"How can one not dream while writing? It is the pen which dreams. The blank page gives the right to dream.” -- Gaston Bachelard
Just trying to free my mind through writing...
Lying here pretending that you’re closer than you are
Swear I heard you whispering “would someone break my fall?”
Memories of kisses fill my dreams until the dawn
So come to me
So come to me
J.C. Chasez - "Come To Me"
oooh, sneaky! i like it! aurora, thats a sexy name! keep it comin ;)
What everyone's thinking as Trace pops the question.
what?!?! poor trace! he's getting shafted - once again! My heart broke for him. This was great. I wish there was more, but I liked it. Great job.
Author's Response: thank you so much! indeed, it's a very tragic situation for trace... i felt bad for him while writing it. not only does she not love him back, he's proposing & there's a possibility that she'll just be honest w/ him & say no in front of a lot of ppl. or she might lie & break his heart later down the line when even more feelings have been invested. gah! now i just might have to write more to c where the story takes me. thanks again tho for reading and reviewing; i deeply appreciate it.
well hot flipping damn...
Author's Response: haha thanks girl! Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
Because...obviously, I loved it. I mean, it’s your work, how can I not? The air of mystery from beginning to end is just perfect. We plan down to the last detail of Christmas, awaiting the unknown. What will I get? What will I give? What will the new year bring? All that lovely stuff, so hats off to the mystery. Now, your impeccable use of imagery and description was just mind-blowing. You truly set up the scene as if the reader was right there. Being able to create the atmosphere is a true talent; it’s no easy feat. It was a rollercoaster of emotions that kept me on edge, so bravo. I loved it.
Très magnifique, ma cherie!
Joey helps Mack come to terms with growing up.
A Joey/Mack friendship one-shot.
Oh my....I LAUGHED TOO LOUD WITH THIS ONE! HA! POOR MACK! I loved it!
Every day we make choices that change the course of our lives. Every minute choice leads to another which leads to where you are standing today. Some choices are the best, and the other... well other are simply a necessary part of the process.
Everyone's happily ever after, isn't a fairytale, it's a journey.
One choice, one decision, changes everything.
Sometimes one night changes everything.
Well, first of all, I hate you. No, I’m joking. Ok, maybe just a bit.
You already know how I feel about this chapter, but here it goes one more time. Because, well, I enjoy reading what other people comment. I like knowing how differently others thought of the same thing I read. Plus, I'm just nosy :)
The song was perfect. Sometimes when lyrics are incorporated into the writing, it takes me a second or two to figure out the song. This time, however, I just knew it. I saw it. I saw the whole scene. I saw how something as innocent as tinkering on the keys could lead to this huge landslide. It only takes a little bit of wind to cause a tidalwave.Three lines stood out: 1) she wanted parts of her life part à uh, hello! We all wish there was a fucking rewind button! It simply broke my heart knowing she was human. Because she is, and your writing has humanized her. 2) Listen to her words. She’s telling you her entire story à We don’t hide. People hurting don’t hide. It’s the people around them that don’t hear their calls for help. I loved Trey. He is heaven-sent. 3) She was his breath of fresh air à And vice versa. Right? It was just perfect. I love how you continue to tease us. That’s what you are. A huge tease! Great job!
S/N: the kiss scene is perfect. Keeping it simple, yet leaving some mystery about it. I liked it a lot.You know my thoughts on this, and I won't spoil it with my ramblings on here. But, I liked it alot. I'm so interested (and excited) to find out where you take this one! Could I be right? Could I be wrong? Eek...bring it on sistah! Anyways, I'm always up for creative hamster-ing (?). Ha! Great job missy!
Author's Response:
Hmm… you could be right, but you could also be very wrong! I have a lot of secrets up my sleeve for this one!
Thanks for always being my Beta! I love ya girl :-) I hope you enjoy this one!
I love it! Rachel/JC r just awesome! She's such a loony [like me!] My biggest fear is tsunamis, hurricanes, etc. Anything aquatic, forget about it! I have some wild theories so this was just *sigh* perfect!
And, he is just so charismatic. Flirty & funny...*click* *click* RAWR
such a good story...i love it
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
He is the figure that we step over on our way down the street. He is the unmoving lump underneath the pages of a newspaper, asleep on a park bench. He is Nowhere Man, an invisible being that people choose not to see.
Through an avalanche of events- a Domino effect- JC Chasez is homeless. Helpless. Poor and lonely, he refuses to think past the current day, the here and the now. He thinks he doesn't deserve any better than what he' got until he is visited by an angel named Phoenix that helps him make it better.
OMG! Woman...you did it! It is a piece of art! You had me scared there for a minute, and then...BAM! Thank you for opening your mind to my rambling; I really do appreciate you allowing me to help out. You already know how all I feel with this story, so I won't bore you again.
Just know that it is genius - serious, relaxed, and loving. Great job!
You wanna know what I've been up to this summer? Take a step into my crazy whirlwind of a life as *NSYNC's head costume designer for their sold-out No Strings Attached Tour. So join me as I work a lot, scheme a little, fall in love a couple of times, and hangout with the greatest people on the planet. You think you know, but you have no idea. This is the Diary of Juliette Covington.
ON HIATUS
Skittles is such a colorful character! I like her - she's feisty! This is a tough POV to write, but u're doing great. good job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. =)
Girl you're turning me on,You're such a fine lady,And sugar, more and more,You're driving me crazy (crazy)`Cause you're just what I want,And I'm just what you need,Oh it's onI'm gonna make you my baby;Sweet darlin' all I can see, Is you and me, 'cause... All they want is to tell the other how they feel but they just can't get the words to come out right......
steamy...that was hot. great job, day two accomplished.
now, for a cold shower...
this was soooo good. i loved it. the interwebbing of his reality and his subconscious was genius. great job. congrats dear.
Author's Response: Thank you, for reading and reviewing. I was very pleasently surprised with how smoothly this flowed and was to write. I'm very glad you like it. :)
Justin and Skylar in the City of Love
Drabble
A companion story to A Love Worth Learning
because of twitter i will take the liberty to say this...you slutbag.
that was just art in a thousand words or less. bravo.
you just blew my mind...pun intended.
good grief, this was fantastic
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