Penname: musicmel [Contact] Real name: Melissa
Member Since: Sep 22, 2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:
I love music. Anyone that knows me via Twitter or Facebook knows that first hand. I have an obsession with live music. Attending concerts is my drug of choice. I believe that I am from a 'writer' but I enjoy writing and getting my crazy ideas out into the world. I’m pretty sarcastic… ok so really I think Sarcasm should have been my middle name. A sense of humor could really improve someone‘s life… really that was serious.
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Justin and Gretchen have a past.  A past that ended and was never heard from again.  One fateful day the past will come back and try to repeat itself.  Justin struggles with the idea of finality while Gretchen moves on and finds her happiness.  The question is, how long can happiness truly last?  Gretchen's life as she knows it, is about to end and new one is about to begin.

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 84229 - Hits: 86840
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Jun 22, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: May 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29

I totally understand both sides of thir reasons. They are both strong headed and that's a good thing but also a bad thing. I hope they do what's best for them, whatever that may be :)

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jun 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30

 

*Smacks you* Just kidding. I think her feelings are normal, I would be a little hesitate as well but at some point you have to let go of the past and move forward. She better walk down that damn isle. He is her Mr. Perfect. 

 

Ok that song, “It is what it is” Omg.  It’s like my favorite song right now. Ohh how I love that song. I just saw them in concert a couple weeks ago and wow, they were AMAZING! And that song was incredible with just an acoustic guitar

Paintently I am waiting for the epilogue...

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jun 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Stubborn to the very end!! I loved this story from day one! Sad to see it go but I'm glad to have read their story!! I can't wait to see what you bring on in the next story!

You are too kind with your words for my fiction. I'm glad there are people like you that actually want to read it!!Ahhh!!! Vegas is coming up shortly! I can't wait!!!

Palms - sweating.

Nervous - wreck.

Eyes - bloodshot from too much alcohol consumption.

Head - light - pounding...

He's not sure of anything right now except the intoxication he's feeling...

He's so screwed...



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, General, Humor

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 9133 - Hits: 8677
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 30, 2009 - Last Updated: Jun 13, 2010 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Dec 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Part 1

I love love love it. I read this earlier but for some reason my phone wouldnt let me reveiw.

Author's Response: Thank so much for letting me know. Glad you like. I'll have the last part out soon. :)

We weren’t always like this. We used to be best friends. We used to do everything together. We used to talk about everything. But then, something changed…

A Trace Ayala Story

ON HIATUS



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Group, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, General, Humor

Series: Are You Gonna Be There
Chapters: 7
Wordcount: 15976 - Hits: 16461
Complete?: No - Published: Dec 31, 2009 - Last Updated: Apr 27, 2011 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jan 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Trace Ayala to the Rescue

I want more! I am intrigued by it being in Trace's POV.



Author's Response: Glad you like it so far. I noticed that Trace wasn't getting much recognition that he deserves so this idea came up. Hope you stick around until the end. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jan 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Caught in the Middle

Trace is right int he middle of it all. Damn. Hopefully he finds a way to stay out of it!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Jan 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Revelation

I want more!



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying it so far.

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Headaches and Dreams

yay! yay! An update!!! It totally made my day. 

I have a super bad feeling about this Taylor girl and when/if she joins them on the road... hmmm I dont know much about her yet but if Trace has a bad feeling about her, he might want to trust that instinct.

I love Justin/Trace's friendship. I wish Justin didn't have the pressure on Trace and put him in the middle... I cant wait to see what happens!!!

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Phone Calls and CFTC

Finally Trace is getting the girl! I just simply hope she really  likes him and doesnt go after Justin when she gets there. That would be horrible.

Great update!!

Past Featured Story

 

When you know it’s meant to be
Everything comes naturally, it comes naturally
When you're with me, baby
 

“Naturally” – Selena Gomez



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Group, JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 29
Wordcount: 102642 - Hits: 86835
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 15, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 12, 2011 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 – Game, Curves, and A Whole Lotta Sass

Seriously that Alanis song is one of my favorites ever! I saw Kelly Clarkson cover that very song in concert and wow! Just wow! Anyways the story… lol I think she is going to be a tough one. I could see her coming between Justin/JC. I hope not but they both seem very interested.



Author's Response: great song & Kelly's version is phenomenal! she is a tough one....u're intuitive, huh? we'll see what happens

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Feb 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Lay Your Hands on Me

Secret lovers!! That makes relationships harder however it also would give them some private time.

I reallly think you are an amazing writer. Hopefully I will finish when you have posted this weekend.



Author's Response: Secret lovers -- i know all this too well. Thank you so much for the compliment. Chapter 13 is coming right up....hold on tight!

Past Featured Story

 

"'Cause I'll give you my heart,
if you would let me start all over
again"

 

Justin Timberlake is starting over.
After four years of wallowing in self pity and depression over losing the only two things that he'd ever loved, he's going back.
Back to the music.
Back to the chaotic schedule, the fans, the touring.
And hopefully, back to her.

 

**This story takes place in late 2012 :) 



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Group, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: I Shall Believe
Chapters: 19
Wordcount: 76491 - Hits: 74298
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jan 24, 2010 - Last Updated: Jan 05, 2012 -
Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: What If...

Hello vision of Justin in a towel! Yumm!

Justin is really a great character in this story. You are doing an amazing job with him :) He is very vulnerable but willing to take a chance.

 

Author's Response:

hahaha. yes. i love Justin in a towel.

This Justin breaks my heart. It's weird writing him like this since I've never written from Justins POV before so I was scared if I'd be able to write a story solely on his thoughts. And it's definitely different from my normal happy story. lol.  But I like it so far.

Thank you for reviewinggggggggggg <3 I loveeeeeeee you! 

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Heels Over Head

I love the title of this chapter. It really showed what she does to him. He was all flustered and smitten!

 

Author's Response:

This chapter is one of my favorites mostly because I LOVE writing their relationship. The more I do, the more excited I get for the prequel :)

Thank you for the reviews, love!!! I'm so excited that you're reading this! <3

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Hello, Old Friend

Aww the bromance between JT & JC is so great!

I love the voice you have given Justin. Wow… just wow!

 

Reviewer: musicmel Signed
Date: Mar 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Clarity

Wow. Very intrigue. I’m a little slow at starting stories *as you already know* but I’m in for the long haul!