just a girl (Signed) on Jan 02, 2009 01:53 am (Mercy)
why do i get the feeling he is going to end up with talis? please please fix this!!



mzmillion (Signed) on Jan 01, 2009 08:41 pm (Mercy)

nooo Rie, you were untouchable in your sainthood, don't do this mean shit now.

 That bitch Talis redeemed herself so now she is not so much a bitch! Damn I wanted to hate her...hehehe.

Quick update, loved it. Give me more(as Britney says)




SJane (Signed) on Jan 01, 2009 07:44 pm (Mercy)
No no no none of this I can't shit u march over there young lady and sort all this shit out, I wnt take no for an answer lol

Great update my dear



the fresh princess (Signed) on Jan 01, 2009 06:50 pm (Mercy)
i have been reading this story from the jump and i love it but man you are killing me here. if i was justin i would give up now that was so dirty. he can just go head back to his ex now if rie is acting like this. what else can he do?? he is so right she's a coward and he will leave if she not careful. she better get it together and soon he's too good for this. great chapter



Jessicalli (Signed) on Dec 30, 2008 04:22 pm (Live, From New York)
That was a great chapter! I am so torn because I want to stay mad at Justin but I feel bad for him seeing his ex with Rie. But she should be able to hangout with anyone she wants it's not like she's doing it to make him mad. She was just being nice! I also feel so bad for Jessica, she got the shaft be cause now Ryan is gone and justin is still running after Rie so she is all alone. I hope things get better for her. Ahh great work! Please update soooooon!



Jessicalli (Signed) on Dec 30, 2008 04:21 pm (Live, From New York)
That was a great chapter! I am so torn because I want to stay mad at Justin but I feel bad for him seeing his ex with Rie. But she should be able to hangout with anyone she wants it's not like she's doing it to make him mad. She was just being nice! I also feel so bad for Jessica, she got the shaft be cause now Ryan is gone and justin is still running after Rie so she is all alone. I hope things get better for her. Ahh great work! Please update soooooon!



sChErZo (Signed) on Dec 30, 2008 02:28 am (Uncomfortable Silence Can Be So Loud)
ok, so i probably should've reviewed earlier...but this songis one of my absolute favorites! ...and this chapter just made me look at it in a different light...not bad, just different...lol. great story so far, but what else is there to expect from you?



a_nonymous (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 09:07 pm (Live, From New York)
Rie kept a solemn face as she nodded and watched him turn to walk away. Just before he turned the corner, she called after him, “Does this mean you’re giving up?”

He didn’t answer.


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d_simplicity (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 08:29 pm (Live, From New York)
well ain't that a bitch. I'm conflicted with these characters. One time I love them and the other time they all need beat downs. I just hope Justin doesn't give up. Talis kinda needs to keep her distance so he and Rie can work things out but I'm not against the women being friends...yet. we'll see what happens. This is such an emotional rollercoaster. lol update soon.



band nerd (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 12:24 pm (Live, From New York)
ahhhhhhhhhh!  i hate this right now.  make them happy again!



alimera (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 09:47 am (Live, From New York)
SLAMS HEAD ON DESK Dude, are you serious?! Ugh. Now she's going to have to chase after him and apologize for fraternizing with the enemy, and so the cycle starts ALL OVER AGAIN!! Grr. Fix. This. Lol, update again soon!



cagf5000 (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 09:39 am (Live, From New York)
That was a graet chapter!!! The end was perfect!!! Although I really hope justin doesn"t give up!!! I want them together. Update soon!!!



tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 04:23 am (Live, From New York)
Okay from Justin's re-entry into the world of Rie onward -- I. Am. Gutted. That was a shitfest of an emotional roller coaster, and the chapter ending is... GUH. So good and I loved it! And I hate you at the same time!

I'm glad that the next update is coming sooner than later because while I love the way this ended, my heart is about to jump out of my chest in both anticipation and the utter agony that is associated with relating to Rie in this story. Holy hell.



SJane (Signed) on Dec 28, 2008 02:25 am (Live, From New York)
Happy holidays girl
Im so happy u updated this I've loved this from the beginning.
Its weird to think that rie and tsalis are "friends" lol but I hope to god justin doesn't forget



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Dec 28, 2008 12:34 am (Live, From New York)
I'm sorry I've been so lame about reviewing this, but I'm looooving it. I'm gonna need Talis to peace out (or get hit by a bus or something) though, because I feel like nothing good is going to come from her being around Rie, and inevitably standing between her and Justin, in one way or another. Plus, it doesn't really help that Rie, the person that I want sympathize with is fraternizing with the person most unworthy of sympathy. But, I guess if they come to some sort of understanding where Talis isn't her usual woe-is-me-my-life-sucks and somewhat vindictive self and can actually deal with Justin moving on, then I guess them being friends is fine. lol Until then, she needs to go--or be, like, severely injured or something. LOL.....update sooooon! can't wait to read more!!





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