mzmillion (Signed) on Dec 27, 2008 11:59 pm (Live, From New York)
Love this story, Talis, Rie, and Brit being in one room was hilarious. I loved this chapter, please update soon, can't wait for more.



MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 27, 2008 11:39 pm (Live, From New York)

“Damn,” he chuckled awkwardly, trying to hide the fact that he really, really wanted to kill himself right then and there.

LOL! LMAO! Love it.

Awesome chapter. Please update soon.




Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Dec 27, 2008 11:37 pm (Live, From New York)
Well freakin hell. That stupid ass better not give up! No, no, no. She can be friends with whomever she damn well pleases! This is the only story that I go back and forth between hating him and loving him...and I love it! Very refreshing. Because I either love him or hate him. No both! Awesomeness! I was so excited when I saw that you had updated this. I don't think I've reviewed before now, but I've always intended too. That scene where Justin and Rie go skydiving after her mom died was...just...wow. My mom died 8 years ago, and I still feel that way. And it was just...it was like I was seeing someone feel the exact same way I feel right now. Just keep up the good work girl! Can't wait for the next update



MissTasha (Signed) on Dec 02, 2008 12:15 am (System Overload)
Oh, no. I don't want her to cry. Justin still loves her, too. I'm sad Ryan left, too. I thought he would stick around if Jess promised she would let Justin go. I really think she would have and could have, too. It's too bad he didn't believe her. But I do undertand why he didn't. Sad, sad, sad all around in this chapter. Everybody's everything is falling apart all over the place. It's just a shit storm. Please update soon. 



Jessicalli (Signed) on Dec 01, 2008 05:04 pm (System Overload)
I am so glad that you are back but Ughhh my poor Rie! That was soooo sad. I hope he finds a way to make this up to her be cause he is doing a really bad job right now. He's playing both sides and it's bad for everyone! Also I agree Ryan just has to take back Jess after what she said. I almost cried! Ahh great work, please update again soon!!



alimera (Signed) on Dec 01, 2008 02:25 pm (System Overload)
GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR. Not happy. Time to fix this, pleaseandthankyou lol. Update again soon!



mzmillion (Signed) on Nov 30, 2008 06:48 pm (System Overload)
oh wow!! I mean, I understand friendship and this is something in my personal life to but when do you realize that you can't always have it all. you can't have this great friendship and great relationship when they confilict in a way of your doing? I mean Justin deserves not to have her, and I already hate Jess so she can drop off a bridge but he is seriously pissing me off. I mean in reality, this story is more close to what would happen vs. the "happily ran into each others arms" but shit, sometimes, that fantasy shit is so much better...lol. Justin here is making me pissed in a way I can see in other people, and Rie and he weakness and "fuck it, I love him" is something I've done so to have it slapped in her face sucks.



d_simplicity (Signed) on Nov 30, 2008 06:36 pm (System Overload)
Awwwwwwwwwwwww :( I don't like this one bit. Please fix it. Justin and Jess need to just stay friends. Guh, all of them are stupid! lol. I don't want Rie like this. She's been through a lot. So has Justin but he's the one who fucked up this time. Gah! This story better have a happy ending. lol. Update soon.



SJane (Signed) on Nov 30, 2008 06:28 pm (System Overload)
wow girl have you been in hiding???? that was definately a good chapter to come back with.

Like that song says i hate that i love you lol it's so fitting here



band nerd (Signed) on Nov 14, 2008 11:02 pm (Dancing In The Dark)
Hello?  McFly? 



mozie (Anonymous) on Oct 01, 2008 04:54 pm (Moving Mountains)
patiently waiting for an update!!!!



alimera (Signed) on Sep 27, 2008 01:33 pm (Dancing In The Dark)
Wow that was such a stupid spot to tell her everything! Ugh. Update again soon--I want to see those two together again!



just a girl (Signed) on Sep 23, 2008 10:50 am (Dancing In The Dark)
oh man that was so sad. i think I'm going to cry!! but rie is right, he did exactly what talise did and she can't just forgive and forget like that. i wonder if he will go to jess now or what. i hope he doesn't and I reeeeeealllllllly hope he ends up with Rie but I'm scared of whats going to happen while their apart. update soon, i am dying here!!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Sep 23, 2008 05:08 am (Dancing In The Dark)
So her last line from cry me a river hit hard...damn....that was just sad and heartbreaking. I hope they can work through it. i can't even be angry here. Everyone has their shit dealing with. Can only hope for the best, but just so you know...i want Justin and Rie together! lol update soon.



Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Sep 22, 2008 11:52 pm (Dancing In The Dark)
Well this is effin bs! You have to fix this. Like, yesterday. Because as much as I like real life Jess and Justin together...they just don't mesh in fiction!! Torture, I tell you, torture!





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