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(Un)Tying the Knot by SomethingBlue42 (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 847]

Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232249
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -
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Date: Nov 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 33

Well, since I can't reply directly to an author reponse, I'll have to leave my comments in another "review"

Thanks for clearing up the accounting issue.  Between that, the off the book dinners, and how Amelia seems to have to marry even tho she doesn't seem to be in love, I was thinking she was marrying him for his money.  Sorta like how in Titanic Rose was being forced to marrying Cal because she was broke.

I agree with the suggestion for posting deleted scenes - just as long as you write the last two chapters first. ;)



Author's Response: Yeah sorry I couldn't find a way to fit it in the actual story. Don't worry the last two chapters are my top writing priority at the moment! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Jan 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Epilogue

Awww, they're so cute together.  I really can't do anything but gush about the story.  This was an awesome ending to a great story.  I no longer want to kill either Charlie or Justin and that was so Amelia to send him flowers he's allergic to.  I'm smiling at the depiction of the concert, I can see it, feel it happening as if I were there.  You're a wonderful writer and I can't wait to had over to your site to read all the DVD-type extras.  Any plans yet for sequal?

Author's Response: No plans for a sequel. If I do have more for them it'll be in one-shots like I've done for ALWL. Putting together the extras for this story was SERIOUSLY so much fun so I hope you enjoy those. I'm glad you no longer want to kill Justin or Charlotte. That's what I was going for with the ending, people not thinking that either of them were an idiot anymore haha. Which was a big reason my editor pushed for the epilogue. She said you guys deserved to see them a year or so from when they got together and see that he had stayed true to his promise and he WAS making her happy and hadn't fucked it up again. Anyway thanks for sticking with me through this thing and for reading and reviewing!!!

Talk to You by jacque_morneau (NC-17) [Comments - 26]
Past Featured Story

 

When JC travels to Minnesota to do voiceover work for Killer Movie, he is focused on getting his career back on track. Thanks to Mother Nature he meets Hannah, a bar owner married to her work and her burgeoning songwriting hobby. The two form an instant friendship, but soon find that relationships of any kind aren't easy to maintain when you're 2,000 miles apart.



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, General, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 17
Wordcount: 46052 - Hits: 38093
Complete?: No - Published: Jun 04, 2008 - Last Updated: Nov 21, 2008 -
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Date: Nov 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow...  Good update.  Hopefully this is the wakeup call he needs.  Can't wait to read more.

A Million Faces in a Crowd by Mel514 (NC-17) [Comments - 161]

She's a songwriter from Chicago. He's a music producer living the life in LA. One performance at a club leads to their chance meeting. She immediately dislikes him, yet he's drawn to her. So what happens when they begin to understand one another?

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, General, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 44
Wordcount: 189050 - Hits: 215038
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 27, 2008 - Last Updated: Jun 22, 2010 -
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Date: Nov 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11

great update.  Can't wait to hear what's happened that JC doesn't sing anymore.

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Nov 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Hot!! but I don't have a good feeling about the missed phone call...

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Feb 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

WooHoo - an update!!  I'm glad JC was finally able to confide in Carly why he's not making his own music.  Hopefully with her encouragement, he'll reconsider his decision.  Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: We'll see what magic Carly can muster up! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing :]

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Woohoo, an update!!!  I wonder what Tyler's got up his sleeve...

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Jan 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Holy hottness, it's about damn time they got together.  I just hope they both can continue to move on from their pasts and not let it spoil the future.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! And yes, I know I am the evil of all writers, making them wait so long.. lol Thanks for reading and reviewing:)

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Apr 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

no, no, no, no, no, no and NO!!!!  they can not be kissing.  I can not be reading this.  Stupid Gavin has to go and screw all this up.  They've worked too damn hard to be where they're at for him to interfer.  NO!!  I will not have it!!!  Go away Gavin!  Good update, can't wait for more.  :)

Author's Response: I didn't realize that he'd be such a hated addition to this story.. lol Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

I so hope JC kicks Gavin's ass.  Good update. I'm glad they're starting to trust each other and JC somewhat letting his ex go.

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Jun 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 (Part One)

Thanks for the updates.  I hope they're able to work things out.  I have several theories on what's wrong with Carley... now, just waiting on pins and needles to see if any are right.  Hope to see another update soon.  :)

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Jun 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22 (Part Two)

WooHoo - he's working on his own album... now, if only life would imitate art... :)

This was an awesome update.  It's good to see there's hope for their relationship.  Now, if only Carley can see how much JC reallly does care for her..



Author's Response: Yes, us fans who can't get the music, create it in fiction land. Haha I'm glad you enjoyed the update! Thanks so much for reviewing =)

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Nov 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 30

Just got caught up on the last few chapters.  I really want to reach in and shake the both of them and yell "why do you keep screwing this up".  Good last few chapters.  I can't wait to read more.  :)

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Dec 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 32

Good update.  I'm glad to see they're working on it and Cassidy is pushing Carly to realize what she has.  I'm glad he showed up.  I just hope it doesn't backfire with the record company.  They've got to reach some sort of compromise because both are miserable without the other.

Can't wait to read more.  :)

Reviewer: hp5010 Signed
Date: Mar 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 37

Ok, finally had time to read the last three chapters.  Talk about a roller coaster!!!  Very good chapters, dramatic, serious, a bit of humor, heart stopping, aww gushing, just all around really good.  Good to see they're committed to working out their isses.  I too sided with Carly that it wasn't right time for a proposal then, but I think we're headed to the right time shortly.  And yes, JC in sweats and a tee shirt is very sexy.  Keep up the good work. :)