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(Un)Tying the Knot by SomethingBlue42 (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 847]

Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232032
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -
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Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 27

this is just.... no this is wrong. i think. maybe. right? lol!

i'm so confused! am i cheering for charlie? or Justin doing the "right" thing and focusing on his relationship with Amelia?

I dont like her... 99% of the time anyway. but at the same time Charlie doesnt derserve her sloppy seconds.

damn you! i'm just as lost as Justin now! lol!



Author's Response: SEE!!! Now you know how I feel. I get all twisted and turned around too a lot of times. Its good to know I have you thinking! And I just wanna say again how awesome I think you are for all the work you put into the archive. Its so great to have this place where everyone is so talented and generous with feedback and I know we wouldn't have it if it wasn't for you Vikki! *hugs* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Love Song by azchickadee (PG-13) [Comments - 208]
Past Featured Story

A chance encounter with JC Chasez leaves Rachel Kline even more in love with the boy she's idolized since she was fifteen, but what happens when she never hears from him and meets up with him again a year later? Will the chemistry they shared still be there?

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 4
Genres: Romance

Series: Crazy Love
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 247527 - Hits: 168041
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 18, 2008 - Last Updated: Dec 30, 2008 -
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Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 31

Thats right JC! Make Rob back the f*uck off! LOL! Omg I love 'territorial' JC....there is nothing sexier than a man claiming his girl, *swoon*.

And that call from Chris has got me going as crazy as Rachel....what are these boys up to??

great update...can't wait for more :)



Author's Response: sigh...I love territorial JC too!  :)  And, as far as what the boys are up too...you're just going to have to wait and find out like Rachel.  mwahahaha!!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Oct 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 30

aw poor justin! love this story btw....every jc girls dream come true, LOL! for real? this is your first story? hmmm.... *wonders if this is really jc's secret girlfriend* LOL!



Author's Response: ahahahahahaha!!!  JC's secret girlfriend?!  I wish!!  lol!!  And no, this isn't the first story I've ever written.  It is however, my first fan fiction.  I've been writing stories for a long time now.  This is just the first one that I'm letting other people besides my best friend read :)

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 32

ok I totally melted when JC brought out the french.... seriously you killed me. *swoon*

...the crepes, the candlelight, the liner notes dedication, and Miles Davis! My god I love this man!

Yay for Megan and Jackson! and OMG .... poor Rach is so not ready for Joshua Jr.

great update sweetie... just the JC fix I needed :)

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 33

"Yeah..." he drawled.  "Talking.  That's...that's what I meant."

best line of the chapter... LOL!

omg... you know what this means right? Rachel needs to hook Audrey and Justin together! I think we went over this previously? if this is you laying down the beginning pieces then ... YAY! :)

poor Megs though...it sounds like that post pardom depression thingy... totally didnt spell that right i think. Rach better keep an eye on her.

and JC... god he's so adorable! with this nightmares and voicemail... he's so needy and in love *swoon* ... just marry the girl already! geez!



Author's Response:

um...pretty sure you're awesome!  Thanks for always reviewing.  It makes me happy to see one from you :)  I know, that line of JC's is great, huh? 

Oh! And just for the record we have NOT gone over the fact that Rachel needs to hook Aubrey and Justin up together before, but that is an interesting concept....hmmm...

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Nov 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 36

eeeee! you're my first update back from vacation and OMG i loved it! seriously this needs to be like a saga or something because i dont ever want to see an ending even come near me, ok?

first.... giggle @ Aubrey and Justin, love you to pieces for that. first the drink then the dropping of the cup and dish.... it was too cute and totally what I could picture happening to any of us. LOL!

i was SO teary-eyed at JC's confession, but i love his insecurities, it makes him that much more human and gives this story a whole new dimention.

and baby Scott! awww..... I had such a cheesy smile thinking of the moment JC was holding him and Rachel was beside him, hand on his back, awwww! we need a Joshua Jr.... not now, but soon!

but we seriously need to get Rob fired. Or at least lock him in a room with JC that has no windows. I cant believe he HUGGED her... ugh! She needs to get a "property of one-fine-ass Joshua Chasez" tattoo'd somewhere visible.

I'm greedy... so more soon please! :)



Author's Response: Okay, seriously?  You crack me up!!!  Loved the review!  LOL!!  I like the idea of Rachel getting that tatoo, cuz heaven knows if I were her, that'd be the first thing I'd do.  lol

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 38

ok I don't know what Rachel's problem was. If I was laying on that hotel bed and JC AND Justin walked in, I wouldn't be complaining....the more the merrier right? LOL!

but I love that she finally told him about Rob... "the thought of him touching you just makes me kind of crazy." ... yeah? understatement of the year!

and he dropped the "soulmate" bomb! I admit, I laughed! but then that kiss.... damn him! LOL!

JUSTIN! "...but just for the record my favorite color is baby blue." ... omg I couldnt stop laughing! and was that Aubrey-forshadowing I saw at the end of that scene? hmm? hmmm? *wink wink*

i love how he gave her the classic CP date... made me swoon! LOL! and I just may have forgiven you for the cliffhangers ... only because of the Wipeout love. but i don't get how she crushed on Luke... Han Solo was WAY hotter.

now I can't wait for the next update! no seriously... I can't... so stop reading and get busy writting girl! :)



Author's Response:

okay, first of all: you kill me!!  lol!!  Your reviews always make me laugh!

