Penname: Jamie Lynn [Contact] Real name: Jamie
Member Since: Apr 12, 2007
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My name is Jamie. I am 20 and I love to write. I also love to read really good fanfiction. Otherwise why would I be here? LOL.
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Wonderwall by katethegreat (R) [Comments - 227]

"I don't believe that anybody feels
The way I do about you now

And all the roads we have to walk along are winding
And all the lights that lead us there are blinding
There are many things that I would
Like to say to you
I don't know how

Because maybe
You're gonna be the one who saves me?
And after all
You're my wonderwall"

Based on "Wonderwall" by Oasis

not your typical "best friends fall in love" story.

 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 5
Genres: Drama, General, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 157067 - Hits: 172192
Complete?: Yes - Published: Oct 03, 2008 - Last Updated: Mar 24, 2009 -
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Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 22:Nice Guys Finish Last

Ok this is wrong...so completely wrong. How can you write a guy that is suppossed to be the dreaded unlikeable character, dare I say it, *gasp* likeable! I want to hate the guy. I really, really, really do! But...I can't. I actually feel bad for the guy...and I do feel for Justin too. Although more than 85% thinks he got exactly what he deserved. Ugh...yeah. I'm kind of addicted. And now that I've wrote you a novel long review...I'm gonna go wait for more. Awesomeness!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 10:In Love With A Girl

Ok as cute as this Charlie character may be...she can't mess this up with Justin. I swear I'll have to boycott! It may not make any changes happen but damn it It'd be worth it. LOL. Awesomeness! I really like this. I can't wait for your next installment!

Author's Response: lol thank you! i'm glad you're enjoying it so far!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11:Things I'll Never Say

Pure flippin awesomeness.

Author's Response: lol thank you! you have no idea how cool it is for me that you guys are getting so into this!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15:Used To

Uh-oh...I don't like the sound of that. Jealousy and bitchiness is not one of his finer attributes...and I have a feeling that is where it's headed...Maybe. Anyway, loved it girl! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: lol thank you! the feedback is awesome, as always!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17:It Ends Tonight

Ok this is one of the few stories that I've read that portrays Justin..maybe more realisticly than others. I actually want to jump through the screen and choke the freakin life out of him? Why the hell does it have to be about him? And you know what he know that he can trust her and even Charlie...he's just got a jealous issue that NEEDS to be dealt with...before someone deals with it for him. Ugh he really pisses me off...but I like it!!!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18:Stupid Boy

Ah!! Finally the voice of frickin reason arrives!! Thank god! Awesomeness again...canit wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18 Pt. 2:Stupid Boy

Ok, I know this should be a both sided thing, and maybe I'm just completely biased to my own gender but I dont see anything that Ally did wrong. Sure she had a hand in them not taking things slowly and not letting J know he was getting on her ever loving nerves, but other than that...I think she was innocent. And Justin shouldnt be making a good woman pay for the shit that another woman did. It's not fair to her or to his selfish ass either. Ok I think I'm to into this story, but grrr!! I want to wring his scrawny ass neck!! Again, I can't wait for the next installment!!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 19:Behind These Eyes

God, he's just getting worse by the chapters. And oddly enough...I really like it. Damn you for getting me addicted! LOL.

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20:Everything's Just Wonderful

Amazingness as usual. I can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 21:Smile Like You Mean It

Well...Finally! Ally did take it a bit to far, but we women, when we're pissed, and a bit cloudy minded. God that was an awesome chapter! Well...I can only guess who the next POV is gonna be from. I hope it's the person's brain I've been dying to tap into. Awesomeness as usual!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Nov 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 24:I Still...

Well...shit. Damn. Oh, I hope that this doesnt screw things up with her heading back in Justin's direction when she finds out about Charlies wife and finds out that Justin and the Midget knew about it. Oh, and there's nothing like a little Al Green to get you in the mood! Gotta love The Rev! Awesome chapter by the way! I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 26:Special

Well...I think I'm just liking this story more and more. If thats at all possible!! I cant wait to see where it goes from here!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue:Nothing Lasts Forever

I smell a fish! Could it be possible that Charlie and Darcy are working together to get the objects of their affections? If not that then the relationship gods just really have it out for them. Oh! And I do believe that Mrs. Darcy fell out of the crazy tree and hit every branch down! Great Chappy by the way!

Author's Response: lol, yeah she is a little nuts. thanks for the comments! reviews definitely make this fun for me!

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Dec 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32: Simple Kind Of Life

Freakin Darcy and her freakin sluttiness! Thats all I have to say. Trace and Lauren are blissfully happy while Justin and Ally are on their way to being blissfully miserable. I have come to the conclusion that Darcy must be destroyed. That's it. That's the only way to solve this.

Author's Response: lol...destryoyed? ouch! haha

Reviewer: Jamie Lynn Signed
Date: Dec 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 33: The Unexpected

Whew! I was so hoping she wouldn't do what I thought she was going too. I think I was as shocked as Justin. I'm serious when I said she just needs to be destroyed. You should like write me in and let me be some crazy person that strapped her to a bomb or something LMAO! Can't stand the hoe! Anyway, awesome chappy!

Author's Response: lol! now that could be an interesting little twist...hmm....