Penname: SexualCoco [Contact] Real name: Bri
Member Since: Apr 07, 2007
Membership status: Member
Bio:
So at the suggestion of my girl Ms. Glitter15, I decided to add some of my own stuff to the archive after being a reviewer for some time. I'm new to the writing game so bare with me! I'm just getting my feet wet before trying to hang with the great writers in fan fiction. However, I hope you all enjoy what I have written so far and if you did, thanks for reading!
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An Unexpected Love Affair by d_simplicity (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 494]

I sneak peeks at him everyday but he never notices me. The exuberant emotions I bear towards him are far more than I can handle and are very unprofessional. I dream about this man every night in hopes that one day he'll acknowledge my presence or at least get my name right, but to no avail.... Justin is my fetish and secret guilty pleasure. That's all he's ever going to be and I can live with that....

A crush I can not love.
A heart I can not fill.
A love I can not give.
A bond I can not break.
For this love can not exist.

By Angela Moore



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 53
Wordcount: 296020 - Hits: 164288
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 08, 2007 - Last Updated: Apr 24, 2009 -
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Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Admission Is The First Step

Aww YAY!!! They finally told each other how they felt. Now I'm secretly pulling for them to get together (I know...poor Jeremy). But I'm glad things are working out (for now at least-haha). Great update and thanks!

Author's Response: I liked the 'for now at least' part. lol. It made me smile. But Now that they've admitted their feelings, things are looking up so that's good. :). Thanks for the feedback and the next update is done.

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Sep 15, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Strawberry

Yes dammit, they have to! I'm sorry but all this flirting is driving me crazy and they need to do something about it otherwise...well I think you have an idea as the author (haha). Great update though, I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Sep 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 22: No Holding Back - Part 1

FINALLY!!! I thought this would never happen, but I'm glad that Zara isn't holding back anymore and letting her true feelings guide her. Now I really can't wait to see what happens next so update soon! Thanks!

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: No Holding Back - Part 2

Damn...that was hot! Like I said before, it's about time they got down to business and that right there was delicious. I'm kind of sad that she didn't say she loved him back after he said it to her (I hope that will change though). Great job and thanks for the update, can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Oh Now I'm happy you liked it. More is coming soon. I've just been so busy with school, I don't get time to sit and really indugle in my writing to update all my stories and reading the other stories on the archive like I want. Anyway, the next update is done so stay tuned. Thanks for the feedback

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Oct 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 24: Be Without You

Damn...that was hella intense! First off, is she crazy for saying those things to Justin? I mean the man cried for God sakes over her, she really needs to get her shit together after that. And what's gonna go down between Justin and Jeremy? I'm hella intrigued about how this is going to turn out. Great update, thanks!

Author's Response: I think both Justin and Zara are a bit crazy and unstable. Yeah, well,  from this next update things are going to switch up a bit for the the both of them. The Justin and Jeremy interraction will be explained soon too. I promise. Thanks for the feedback. :)

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 26: I Need You Now More Than Ever

Oh lord, there is way too much going on right now! First with Justin coming back and now Malcolm and on top of that Justin and Zara's unresolved issues! Girlie just when I thought this couldn't get any juicier, you always add one more twist. Great job (once again) and I can't wait to read what happens next. I got your email by the way, thanks for hitting me back! ; )

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Oct 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 27: I Would Do Anything For You - Part 1

Firstly, I am SO SUPER glad that updated, so thank you for that. Secondly, I'm glad that Zara finally spoke up and told Jeremy to dip. I just hope that once everything calms down she'll be able to speak up and let Justin know what's on her mind (and vice versa). Again, great update and you already know that I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: hehe thanks so much girl for sticking by this story. Honestly, it's not writer's block keeping me from writing. It's time and the fact that I have so many other things doing and so many other little stories writing on the side when I don't feel the creative juices flowing. But, just letting you know the next update is done so expect it soon. Thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Nov 16, 2007 Title: Chapter 28: I Would Do Anything For You - Part 2

Wow...first off, I'm so glad you updated (and don't worry about losing me as a reader, this story is TOO good to miss). I honestly thought Mallory was going to jump off the roof when Justin dumped and fired her, but it was all in due time I guess. I really wish that these two could just spill their hearts because it's so evident in their eyes, but not in their words. I know that the main concern is Malcolm, but until they find out his condition, I think they should try to start over again (and I think starting with Christian is a good idea). Great update girl and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Hey thanks a lot. :). Yeah well Mallory isn't completely gone but it's good that Justin too that step. I guess Justin and Zara are both a little scared of rejection and well they just have some issues to deal with lol. Yeah good ole Christian, you'll get to meet him soon. hehe. Thanks so much for the update and sticking with the story. It means a lot. The next update should be up soon.

