Penname: musicmel [Contact] Real name: Melissa
Member Since: Sep 22, 2009
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I love music. Anyone that knows me via Twitter or Facebook knows that first hand. I have an obsession with live music. Attending concerts is my drug of choice. I believe that I am from a 'writer' but I enjoy writing and getting my crazy ideas out into the world. I’m pretty sarcastic… ok so really I think Sarcasm should have been my middle name. A sense of humor could really improve someone‘s life… really that was serious.
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Life As We Know It Will Surely End by AmberW (R) [Comments - 101]

Justin and Gretchen have a past.  A past that ended and was never heard from again.  One fateful day the past will come back and try to repeat itself.  Justin struggles with the idea of finality while Gretchen moves on and finds her happiness.  The question is, how long can happiness truly last?  Gretchen's life as she knows it, is about to end and new one is about to begin.

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 84229 - Hits: 86840
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Jun 22, 2010 -
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Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25

Amelia. How cute! I love that name :)

AHHH!!! He finally proposed! woohoo! And it did it well!

Great update!!



Author's Response: It's on my list for girl names if I decide to have more kids LOL  Thank you dear-I figured he had better be proposing before I got shot LOL  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jan 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

Crap... hopefully their night 'together' floods back to them at some point. She is totally going to be pregnant.

 *Btw the personal touch is way to sad :(



Author's Response:

I know it's sad, but it was something that I had planned on bringing in.  I'm tired of all the stories that are light and fluffy-there's gotta be something unperfect about all of this...As unrealistic as all of this is, I wan't to keep as much realism in it :) Does that make me a bad person?? LOL

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

She is totally going to be heartbroken if she isn't pregnant. I think she has dealt with not having more children and now the option is there and it could really hurt her.

Great update!!!



Author's Response: Thanks chica-I have a plan in mind but I don't know if it's the direction I want to go :) We shall see...

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

Justin better say YES! ugh. It's for a good cause if nothing else.

Only if there really was an *Nsync reunion tour *ponders the thought* I would follow them like I was a teeney again! haha

 



Author's Response: I'd follow them too...no joke.  Now that I'm not a minor I can do what I want and stalk them LOL

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Oh... so I would like more... NOW!

I'm glad Justin is in... I can't wait to see what happens!



Author's Response: Hold your horses woman! Tonight is good TV night so maybe tomorrow you'll have more!!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17

Ok I have to say, I really really like the blunt side of JC. He seemed to always have people walk over him in a sence. He is finally stepping up and saying Hey I want this... and not just going along for the ride.

So yea that means an update!!! I will wait till this weekend... but no later than that missy! :)



Author's Response: Well, while waiting for class to start I did manage to get about a third of the next chapter written.  I like blunt JC too-he's always respectful and a bit of a doormat LOL  Thanks for the review woman!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

I like dialogue. I personally think it makes it more personal. Makes you see the inner side of that character. Anyways. I love the interaction with Karen. The relationship that a son's mother has a huge impact on what a relationship could end up like.

Author's Response: I wasn't planning on having a Karen/Gretchen scene but when it just came out I loved it.  I had that type of relationship with an ex of mine mother.  It was so nice and I thought I'd share the happiness :)  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19

First off, Great update!!! They seem to finally be very comfortable with each other. They seem happy :) Don't ruin that :insert angry face:

Why is she so worried about a condom, we want mini Chasez damnit!



Author's Response:

Hahahaha...had to throw in the safe sex LOL I have some younger readers LOL I know y'all want a mini-Chasez....

Oh and the angry face? Very scary!  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20

I'm not even going to say anything. I don't want to jinx it....

I like that it jumped up in time... Great update!



Author's Response: Thanks woman!  I needed to get time moving otherwise this thing was gonna be like a zillion chapters LOL 

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

YAY!!!! HAPPY DANCE!!!! I knew it was coming! But I didnt want to jinx it in the last chapter!!

It was as short update but it was great!



Author's Response: The last chapter was blatantly obvious but I it could have been anything LOL Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

Damn press...Sad that they cant even enjoy an amazing moment in their lives. Ugh that would drive me bonkers, but I guess its something you learn to deal with day after day.

Great update! :)



Author's Response: You know,  I was reading a tabloid and seeing just how "in" celebrity lives they are kinda made me sad for them ya know?  Anyway, thanks for the update :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

That's not the way to proposer JC, damn it.

I cant say anything about the cliffhanger because I do that a lot... but still doesnt make me happy! lol Great update



Author's Response: Hahahahaha...yes you are like the queen of cliffhangers LOL  This is a very busy week for me with midterms and papers and stuff so I don't know how much writing I'll get done, but there will be an update soon :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24

 Grrrr... cliffhanger again. Btw I love Ellen!!

I'm ready for another update!



Author's Response: Dude, I love Ellen too.  That's why I had to incorporate her LOL

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Apr 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27

NOOOOO!!!!!! Why would you do this to me?  I worry about them :(

I was totally the 14yo who thought Im going to be the mature one and then the moment the curtain went up, that was all thrown out the window. I was a freaking crazy person!

This chapter was very well written. Props to you!



Author's Response: Thank you Miss Melissa :) I literally freaked out when I was at the concert in 98 and 2000? I can't remember the years. 

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28

Ok first… You are lucky I let you borrow Kroll. Ugh… JC WTF?? Totally should not have approached the situation the way he did. But I think I was a little more upset at Gretchen. She should have brought him back into the room for the birth. She should have at the very least called him and told him what was going on. Ugh and not that I’m frustrated with the both of them I am going to shut up.

Great job! :(  I defiantly think you need more than just the epilogue left missy… or at least I’m hoping for more than just one more update.



Author's Response:

Mel, he left the hospital-he didn't want to be there.  We'll see more of that in the next chapter when we get into his head a little bit :)

I'm not gonna end it like this!  There's some unfinished business to tell!

Thanks for Kroll and for the review :)