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Do Over by Timberlake (NC-17) [Comments - 551]
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There was a penniless, wallet less, white boy in my house in the middle of North Philly with cuts and bruises and memory loss and all I had was a pocket knife, three bandages, and a cat to protect me. UPDATED 9/21



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 4, Season 5, Season 6
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 44
Wordcount: 253097 - Hits: 202182
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 30, 2008 - Last Updated: Sep 21, 2010 -
Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Sweetness

Their random conversations are cute.

Justin needs to work on not bring Jessica up.  He seems to do that at the wrong time.  So you called her last night and didn't sleep because of it.  Don't tell Sash that and then he laughs at something they talked about and didn't share what it was causing Sash's mind to play all kinda of tricks on her.

And ya damn right you came back way to early you fool!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Waiting

Justin, you better love her!  You better love her!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Cheating

I didn't think it was possible for Justin to make it any worse but he proved me dead wrong.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Conclusions

I have to say I do like reading Justin's point of view even though he kinda makes me more mad at him.  He left Sash a second time to come home and sleep next to that skeleton?

What an asshole! He was worried about Jessica hating him and Jessica shedding tears over him!  What about all the tears Sash as shed and is still shedding? What about all of the times she was forced to eat shit because of him?  At this point I don't know whether I want her with him or not!

What am I say? Of course I want him with Sash.  I was just venting.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Hesitation

Good for you Sash! Play hard to get girl. He deserves more then getting sprayed in the face.

I like that you had Justins mother remind him that he fucked up twice with Sash.  I think he should be reminded of that several more times.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Taste

Okay, as much as I hate to admit this, Justin was right to stop before things got outta hand. But Sash was right not to forgive and forget so easy.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Big Mac

Loved it! Loved it!  They both got over a bit mountain.  Sash is going into this with her eyes open and I like that.  I really really really love this story chica.  Please keep it up.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Apr 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Friends

Yay!  My stories back!  Off to read.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Apr 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Friends

What the fuck Sash!  She is her own worst enemy foreal.  Even though she pissed me off I really loved the chapter.  Justin was understanding as always and for him to be willing to wait says alot.  If he's willing to give a little for them to have a relationship Sash should be willing to give a little as well.  So far she's saying she doesn't want to have to do or change anything and in any relationship that's not very realisitic.  I really think she's still stuck on Mathew and the future she thought she would have with him and she's not willing to let it go yet.  Maybe she'll realize that a future with Justin can be just as great and stop focusing on all the negative.  I just hope she doesn't stick to his friends thing forever.  She's driving Justin and I both crazy. 

Nice add chica!

Sorry about you not getting in to your art program.  Life sometimes sucks. Don't give up though. It''ll happen for you.

Add when you can.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: May 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Testing

Damn good chapter!

Message to Sash:  Relax girl... I do see why you're so freaked.  Everything that going through your mind is typical for anyone going into a relationship but some stuff is like taken to the max times three. 

I love this story.  You don't need to rewrite this chapter.  it was on point. I like the fact that Justin is bending over backwards to get this girl.  Let's hope his efforts are worth it in the long run and she doesn't freak out on him and bail.  You can tell he's truely madly in love with him.  He's truely redeemed himself in my eyes but I was so very pissed when he got his memory back and bounced with out a second glance her way... okay he did give her a second glance but he still pissed me off.  like I said though he's redeemed himself.  I'm so excited about L.A.  I know Lynn is gonna love her but everyone else?  I'm just as nervious as she his.  You just never know these days.

I have to say again outstanding chapter.  I'm glad Sash is at least testing driving now.  Hopefully she won't wreck the car.

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: May 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Bedtime

Finally she sees!  Thank God!  I thought I was gonna have to persoanlly counsel this chick lol!

Girl Sash was so nervous at the beginning I was nervous for her and then Justin started thinking about his cousin and her reaction I started to get a little worried. Everything seemed to work out though but then again like he said it might be different when things get really serious for them.

Joyce was a God send and I like the way you wrote her.  She was very warm and welcoming and I can imagine she's like that in real life. 

Girlfriend I have to say the ending was the best not just because they go a little intimate (and that was hot I might add) but because you could really feel and see how much their relationship has grown just by him bringing her to his home.

The part with steven at the end was classic and it really made the reader see how much of a real couple they are.  Justin was so sweet and I'm very pround of Sash for seeming like she's atleast open to trying now.  I can't wait to see what tomorrow brings. The fact that their taking one day at a time is great!

Wonderful chapater as always!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Nothing

Oh! Hell No! For some reason that's all I can say to that! On! Hell No! 

Rachel just ordered her self an ass kicking!

Add Girl! Add!



Author's Response: LOL i that expression says exactly how everybody feels, haha. rach needs her ass kicked really bad, but lets let the anger build, shall we? lol thanks for the review!

Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Jun 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Beach

Loved, loved, loved this chapter.  I'm so glad Sash made Justin talk to her about the real reason he flew his family out.  As long as they're still talking and communicating ain't nothing they can't get through; that's why Sash needs to talk to him about her insecurities dealing with not trusting their love completely but I guess everything will come out in due time.  As a saed after reading last chapter I still think Racheal's a bitch and it's probably not gonna change lol. The very end of the chapter had me on the edge of my seat girl.  I was so scared for Sash but I completely love the reaction she got from Justin after nearly drowning; you could sense and feel how much he truely loves her by it and it's a hell of a lot.  I really hope they can make what they have work and last for ever.

great add!

add soon!



Author's Response: i'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter and i'm just as happy that sash went and made justin talk about what he was feeling. shocking! lol you'd think he'd have an easier time with that since sash is the tougher cookie. ah well, it was settled and their love continues despite rach's bitch ass. we'll see what we can do about that later. thanks for reviewing!

Three months pregnant and alone. Beyonce finds love through her best friend Justin.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 43641 - Hits: 34230
Complete?: Yes - Published: Nov 28, 2008 - Last Updated: Nov 28, 2008 -
Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I just wanted to say I love all of your stories, especially the Justin and Beyonce ones. I had just started to read your stuff right before your website was shut down.  Please please post more of your stories on here.

Justin and his wife Sasha decide to celebrate Christmas day a little differently than the rest…putting their own little spin to the holiday as they partake in the spirit of the season.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Alternate Universe, Fantasy, Humor, Romance, Supernatural

Series: None
Chapters: 6
Wordcount: 13843 - Hits: 16450
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 08, 2008 - Last Updated: Dec 11, 2008 -
Reviewer: treasure Signed
Date: Mar 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

I like the idea of a vampire christmas and Justin as a vampire is just plain sexy.  Since the leading lady's name is Sash I can't help but imagine she's beening played by Beyonce...i know I'm crazy. lol