Ok. I was NOT expecting that ending, especially the way the story began with her flirting with Justin. I love the build up, though. And the description of JC watching her.

Ok, this story really tug at my heartstrings. I loved the connection that Alexa and JC had even before they knew they were father and daughter and how it grew as they got to know one another.

Oh, I looked up the lyrics to the songs you used, just in case you want to credit them. They're Daddy's Hands by Holly Gunn, Father's Eyes by Amy Grant, and Butterfly Kisses by Bob Carlisle (One of my favorites).

I read this yesterday and wanted to cry. I just read it again and feltthe wave of emtion wash over me. I never cry. (I still haven't. I'm just not a crier). Seriously, though, this tugged at my heartstrings. Mostly because I think that this is closer to the truth than we realize, meaning as much as the media likes to portray Justin as being estranged from the others, I don't think he is. I think they would drop everything for one another in times of need and this shows that. I hope that it wouldn't be as extreme as this, but with life you never know. This is a great example of showing that we shouldn't take our loved ones for granted and to make up with them before it's too late.

Oh yeah! I definitely need more! You can't just leave us hanging like that! How did Lance know? What happens after they meet? Do they collaborate with or without Beats? I need to know!

I like this. It definitely brings new meaning to "writer's block".I loved the conversation between JC and his girlfriend (I'm assuming?) online and the artist once she arrives at the coffee house.It would be cool to have a follow up story where he finds her exhibit and goes in unnoticed, writes a song about it and leaves it for her to hear. Kind of like a cat and mouse game, where they keep missing each other. Just a thought.