girl you got me tearing up here, that letter from rie's momma was heartbreaking. and she still don't have it in her to let him love her, so sad. so sad. i'm hopin for a miracle in the next one but i just don't know. that was one helluva chapter, you got a way with words girl.
i have been reading this story from the jump and i love it but man you are killing me here. if i was justin i would give up now that was so dirty. he can just go head back to his ex now if rie is acting like this. what else can he do?? he is so right she's a coward and he will leave if she not careful. she better get it together and soon he's too good for this. great chapter
girl that was amazing. i cried and laughed and i thought for real he was bout to end up with talis and i was maaaad. but you did a great job with this story. rie is one of my all time favorite people even though shes not real. i hope you make a sequel.
She had him at hello... He had her at goodbye.lov-ing it, kerry washington is my girl! can't wait to see where this is going
Author's Response: Well thank you, ma\'am! And I love Kerry, too; bitch is flawless. I hope you enjoyyy!
oh noooo, what is girlfriend doing? she needs to send him packin to the left and get with justin, i'on care how young he is. why is she putting up with this? update soon, she got me heated
great chapter, luving the tension between them right now
Woah did she really get married to this mfer??? Whaaaat is she dooooing?!?!
Things aren’t always black and white. Relationships, situations, people - they're complicated and messy, and often heartbreaking, even when they make you happy. Sometimes they’re gray, sometimes they’re blue, and when Justin meets Zooey, everything suddenly turns… yellow.Oh man oh man. I didn't want that to happen but i am soooo glad it did. So much emotion up in there... you have a way with words i tell ya. now i'm just waitin for the other shoe to drop because this is about to be a beautiful mess and i love every word of it! great updates and song choice was superb girlfriend
Oh yes so glad u are back with another story. Is it time to pick sides yet? Imma wait it out a couple chapters but I think team zooey is in my future but his interaction with both of them was damn cute. We'll see we'll see. Good start girlfriend
Author's Response: Yes, I am back, hopefully with no hiatuses on this one lol. And you can pick sides whenever you're ready! But if you want to wait, that's fine, because I don't think I have one yet either, even if it is more than a little obvious where this is headed lol. But I'm glad you like what you see so far. Thank you, ma'am!
Yep I am liking zooey alot if I do say so myself. I know this isn't gona be tied up in a box with a nice bow on top but I hope they end up together. Of course I'm still saving for her to do somethin I don't like but for now... me and zooey are cool. Great great up-update
Author's Response: Awesome, I love Zooey, too. You're right, though, it's definitely not gonna be a neat and tidy love story, but I'll see what I can do about them ending up together. And yeah, you should allow that you'll change your mind, but... I hope you don't! lol. Thank so much for the review, hun!
is it bad that I can't wait for the havoc zooey and justin are about to wreak? I don't like seeing people hurt but I do love a good drama so keep on keepin on girl. Loves this!
Author's Response: Not bad at all! I'm glad you're excited. I'm excited to keep hearing what you think. I'll try to make it relatively painless but full of drama for you lol. Thanks, hun!
Dayum gina! I mean justin hurt my feelings right there so i know zooey is feeling a world of pain right now. i can't believe he went at her like that! And scarlett is so sweet I really feel for her if the wedding don't happen because of this situation. Ahhh this is all messed up, i don't know what i want in the end but i do want him and zooey to "kiss and make up" - minus the kissing part if he gets married lolol. Update soon girl, i need to know what's happnin next
Author's Response: Damn, I didn't mean for Justin to hurt your feelings, just Zooey's! lol But I think he's just a little frustrated, he didn't mean to go there. I like Scarlett too, so don't worry about her wedding. You can worry about Justin and Zooey kissing and making up, though, I can't promise that... lol. Either way, I appreciate your review, mama! I'll try to make it easier on you next time.
Oh man oh man, those two are just adorable. i don't even know how else to describe them. wedding? adorable. vows? adorable. dinner? adorable! I really did not think mister man would ever end up married so i have to let this all sink in. Still like zooey but i'm sayin... scarlett & justin just took a big leap into favorite couple status. update like yesterday please?
Author's Response: Haha, I think adorable is a pretty perfect way to describe them. They just kind of make you smile, don't they? I debated with whether or not Justin should actually go through with it, but realistically, I don't think anyone would cancel their wedding for someone they met just a couple of months before. So yeah, he is married now! And you don't *have* to like Zooey, if you're diggin' Scarlett and Justin a little more, then just go with it! Either way, you're in for some... fun. *EVL* (That's Evil Villan Laugh, jsyk!)
Oh man oh man. At this point I am just feelin for them all but esp. Scarlett. I know its not as simple as gettin a divorce so you can explore your urges but homeboy took vows and he's just throwin em out the window. And she don't know a dang thing. Its bout to be bad isnt it? BIG sigh.
I guess it is what it is. Maybe they need to go thru this to figure out that this is not a good idea. & I wish they had another option but then I guess there wouldn't be a story plot. Girl just update soon, I am dyin to know what's happnin' next.
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