rie will have to continue to wait in Talis's shadow. Sad, but true. For reals though, thank you sooooo much for the review (I like 'em long :giggle), and I hope to hear from ya again, love!





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