Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: May 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Bedtime
Finally she sees! Thank God! I thought I was gonna have to persoanlly counsel this chick lol!
Girl Sash was so nervous at the beginning I was nervous for her and then Justin started thinking about his cousin and her reaction I started to get a little worried. Everything seemed to work out though but then again like he said it might be different when things get really serious for them.
Joyce was a God send and I like the way you wrote her. She was very warm and welcoming and I can imagine she's like that in real life.
Girlfriend I have to say the ending was the best not just because they go a little intimate (and that was hot I might add) but because you could really feel and see how much their relationship has grown just by him bringing her to his home.
The part with steven at the end was classic and it really made the reader see how much of a real couple they are. Justin was so sweet and I'm very pround of Sash for seeming like she's atleast open to trying now. I can't wait to see what tomorrow brings. The fact that their taking one day at a time is great!
Wonderful chapater as always!