Penname: Tempest-Sher [Contact] Real name: Reese
Member Since: Jul 15, 2009
Membership status: Member
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Hmm...let's see. My name is Reese and I have recently jumped on the JT Fan Fiction wagon (I'm a late, I know. Lol). 

Umm...I'm funny, versatile, and have thought JT was cute since I saw him on the ABC movie called Model Behavior (I think that is what it was called {shrug}. 


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Set in New York City, Justin Timberlake and Amelia Domineck are the hottest couple in the Manhattan social scene, and their wedding is fast approaching Event of the Year status. Amelia, headstrong and domineering, is not just planning her wedding, she’s choreographing it and Justin seems to simply be along for the ride, as well as Amelia’s assistant Charlotte who after accepting the job wonders if slavery somehow became legal without her realizing it. A Lolita wedding planner, a flakey assistant, and one bridezilla converge together to bring Charlotte and Justin closer and Justin begins to wonder… is this really all that’s left for him? A ring and a promise of forever with Amelia, or does he dare to dream of something more?



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: Season 6
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 45
Wordcount: 246846 - Hits: 232157
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 12, 2008 - Last Updated: Jan 30, 2011 -
Reviewer: Tempest-Sher Signed
Date: Dec 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 28

I want to thank the cavemen of history. Without them, there wouldn't be boneheads like Justin to exist.

He is really dense and it's so frustrating. He can clearly see he isn't happy. I think the problem is he forces himself to see Amelia as she once was. I also think that is why he is attracted to Charlotte. She's Amelia before the glam, before the short haircut, before the bitchiness. Justin wants that women that was driven but still down to earth and laid back. The one that wasn't pressuring him to be something more than what he was, the one that was content with his career and wasn't all about appearances. 

 

This is a great story. You're an amazing writer if you can have the reader hating the character so much that when they hear the name Amelia, the cringe. Lol. 



Author's Response: HAHA You know Justin IS very caveman like. You hit the nail right on the head with Amelia and Charlotte. He's just so scared to make a change or even to THINK about making a change. Stupid boy *smacks him* Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Tempest-Sher Signed
Date: Aug 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 32

Okay, can I just say A-FREAKING-MAZING update here! :-)

So, I wanted to make my review as an open letter to Justin but seeing as how he didn't see the writing on Charlie's face, I'm going to assume he won't take any heed to words regardless of who they are from.  

As I got further into the chapter, I knew he wasn't going to back down. Justin has this thing for the familiar. He likes for things to not change. The only inconsistency he seems to like is his music. If the style of music changes, he's alright but any form of disruption to the normalacy in his life, oh no, it's the end. Time to go! Do not pass go! Do not ride the reading to boardwalk. Do not collect $200. Lol. Amelia, (I'm not going to call her Roxy for the simple fact, Roxy died as soon as she became HBIC) is not the same person Justin met those years ago. As he asked her all of those questions and didn't answer them, it made me wonder why he tried so hard to make it work and then it hit me...

Justin just doesn't want to change. If he did, he would've made the attempt to call off the wedding for good. He would consciously recognize that he isn't happy and do whatever will make him happy. That is what Charlie represents and what he resents in a way. Charlie was able to take control and begin to move on from their affair and that is what drove him crazy. That's why I think Justin said I do. He knows Amelia is consistent. Charlie, for him, is not.

Well, that's my review. Lol. I really want to take Justin by his Armani collar and drag him out of the church, into Manhattan traffic, and just go across the bridge to Connecticut and hide him in a warehouse. That would be beneficial to everyone.  

 

 



Author's Response: EXACTLY. He's got some kind of idea in his head that THIS is the wayhis life is supposed to go and for some reason he's stuck on it and won't freakin let it go *smacks him* I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!

For my secret santa, SomethingBlue42!!! :)

Heather is on her way home for the Holidays, where a difficult time getting on her flight turns into a strange series of events that will change her life forever. Will she make it out alive?

Dun, Dun, Dun!  Cue secretagent!j and Double 007 music.  Inspired by the trailer from Knight and Day.

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe, Mystery, Suspense
Challenges: Secret Santa 2009

Series: None
Chapters: 4
Wordcount: 10322 - Hits: 7631
Complete?: No - Published: Dec 27, 2009 - Last Updated: May 21, 2010 -
Reviewer: Tempest-Sher Signed
Date: Dec 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Am I Missing Something?

Lol. When I saw 'Michaelchuk' I immediately thought of Paige. And Kara came through with the Paige mannerisms that I loved and adored. Loved the dialogue between Justin and Kara, it was funny but serious at the same time. I also liked how you put actual events into the story. I was starting to think that the preppy kid that bumped her was up to something, maybe be the bomber now that this chapter has been posted, but I wasn't sure. 

Now when Justin was at the Nurses station, I thought that they nurse was working for him too but now I'm thinking she's just being nice for him.

And Heather was hilarious in the bathroom trying to primp before the turbulance hit. Hopefully Justin has some super secret spy stuff to get them out of this mess...unless he used that flash thing from Men In Black and that's why Heather can't remember anything.. This has my imagination all over the place. Lol



Author's Response:

haha, that's awesome.  I'm really glad you picked up on that.  I really enjoyed writing the dialogue.  As for the nurse's station, I thought about making her work for him, but I wanted him to be a little more innocent and charming.  And yes...she was so funny.  I had a really great time writing her there.

 

And you just never know how she got there. :)

Justin and Skylar in the City of Love

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A companion story to A Love Worth Learning



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance
Challenges: It's Gonna be MAY! *NF Spring Writing Challenge

Series: Continuing Education: ALWL Shorts
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 879 - Hits: 1732
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 05, 2011 - Last Updated: May 05, 2011 -
Reviewer: Tempest-Sher Signed
Date: May 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: City of Love

Aww. Skylar and Justin are back. I loved these two. They are just that ugh adorable. They make you so sickeningly happy that it just makes you go "ugh". Lol. Great work as always. 

Author's Response: GAH thank you so much! I'm glad I'm not the only one they make sickeningly happy. I seriously get all giddy when I think about them *le sigh* haha