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Verdant by Sox (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 612]
Past Featured Story

I sat in front of a mirror finishing my makeup and felt a steady throbbing like the beating of a drum in my chest. I have never been so scared in my life, and I’ve been through a lot of shit.  After taking a deep breath I stood up and fixed my fishnet stockings before taking one last look in the mirror. I look like a slut. What am I doing?
 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 50
Wordcount: 128396 - Hits: 198651
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 25, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 03, 2009 -
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Date: Feb 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

nnnooooooooooo! god damn it Chloe! just take his money, there's nothing wrong with charity ok? swallow your damn pride and take the money.

omgomgomgomg! justin needs to come home and fix this. he needs to fix this. you need to fix this.

my poor brady. he is too young to be experiencing such a heartbreak. :(  ... seriously, that's the most heaviest thing about all this.

oh wow... i dont even know how things can get better, but they need to stop getting worse.

but i love this! lol! update soon!

 



Author's Response: Yeah, Brady is the worst part of this lol. Justin needs to think through his actions more, but so does Chloe, they're both screwed up and perfect for eachother haha thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Mar 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

thats right Chloe! you fucking tell him girl!

omg Sarah you have to stop making me cry! I'm running out of tissues! lol!

but DAMN that was so awesome! I'm so proud of her for talking with Brady about sharing feelings and then laying it on Justin because he so fucking deserved to hear it.

now this coffee... oh man... I'm dying to see what comes of it. update soon missy!



Author's Response: I'm sorry I keep making you cry!! lol. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Mar 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

I can’t deal with the false sense of hope, and there’s one damn thing I know for sure. Neither can Brady. 

Amen.

Someone needs to tell Justin what my grandma taught me... actions speak louder than words babe.

Chloe and Brady don't need that "I'm here but I'm not here" bullshit. Bye Justin, and dont let the door hit your ass on the way out.



Author's Response: Whoa... really? That's serious Vikki haha. Justin definitely needs to figure his stuff and make up his mind. Psh. lol Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

ooooooooooooooo SNAP!

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG!

Gabe... Brady... *bites nails nervously*



Author's Response: dumdumdum lol thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Apr 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

fucking Gabe! what an ass!

but omg... glasses!J fighting? that is kinda hot, lol!

and Justin might say that he wants her to figure herself out, but you know his heart is just feeling the opposite. he cant not not be there and hold her hand and make everything better. he loves her - plain and simple. and I feel like he just realized that.

or I can be completely wrong, lol!



Author's Response: I think you may be on to something Vikki lol thanks for the review!

(Un)Tying the Knot by SomethingBlue42 (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 847]

Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232052
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -
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Date: Nov 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 13

omg! this story is SICK! and i mean that in a good way, LOL! I love Charlie, basically because i am SO her in SO many ways....its crazy. And Amelia, omg... where did this alien come from? Justin hunny...wake up and smell the overpriced roses! Its hard...i know, three years is a long time to invest in a woman, a relationship, a lifestyle. but she/that/it is NOT what you want to wake up to for the REST of your LIFE! now....Charlie on the other hand... *wink wink*. Hopefully Trace and Mama Lynn express this to him and open his fucking EYES a bit. Sheesh! 

ok sweetie....now that I am all caught up, you have to gimme a new chap, ooook? good! :)



Author's Response: YAY I'm glad you're liking it! Thanks for taking the time to catch up! Hopefully I'll have the next chap by the end of the weekend middle of the week at the most. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 14

Yay... you updated!

Charlotte has to cover her mouth with her hand to conceal her gasp as he opens his mouth to sing.

I was NOT expecting the christmas music... and the minute my eyes read the first lyric i did the EXACT same thing as Charlotte... LOL!

I love how this chapter kept building, and building, and I just know something is coming.

And i love you to pieces because we really dug into justin here, well charlie did. I know the side-effects of this time spent together is just going to be oh so good. I can't wait.

I'm holding you to this two-three weeks thing... earlier would be awesome... but any later then that missy you'll be in big trouble :)



Author's Response: You're right on point girl! Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 15 pt 1

omg the dancing and singing was oh-so-adorable! and that's right Justin.... check out her ass! LOL! you know you want to!

and omg! they both drink their coffee the same way! that's fate man... soulmates... star-crossed lovers! ok i'm crazy but damn it i just want them together... LOL!



Author's Response: HAHAHAHA caught the ass check did ya! I seriously love that you're so excited about them! Too bad Justin's with Amelia *snigger* *poke* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15 pt 2

AHHHHH! I LOVE TRACE! I want to put him in a shoebox and keep him under my bed. :)

Best chapter yet... omg it just gets better and better because i remember thinking that about chpt 14 too... LOL! I love how he got her something personal, something between them two... just like she did... omg they're just... ugh why must you torture us!!

and AMEILA! OMG if i was charlie i wouldnt be able to control myself, i think i would've bitch slapped her after she totally disregarded the CD he made her! UGH! She's just... UGH! UGH! Can someone just run her ass over with a tractor trailer please?



Author's Response: GUH YAY *happy dance* I'm glad you liked this chapter because it was SO hard to write so I'm glad that it turned out decent! And I must agree Trace FTW lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 16

And Justin probably won’t even notice,” she says shrugging as she picks up her wine glass again, chuckling slightly to herself. “I mean it’s just you.”

omg! I wanted to run in, bitch slap Amelia, and give Charlotte a hug! how could she say that? its just so... so... so... UGH!


