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The Wolf Pack: The Next Generation (Shift and JT's reign) by Schnessa (NC-17) [Comments - 162]

There stood his crew, his pack, his brothers in arms. This was his family and the place he belonged. Prison time was mandatory, Gun-running and drug smuggling was work, Alcohol was necessary, doing the Drugs was optional, A cracked out wife was part of the territory and a family with the love of your life (who wasn't your wife) was a treasure. This was the life he led and the path he chose.

 

*Inspired by SOA, Hells Angels and every other MC out there.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Mystery, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 34
Wordcount: 78043 - Hits: 113609
Complete?: No - Published: Sep 27, 2008 - Last Updated: May 23, 2010 -
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Date: Nov 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Can I help you Darlin'?

ok we all know Shift is his girl .... but damn, it would very interesting to see if Addison can hold his attention. its insane but we all love crazy dont we? LOL!

love the superfast update! :)



Author's Response: I think he's interested in Addison as a family member not as a lover....but we'll see! lol

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Date: Nov 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Where you go I go....

oh damn. that was just.... wow.... all kinds of wrong. poor shift *sniffle* ... but i love their whole jelousy/possessiveness towards each other... its that crazy love.

cant wait to see what they do to uncle barley... i pity the fool.



Author's Response:

All kinds of wrong? What ever do you mean Vikki? lol Yeah it's definitely that crazy love. I pity the fool....lol that had me rollin' We'll see what happens! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: Nov 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Did I tell you she's my girlfriend?.....

“When we get back I’m killing that bitch for talking to you like that.”

OMG! I love crazyoverprotective!Justin ... he's so bad and sexy... growl!

its so great to come back from vacation to my fav updates :)

and is it wrong to also take pleasure in the torture? I was totally cheering Shift and Justin on... LOL!

great update... more soon please!



Author's Response: I know you left for vacation and I got some major inspiration while you were gone! lol It is not wrong to take pleasure in the torture....It's THE WOLF PACK how could you not? lol I'm working on an update right now!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 27: What the fuck are ya'll starin' at?

I'm totally into Justin, hair pulling, and banging up against walls.... just not that way... *wink wink*!

but serves them right... Lynn and Addison should have known better, and as for Jaime... well stupidass had it coming, LOL!



Author's Response: lamo@ Vikki! I think they should have known better as well....if Justin warned me to stay away then I would do as he said. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Date: Dec 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 28: Massey?

oooooo drama drama drama. Poor Justin :(

but lets back track a bit to that sexy make out scene... lol! Can we finish that up in the next chapter please? lol! Damn if I had Justin I think we'd be on kid #12 by now... lol!

but yeah... this Erik guy smells like trouble. you'd think the whole world would know by now not to mess with Justin & Shift!



Author's Response:

I don't know about the next chapter but we'll finish it up soon. I'm with ya on the whole #12 kid by now but I think if I was Shift I would wait too. She knows how much danger the club puts her in. You can't really beat someone when you're pregnant...okay you can but it wouldn't be healthy for the baby.

Erik is trouble but here comes the part where Shift gets torn. I mean you serve with someone for three years, making sure you and them make it through alive and now he's a threat to the man that you love.

We'll just have to wait and see what happens. Thanks for reading and reviewing Vikki!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 29: Are you charging me or not?

awww PawPaw! i missed him! I love how he was the one she went to for advise... that was good.

and i never doubted whos side Shift would be on.... I mean, they've been through so much already ya know? I can't imagine someone like Massey getting in between.

but Justin feels kinda good now right? having his girl pick him up and defending him to ATF.... I think they should go home now and celebrate.... *wink wink*



Author's Response:

I love PawPaw. If you think about it Shift has never had a father so she viewed Paul as her father and she still views Randall as her father.

I don't think anyone doubted which side she was on she just had a lot to think about. It's hard to say whether or not her and Massey would work out...they've been through stuff that we don't know about yet....so...it could be possible if Shift didn't love Justin so much.

 

We'll see about celebrating! lol Thanks for reading and reviewing Vikki!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: I have a wedding to plan.....

awwwwwwww! this chapter was full of happy moments! :)

stupid Erik realized the obvious.

Teak got her cut!

and Justin finally got his girl a ring!

ooooooo and sex in the snow ... i need to find Justin and try that out myself ... hehe!

Love it! So happy you broke out of your writers block!



Author's Response: YAY! Happy Moments! Yes Erik is very stupid lol and Teak got her cut! What! lol I haven't broken out of the writers block completely but this next chapter is seriously fucking with my brain. I want to write it one way and I keep rewriting it so that's exactly what I pictured so....yeah....But sex in the snow...adefinitemustOMG lol Thanks for reading and reviewing Vikki!

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Date: Feb 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Tomorrow she would be Mrs. Justin Timberlake and he couldn't fucking wait.

how did i miss this update? HOW?!

ok.... first off i LOVE Trace! the whole walking into the court house minus his cut and everything was just... omgheissocute!

and YAY! Randall is finally out! that just all kinds of awesome!

and WTF?! if she's not Addison then who the hell is she? and bish is krrrraaazzzyyy!

then there's the adorable ending and omg I want biker!J ... i do! i'll take the good with the bad I dont care, I just want him.... lol! but ok fine... let Shift have him for now. :)



Author's Response:

I don't know how you missed the update!!!! That's unacceptable. lol

Isn't Trace awesome? And him and Teak? So cute.

Randall is out! Randall is out! That's major and ya'll will see that soon!

I don't know who she is.....wait you already read the update so you know who she was! lol but.....what about the real Addison??? lol I'm just teasing you aren't I?