Yes, Rachel's a little slow sometimes.  I wouldn't be complaining either if those two men showed up in my room!

Of course JC dropped the soulmate bomb and took her on the classic CP date!  He's super cheesy and romantic like that! And that's why we love him! :)

Justin kills me too!  That whole "baby blue" scene was so much fun to write!  As for there being Aubrey-forshadowing...  Possibly... *evil grin*  I have to finish Rachel's story before I can even THINK about starting another one!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 37

OMFG Cheryl... I was about to plot your murder before I noticed the link for the next chapter... LOL!

I was like... "OH NO SHE DIDNT!" ....smart move! smart move!

oooooo and I lmao @ "Yeah, I'm here with...Clarence Adams."  ... priceless!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 39

hmm.... I dunno.... that knee of hers doesnt seem to be a good sign.

and wtf ROB! ugh.... i hate him!

"I don't know very many people who would put up with that dirty mind of yours." .... uhh... *raises hand franticly* ... LOL!

and you better stop teasing Cheryl! how dare you go from one scene with Justin, then the next with Aubrey! I've told you how I feel about those two! *pouts*

and wow... chapter 39?! when did that happen? LOL!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 40

i knew that was the nsync site Rachel was talking about! lol!

i remember watching that scooby episode when it aired, my nephew is a die-hard fan and i so happen to be visiting at the time... fate, i know!

i cant begin to tell you how adorable this chapter was... i swear it gave me a toothache, lol!

and you're just messin' with me now! Justin & Aubrey in Rachel's dream?? COME ON! LOL! Enough with the teasing and get them together in a room, hopefully at some party involving lots of alcohol and reckless behavior.

oh yes... one more thing. marry the girl JC! marry her and have lots and lots and lots of babies!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 41

JC to the rescue! LOL!

but ooooooo he's gonna be so mad when he finds out she didnt file that harrassment thingy.... tsk tsk tsk.

but tons of awwww's for him flying home early and not being about to be without her for 2 weeks! and giggle's at how he wants to kidnap her when he tours with nsync again.

hehehehehe! nsync tour! man i wish this was reality! :)

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 42

OMGOMGOMGOMOMG!

first.... FINALLY! Took you long enough Mr. Joshua Scott Chasez! lol! But seriously... that was beautiful. *wipes tear*

second...

"You gave me the strength to stand up to Rob." She told him.  "Without you constantly forcing me to face all my demons over this last year and finally deal with all of my issues I never would have had the courage to do what I did yesterday."

I just love how they've help each other become these better versions of themselves :)

and third...

"That's what you get for dating a world famous musician." Aubrey reminded her with a laugh.  "Don't the perks that come along with being with him make up for the fact that he's gone a lot?" She asked.

Rachel looked at her, one brow raised.  "Ask me that question again when you're in a serious relationship with someone and he's always out of town on business."

Aubrey smiled.  "Fair enough." She conceded.

You know what I'm going to say now dont you? lol! Come on... you knew it was coming! Its Justin and Aubrey time... get to it girl! lol!

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

omg Cheryl... I'm crying! that was just... omg! I really loved this story, it was so good and I'm just crazy enough to want to reread all 45 chapters... lol!

this right here...

"Hi." He whispered, blinking back tears again.  He smiled as she opened her tiny mouth and yawned, her eyes closing as she went back to sleep.  "Oh, Rach." He breathed.  "She's perfect." He said, looking at his wife.  He turned and handed her the baby, sitting down beside them on the bed.  He put his arm around her shoulders then leaned over, pressing and holding his lips against Rachel's temple as she looked down at the baby.  "Thank you." He whispered.

is what started the waterworks! I had to get up and find the damn tissues... lol!

and of course you had me dying with laughter with both of these lines...

"Not just any baby." Megan smiled.  "You are having JC Chasez's baby!"  Rachel laughed as she continued.  "Like right now.  You." Megan pointed at her, "Are having the baby of the man whose poster you had on your wall growing up.  How does that make you feel?"

and...

"I did not start crying!" He said.  Rachel looked at him pointedly.  "Alright," he relented, ducking his head.  "Maybe I cried...a little."

I'm going to miss your writing... I hope you start your next story soon. Thanks for writing and sharing this awesome story and I hope you have a wonderful New Year! :)

Reviewer: Vikki Signed
Date: Dec 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 45: Epilogue

i had to come back and answer your question... since voting hasnt begun yet, this bumps you from "Intriguing Work In Progress" to "Remarkable Multi-Parter" which would be for completed works.

you're also now eligable for other categories, visit the site and take a look. you'll be stiff competition :)

oooo! and i'm your #200 review! lol!

Another Song (All Over Again) by Mere (NC-17) [Comments - 104]

"You've been alone, you've been afraid, I've been a fool in so many ways. But I could change my life, if you thought you might try to love me..."

A two part story about Justin Timberlake and his identical twin brother James.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 5
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 83212 - Hits: 43544
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 02, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 13, 2010 -
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Date: Nov 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

ahhhh loved this chapter. i think it was great to just take it all in from James' point of view.... and OMG James.... he's such a dog now! lol! and wow.... that's really sexy.... lol! I think i'll take james over justin any day *wink wink* :)

but yes... somethings going on there between katie and justin... yes ma'am!

love it... give us more soon!