There was a penniless, wallet less, white boy in my house in the middle of North Philly with cuts and bruises and memory loss and all I had was a pocket knife, three bandages, and a cat to protect me. UPDATED 9/21
omg i'm crying... that was just fucking heartbreaking. justin loses his baby... maybe his baby cause jessica cheated on him... cheated on him! he's going back to a cheater because she's a good cheater? i'm with sash at this point... an asshole is an asshole no matter how you paint it. but i'm crossing my fingers that justin realizes so because... well damn it i need happy endings... LOL!
and god the check... the car... the kiss *sobs*
i hate you... but i love this story. and i'm emotional and needy right now so update more soon.
"Sweetheart, you are my vacation," .... *squeal* Justin is coming back! Justin is coming back! Justin is coming back!
god... i dont know what it was... but I LOVED this chapter! you had me all teary-eyed with poor Sash crying at the window.
then the box, the letter, the CHARM braclet... man that gets me everytime.
then TARGET... "Matthew Hanes"... OMG!
and YES he needs to drop Jessica like a bad habit... and maybe some time back at home with Sash is just what he needs to finally step up and do whats right... exactly what Sash said... make HIMSELF happy!
this story is a drug and i dont wanna be sober... LOL! update soon missy!
damn! i love this story!
it was too short... but let me not be greedy... I will take what I can get! LOL!
I loved her her meeting with Tiny, soon followed by the awkwardness ... and i loved how they talked about it, I was scared they'd ignore it and then not get pasted it.
and i love how Justin opened up to her... and she told him she was his friend.... awwww! hopefully not for long because lets be honest, he loves her! come on!
he got her jeans! no... he MADE her jeans! if thats not love then what is huh? ;)
i cant believe he dissed her like that... she was so obvious with wanting his fine ass in her bed again. poor Sash. Matthew would've been right behind her. :(
OMGIHATEYOU!!!
ok first... LOL at his smug little ass in the kitchen! oh i loved it! I for one, would've slapped him, but thats just cause I love to prove people wrong, lol!
but then OMG ... "I love you, baby. All I see is you...All I need is you..." ... ahhhhhh! you're killing me girl! you're killing me!
I was like... YEAH! He's gonna break down her stupid little wall and she's gonna see that he's there! he's here! for her! because he loves her and that's what matters and no matter what happens... its love baby! and love makes everything better! and then yes... hot monkey sex upstairs for all to enjoy!
but no! you couldn't give us that! you meanie! no... we get a "taste". a fucking taste! no! no! no! no! I want the whole god damn meal! not a fucking taste! lol!
*sigh*
but you know what? you kinda made up for it with my favorite lines ever....
"Or I'll come to the conclusion that you're gay," I chided, pushing him out of my way so that I could get to my door.
"I got you off before either of us were completely naked. I think that speaks for itself." Touche.
LMAO! oh man... I love those two crazy kids.
you need to post more... soon missy! *taps foot impatiently*
i fucking LOVE this story so much that it cant be healthy! LOL!
A six pack on him and a heart attack for me. I looked away. "That's all man muscle!" He laughed to himself, completely unaware of what he just did to my libido.serious? serious?!?!?! omgiwouldhavejumpedhisass!
I just loved that whole part... the breakfast, the strawberries! ugh!
I took another swing, pathetically happy that his lips had touched exactly where mine had.
I giggled like a 12 yr old for like 10 mins straight! no lie! THAT IS SO ME! you seriously went inside my head... damn you!
and dinner. fuck jessica i swear she just HAD to call and ruin the moment. and just when things started to look better... with him saving her life and ice cream... the cheek kiss... or the kiss-of-hot-monkey-sex-death. damn! damn! damn! damn! damn! damn!
"Oh, no, it's fine, of course..." I said, smiling weakly, "I just thought you were staying a little longer, is all."
"I could, if you want," he said, but it didn't sound too sure, "I can just push back a couple things-"
NO! NO! NO! Not if SHE wants, because YOU want to! You stupid, stupid boy! UGH! *pouts*
but he did call her sweetness... sweetness! yay! I love the tiny little glimmer of hope and I'll take it! lol!
And I LMAO @ Disney World... he loves her and would give her the world in a handbasket if he could. *sigh*
love it... gimme more soon :)
OMG! This is like the biggest cliffhanger in the world!!! lol!
please tell me your posting the next chapter like... tomorrow maybe??
omg!
ok fine... I'll hate you later.
but we must discuss this...
I gently caressed his light side burns, getting a feel of his curly brown hair. He looked at me then, quizzically.
"Lint," I lied, pretending to rub my finger against my lap to remove the "lint".
AHHHHH! LOL! I loved that! You always have this weird moments that I WOULD DO and I love it! :)
And I love Clarissa.... her words of wisdom did some much kicking of Sash's ass.
oh please update... soon! very soon! i'm dying already! lol!
NNNNOOOOOOOOOO! fuckingshitmotherfucker!
gawd! rip my heart out with a freakin spoon damn!
ok i need a moment... and i need some tissues. poor sash! my heart is like.... bleeding here!
why couldnt he just lie! damn! its sucks that he feels something but he's too fucking slow to realize what it really is. and she just... gave it all out there and .... and.... gawd justin!
and that kiss! OH SNAP! i totally didnt see that coming. but but but but.... "I guess that's cheating, but I'll never get to kiss you again," he told me, "I had to do it one last time." .... NO NO NO! Go get your damn head on straight, drop jessica's cheating ass... and come back to sash! get it done and do it right you fucker.
ok ... I'm done yelling at your fictional justin now.
thank you for making me this psycho ass chick who gets mad at fictional people.
I liked Justin's POV ... I was like "whoa! what?" and then paused, trying to remember if you've done it before, lol!
it was cool to see what was going on in that Timberlake head of his. So to answer your question, "a little of both", depending on however you see it in the chapter.
as for this chapter... all I have to say is: About Damn Time! lol!
now he needs to get his ass back on a plane and get Sash! and that's if she even wants his ass back after dissin' her like that! hmph! :)
ok... ok... this is fixable. you can fix this!
he loves her, she loves him, the other one knows it. yes... fixable. FIX THIS!
and can I just tell you I was squealing in laughter a lot and had to leave the room! lol! *hugs my laptop*
loved the chapter... love love love!
WHAT? EMBARASSED? damn liar... you know you rocked that scene! *dies*
srsly I need a cold ass shower right about now... lol!
*continues reading! so much catching up to do!*
ooooooooo that's gonna be GOOD omg! I need this next chapter asap lol!
damn... I feel so bad for Sash, I mean, ok! Justin's an ASS for cheating and cheating so quick! and cheating with JESS of all woman! but he's soooo sorrrrrrry *pouts*
i dont think i could be that strong, nope not at all. and i'm not gonna lie, its gonna be great if/when she cracks and they make up lol!
nnnoooooooooooo!
they we're doing so good! holding hands, and Justin's awesome monologue to her mom, and then the teasing and the punching and maaaaaaan!
they need to get right again, the whole ending broke my heart girl. :(
omg i luv your brain. i really really really do. wow i havent read Letting Go in so long... but i'm DYING to see where you go with this. luv you, seriously i do. dont keep me waiting too long. :)
Author's Response: I shall try...
Yay an update! thank you... i was so bumbed this morning, i needed something good to take my mind away. :)
LOL @ "Dogs don't judge you even if you are on an acid trip." ... priceless.
but damn! *shivers* i totally forgot about Carl, thanks a lot for making me remember... blah! I don't have as much control as you, i totally would have called the cops.
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