“But if you think, for one second, that your little inside jokes and buddy-buddy rapport makes you the authority on what he wants or needs, Charlie,” Charlotte cringes at the ice in Amelia’s voice as she says the nickname. “then you are sadly mistaken.”

hmph! we'll see about THAT Amelia... we'll just see about that!


“I can’t…what the hell am I doing?” he says his voice manic, running a hand through his hair and his curls spring in all directions. “This isn’t what I want.”

YES JUSTIN! STEP INTO THE LIGHT! I was PRAYING he was thinking about Amelia and not just the wedding/birthday bullshit... *sigh* one day, one day.


And I stopped writing because…because…” God it turned his stomach just to say the words. “because it annoyed her.”

this just broke my heart. seriously... i was beginning to have mixed feelings about Ameiia before, but this chapter, fuck this confession, just sealed the deal. bitch needs to go down!

and the music.... omg she's like his muse or something. i just loved the music playing in his head and there's a connection there with Charlie. omg he needs to open his god damn eyes and see that! its her you should be with STUPID not Amelia! LOL!



Author's Response: YESSSSSSS!!! All the lines you picked out were faves of mine for this chapter. Weaving these characters is just so intricate and FUN. and the MUSIC!!!! I'm really glad you're picking up on the nuances! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Jan 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 17

she needs to add actress to her freakin resume.... fake ass bitch.

UGH! this chapter was an emotional rollar coaster, lol! at first i was worried, thinking Justin would cave and meet her at the sushi place.

then i was shocked beyond belief when she showed up. but her pissy attitude began pissing me off. but WOW she actually has a heart? and I think that ... well... maybe she's not Satan and I began noticing why Justin was so hung up on her.

BUT SURPRISE! Bitch showed up again! Justin better listen to the inkling of doubt that's nagging at him. its called intuition baby... eat your pork pulled sandwitch and wake the fuck up! lol!

*sigh* ... if this story was reality I think i'd pull all my hair out by now, lol! :)



Author's Response: BAHAHAHAHAHA VIKKI! I love your review! Hearing your reactions to the key parts of the chapter is awesome and great because they're the exact reactions I was looking for! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Feb 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 18 pt 3

“HEEEEEEEEEEEEY PARTY PEOPLE!!!!!”

LOL! OMG!

giiiirl! I dont even know where to begin! holyfuckingshit!

This 3part chapter was a damn roller coaster ride of emotions. First I was kinda sad with him playing the piano and Ameila... ugh.... being Ameila.

But Trace shows up he's just a ball of amusement. And i laugh and laugh.

Then Charlie shows up and YES YES YES! FINALLY! Justin's eyes start to open and hope is back. Then the coat... and the talking... then the bar convo with Trace and him rushing to save her. The dance! And the almost-kiss! OMGOMGOMG!

And then that BITCH ruined the night with the fucking candles! And why am I giving you a play by play? You wrote this! LOL!

Ok but yes... roller coaster! thats why I started rambling. But just WOW DUDE... best chapter ever. I know it was super long and you wont hear me complaining. But I hope it didn't run you dry and some more will be popping up soon? yes? please? I'm seriously dying to see what happens next! :)



Author's Response: BAHAHAHA I love the "party people" part too. I could just SEE that in my head, like Charlotte reeming Trace out and then she looks over like O_O where's Justin? and then cut to him being sloppy ass drunk on stage hahahaha. Seriously I have so much fun writing this story *is a dork* I'm glad you liked the rollercoaster-ness. That was the main reason I didn't chop this up and post at different times. Didn't wanna lose the momentum. I'm not quite burnt out yet so hopefully updates by the end of the week *crosses fingers* Thanks for reading and reveiwing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Feb 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 18 pt 4

fuck justin! why? whhhhyyyy? *slams head on desk*

what is it gonna take huh? what is gonna take? does ameilia need to shoot your dogs or something?

wait... does he still have his dogs? omg she probably put them to sleep already.

fuck.

i hate her. and her stupid tears were probably fake. and i hate her.

and charlie! with the cds and the cupcake... omg! how can he NOT love her? how?!?

damn it! you need to fix this heather! lol!



Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHA OMG HIS DOGS!!!! They're in Memphis with his Mom but you are half right in that Amelia got rid of them lol. Charlotte is made of win with that cupcake I'll give you that and I'll try and fix it as best I can. You know these characters are damn stubborn! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 20

no! no! no! Get the hell off the bike thingy and go after her!

UUUUGGHHH! *shakes fiance!J* COME ON MAN!

he needs a good smack upside his head and I am raising my hand for the position. srsly... he can NOT go through with this wedding! He kissed Charlie! He loves her damn it... not the Wicked Witch of the Upper Westside ok! (wait... are they on the westside? eastside? lol!)

something needs to happen... I think Charlie should jump his ass, fight for him... lol! i dunno! something! this wedding can not happen! no! no! no!



Author's Response: HAHAHAHAHAHA Oh Vikki I love your reviews! Your reactions are just what I love to hear coming from the readers! *elbows Fiance!J hard* ahem....ANYWAY...I agree the boy needs to get his head on straight and realize Amelia isn't right for him (itiseastsidebythewayomg) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Apr 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 22

OMGZ!

I dont think I was breathing properly while reading this chapter...

LMAO! HOLY SHIT!

I can not wait to see what happens in California! eeep! :)

 

ooo btw... its up!

http://nsyncfiction.net/unwritten



Author's Response: ZOMG YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY I'm really excited for this, as I have said in about every place that you've posted the announcement lol! I'm excited to hear what kinda questions I'm gonna be getting *bounce* California is gonna be...interesting. Thats all I'm sayin' Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!