I had to show his sensitive side, you know? Hey hey biker!J belongs to Shift (and me) but I guess we can learn to share....but you can't have him until I'm done with this story lol

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Feb 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Take your best shot.....

a perfect WolfPack wedding.... LOL! oh that was the best!

My sniper rifle is up there. There’s shotguns under the pews, your .45 is under the alter and in the girls dressing room there’s ammo and some AK-47s from the warehouse and a couple of grenades. You know I like to be prepared.

LOL! I love that girl! :)

and yaaaaaay! they're finally married! awwwwwww! and another awwwwwww because she's pregnant! now we can finally get some hot honeymoon/celebration monkey sex scenes right? right?



Author's Response: LMAO...Vikki!!!!! lol It was a perfect Wolf Pack wedding...and well...Shift is a trip. We'll see about the hot honeymoon/celebration monkey sex...as you put it lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Colorblind by Black Coffee (R) [Comments - 2]
It's not the color of your skin that makes you fall in love with someone. It's the way they make you feel. Giselle has been Justin's assistant for six years. Constantly being hurt by his obnoxious behavior and obscene words, she finally decides to put her foot down and let him know how she truly feels. When she does, things get better for them. They even decide to hook up, but how would his friends and family react when they hear that he's with her. Not only that, engaged. Will he leave her to save him and and his family's relationship? Or will the say "Screw them?"

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 68257 - Hits: 45031
Complete?: Yes - Published: Oct 09, 2008 - Last Updated: Oct 09, 2008 -
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Date: Oct 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: I Give, You Take

awwww....I loved this story! I haven't read it in years though, like 2004 right?

but I'm gonna need some coffee before I can start rereading, lol! :)

little thoughts by MrsTimberlake18 (PG) [Comments - 5]
he told her to keep her head up & it worked for some time. but when something life-altering happens to nicole, will justin be there to fix things? can things even be fixed? will he realize she's been hurting all along?

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 6978 - Hits: 19510
Complete?: Yes - Published: Oct 27, 2008 - Last Updated: Dec 06, 2008 -
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Date: Oct 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

CP? as in cerebral palsy? thats interesting....its be good to have a few blanks to be filled in about their background.

and take your time...be descriptive. get us inside that head of yours so we can feel out the story like you do. :)



Author's Response: yea i just figured it was in the other fics so i didnt know how to reexplain it

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

is this part of a series then? If not then you never know which story a reader may come to first.

its good to have some mystery in your stories but not to a point where the reader may feel confused or lost and unable to relate or connect to your characters.

there are stories when the guys may develop something, memory loss, blindness, but here you have the leading lady with a disability that (one can assume) some of the general readers may not understand.

open her up and let the readers fall in love with her, that's a sure way to have them fall in love with the story.



Author's Response: no its not a series, its just the same characters. i\'m not really sure how to explain nicole or where but i\'ll talk to my cowriter when i can & see what we can do. we\'re hopefully adding a flashback so we might be able to there.

Tricks and Treats by SomethingBlue42 (NC-17) [Comments - 22]

After the new head of publicity for the Metropolitan Museum of Art decides to turn a black tie event into a costume party for Halloween in order to draw in "the younger crowd" Skylar McKibbon's is slightly peeved. She's down right pissed when she finds out he called Justin to get him to show up at the event for publicity.

 A companion to A Love Worth Learning



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Fantasy

Series: Continuing Education: ALWL Shorts
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 8308 - Hits: 3965
Complete?: Yes - Published: Oct 31, 2008 - Last Updated: Oct 31, 2008 -
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Date: Nov 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Tricks and Treats

*cheers* Skystin! Skystin! Skystin!

 “Is it one of those skimpy little white things that just has the sheets over your…” he trails, cupping his hands in front of his chest and curling his fingers just slightly.

Ok that was just ONE of my favorite parts of this story! I died because I so visually saw Justin in my head at that moment... LOL!

Aside from the sexy role-playing and the hot desk sex, I just loved how pissed she was at her boss, trying to use justin's celebrity... brillant plot... very Skystin! and i loved how justin dissed her boss... omg that was great.

and then... justin telling the difference between the greek and roman togas! OMG i think i was equally impressed as sky... LOL!

loved this... spoil us with more soon :)



Author's Response: HAHAHAHA Yesssssss I love him!! There's just something about this couple lol I dunno I can't stop writing them. There will be more of them at some point I can promise you that! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

I'll Be Waiting by SomethingBlue42 (NC-17) [Comments - 111]

When Skylar takes Justin home to meet her parents in West Virginia for Thanksgiving everything gets called in to question.

A Companion to A Love Worth Learning

 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Fantasy, Romance

Series: Continuing Education: ALWL Shorts
Chapters: 9
Wordcount: 26271 - Hits: 40583
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 24, 2008 - Last Updated: Dec 02, 2008 -
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Date: Nov 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

what a lovely way to come back to vacation... 7 chapters of awesome Skystin! LOL!

seriously... what is it about this couple? I love their sexy moments, (omg her childhood bed!!), and him meeting her folks, moonshine, the diner, OMG Vanessa and Jeremy!

and its great to see them have these relationship 'problems' and work through them... abondonment issues are serious ya know... love him for understanding and being there for her.

dont make this the end ok? more missy! more!



Author's Response: YAAAAAY I'm glad you liked it! Part of the fun of writing them is that they're established so you can explore their relationship and the problems they face so I'm glad you're liking that! Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

damn girl... i forgot how to breathe for a moment.... whew!



Author's Response: Guuuuuh they are so hot together! Glad you liked it! Just remember breathe in...breathe out...repeat lol Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!