I totally was holding my breath waiting on their responses. I wanted to just shake them both! But once they finally did it was perfection!
I totally was holding my breath waiting on their responses. I wanted to just shake them both! But once they finally did it was perfection!
Sometimes knowing you've got to let go and not letting go is not the problem. The problem lies in not believing you'll be ok after letting go. Opening your heart one final time to get that other person to understand you is the greatest chance you'll take in your relationship. Why? Well, their response to you will either make or break you.
Ok. Wow. I do believe I needed some kind of tissue warning. Wow! Incredible job on this! As much as I want to be smiling from ear to ear for the greatness you have done with it, I am sad, broken hearted and in pieces with this character pain.
I know the personal attachment with this story so it makes it even worse. I would like to jump on the plane right now and fly to ATL and hug you! So instead I send you (( cyberhugs)) I love ya girlie!
I take it that song I had to you listen to, help a little. Her words are strong willed man… Ingrid is amazing!
Silence stared me in the face
And I finally heard its voice
It seemed to softly say
That in love you have a choice
She, a young woman, abandoned by those closest to her, and yet embraced by those furthest from her. Life has thrown one, two, three curveballs her way, and yet, she keeps her heart open to love.
He, a musician who's lost his muse, finds himself discovering a terrifying passion. With his best friend alongside to guide him, he unearths the missing puzzle piece – his heart.
Ohhh have you borrowed Kroll and I not know about it?
Lol I love this, I wanna read more... umm Now!
"...love's the drug and this for the lovers..."
Ohh la la! I love that in so few words, you can paint such a picture.
Great start! Off to the next :)
Justin is totally interested in JC's girl... interesting.
Props to JC's game, he didn't really have any just blurted
it out but it worked :) Eep...
JC doesn't need any game...he's just got it. I mean, like, got it bagged, wrapped with a bow on top
thanks for the love...Xo
A night when lost hearts were found.
Those words say so much.
Seems like addiction is an understatement.
After my breakup, my mama told me: "Don't worry, mijita. There'll come a night when you find your lost heart, and all will be right."
It stuck in my mind, and I just had to change it up a bit.
thanks for the love...Xo
Hmm a cop? Now that's a twist. I was expecting something much... much different.
Totally jealous of the way you write. Wowza!
how different? thanks for the love and compliment lady, xo
I'm waiting patiently for the next installment.... patiently... I promise I won't send you like 50 text's... I might send like 42 but not 50!
Author's Response:
i only got 41...lol
thanks for the love...Xo
More More More!
Ironically, I was listening to the very Tony Lucca, as I started reading this chapter! I'm in love with the song "Undertow"
is he not like amazing?!?! him and JC are the other JT and Matt....gosh, i love these pairings!
thanks for the love...Xo
I seriously gasped when she didn't show up. I thought she was going to die on JC. Phew. Glad that didn't happen.
And now that you have set this bar so freaking high... I have to stop this review and type more on mine... :)
i'm not that mean, jeez woman, have a little faith...ok, nevermind, I'm a total meanie. I would've so done it.
thanks for the love...Xo
Awe! It's crazy how something as simple as a smile can change someone's entire life?
It really felt like I was going back through that concert. I miss that Atlantis Concert :( I need to relive it.
A response to the AwesomeAugust Challenge!
A day at the beach brings back the pain Charlie thought she left behind.
DaddyLance! Woohoo! Never saw that coming :) Damn that Lance for breaking her heart.
"He’s just looking for someone he lost"
I think that could have been exactly what I would've said as well.
Awesome job :)
Posted for the Awesome August Challenge - This is a visual starring Chris as a college athlete.
Yes. Yes. I have to say great job! I now would like to track down and find RugbyChris in a library.
Wow... Sorry I didn't review all the way through but I just wanted to keep reading. It was HOT!
Author's Response: That's okay honey! I'm just glad yoiu got a chance to read it. I'm glad you liked it and thank you for the review!
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