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Nov 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 30: Turning Point - Part 1

Real bomb and sexy-like! FINALLY they told each other how they feel and everything is ok (for now at least). Again, another great chapter girl and I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 32: Guilty Pleasures

Oh lord, I have a feeling that some serious drama is about to go down now that Zara knows the real deal about Jeremy. And her aunt is a serious wench, ugh. Great update girl and I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Yeah, the next update is up so you'll see what happens. I hope you like it Bri. :). And I agree her aunt is a wench but...well the reason she's like that will be explained in some later updates. Thanks for reviewing girl.

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Apr 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 41: Unsettling Situations

Whoa...WTH is going on now? Now someone is trying to run over Yolanda? What did she ever do to anyone? Well I hope we find out who's behind that craziness.

I'm glad that Justin and Zara made up (in a very delicious way I might add-haha). But I wonder how she's going to feel about when Justin talks to her about what her brother told him. That should be interesting...great update girl and I can't wait for the next one.

Author's Response: Oh boy Bri, you know i got all this craziness under my sleeve with all these twists and turns. Their fates have been mapped out...hehehe. I know right? Poor Yol, so innocent and such. You'll see what's going on eventually. Now Justin and Zara are classics. I know when they have their little talk it's going to uh...change some stuff? thanks for commenting girl I'll get to updating soon.

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Dec 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 33: And It All Falls Down

OMFG, the drama D, the drama! Malcolm was cold-blooded for bringing up some old shit that Zara told him. But Justin knows how she really feels so why does it matter now? Girl, please fix this because this is crazy (but I loved it-haha). Good job girl and keep it coming!

Author's Response: Hahah I know Bri, the drama. But, don't worry. I'm going to get right to fixing it in the next update. Berry and Ju are gonna switch things up a bit so all is not lost. hehe. I'm telling you, I agree with you on that one. It really shouldn't matter and hopefully if they cooperate with me, it won't lmao...I'm glad you liked it, and muchas gracias for the review. I appreciate it. I'll be updating soon.

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Jan 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 34: "Be With Me"

Aww D, that chapter was real bomb...and it had another one of my favorite J. Holiday songs in too (haha). Well FINALLY these two are official and I'm glad. Now I can't wait to see what happens next because I know you got some craziness coming up in the mix. Great update girl!

Author's Response: Girl you know I love J holiday's entire album which is rare because I only ever like a few songs on artists albums. lol. And yeah, finally berry and ju are official. Man it wasn't easy getting to that point. Now...staying together? muahaha....i don't know what craziness you talking about :P. lol haha I'll get to updating this soon. Thanks for the review Bri, you know I always love your reviews. :)

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Jan 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 36: A Little One-On-One Time

Oh lord, yeah time just stopped alright. Now things are really going to be a hot mess, esp. since Justin and Zara are together now. Can't wait to see what you come up with next girlie!

Author's Response: Man Bri, you guys have no idea what I got in this outline. lol. :P. I'll try to get to updating soon so you all aren't left wondering for too long. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: SexualCoco Signed
Date: Feb 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 37: Sheltered Love

Ok, I understand the Malcolm is basically all Zara has, but she really needs to put him in his place about her relationship with Justin. I mean she's grown woman for God's sake and she can't keep lying about it forever. *Sigh* Girl, that just irks me (haha). But you know I love this story and you so keep it up!

Author's Response: Zara needs to grow some balls against malcolm no doubt. I'll see how I can make that happen. But you know, it's a little more than just some brotherly overprotective love. hehe. I'll get to solving  the malcolm issue for you guys...thanks for the review bri.