(I moved from XxSmurfettexX. Been on NF since July 29th 2009.)
Hey there, I'm Mack!
I've been writing fanfics in general since I was 11 but I tackled *NSYNC fanfics when I discovered this site when I was 16 and I've loved it here ever since. I may get older but I'll never stop writing for these boys that bring so much joy to my life.
"Remember, writers are the only adults who get to spend all day in their pajamas playing with imaginary friends." -anonymous
NF Awards Season 7:
Innovative Original Character: Mack Desrosiers
Best Villain Lou Pearlman
NF Awards 2015/Season 8:
Best Sidekick/Friend: Mack Desrosiers
Best Villain: Lou Pearlman
What are you supposed to do when you have everything you could ever want, but your heart still wants more?I loved JC in this chapter so much. He's half an ass and half sweet, a good combo, haha. Please update soon.
I want you.. You want me.. We just don't know it yet..
When JC gets his heart broken after taking a big risk, he wallows in his own whirlwind of emotions. Can he forget about what broke his heart in order to bring him out of his misery when he meets a new friend?
..Or there just might be more to his friendship than he wants to believe.
Woot woot! Don't give up on her, JC! A bit more description would be nice. I love how you made Lizzie different by not taking JC back right away. Great job! As always, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Woot! :)) I'll keep the note for description in mind for the next chapter, sorry bout that! Thank you very much! I mean, i know it's JC but i wasn't going to make it so easy after he did what he did. Glad you enjoyed :))
What a great way to wake up with an e-mail alert to the update of this story. I love these two so much but I want to see some drama. It can't always be this easy getting someone, right? I FEED off of drama, haha. And Justin got BURNED! Haha. Please update again soon.
Author's Response:
haha thank you so very much!! hahaha Justin soo got burned :P He's cute tho! haha Drama will be coming soon, and lots of it!! I'd like to give a spoiler but i think you'll have more fun just reading!! hehe Whatever becomes of those two.. Well, they're in for a ride LOL Thank you for reviewing and keeping up!! =)
This story looks great so far. And I love that part of Reel *NSYNC. Hope you update this soon. Goin' on my 'favs' list. =)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading! Haha i liked that part too. Those guys are hilarious! Wow thanks! And i've read your stories! You're an excellent writer, so this meant alot coming from you! I'll update soon! :)
Geeze,I feel like a slacker. The whole chapter was great and this was my favorite line:
“I wanna do this again, all of us. I like it” JC said softly.
That was so cute! I could hear him saying it in my mind. Onto the next one.
Haha i'm glad you're keeping up with this story!! And i'm soo glad you're enjoying it! :D
Yes, JC is incredible <3
Thanks for reviewing too! :))
Woot woot, they kissed!! Haha, the ending was great. What happened to the others? Weren't they ALL supposed to go? Maybe I read it wrong. Anyway, I hope you update soon.
Author's Response:
Haha yes they did!! Woo!! :)) haha thanks!!
This is what happened to the others:
“Actually that’s what I called about. Joey’s sick from a hangover he had this morning, Lance’s sister called in to say she’s in town, and Chris and Justin have some questions for our manager about recording on Monday, so-”
“So you guys aren’t coming” Liz said, a little disappointed. Emma frowned at her.
“Well, um. I don’t have anything to do. If you’re not too tired, I’ll come over, I’ll even bring dinner for you and Em”
So yea, you probably didn't read that part... LOL but i will be posting more soon!! And thank you so much for enjoying this :)) Keeps me going!
As always, thank you for reading and reviewing! :))
I absolutely love how shy they are around each other. It makes the tension great. There are a few misplaced punctuation marks here and there but it doesn't mess up the flow of the story. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response: Thank you alot for reviewing and reading! I especially love to see what your reviews because i enjoy your tips (and encouragement for more updates) =) Look out for the next one! ;)
Hey hey, thanks for the dedication! You didn't have to do that. Made me smile. Anyway, why would she run out on JC like that? I can understand that she's confused but it's always better to talk things out instead of run. *shakes head* although, admittedly, it wouldn't nearly be as interesting if they talked about. I knew they would end up at the same club as soon as Emma suggested it. And hoooray for JC saving her from that drunk guy. I loved that he actually punched the guy! Woohoo! And the ending was perfect. A few missing punctuation marks here and there but it was still great!!
Author's Response: You're welcome :)) I dedicated it to you because you've always been leaving reviews and giving me ways to improve the story! So thank you, to you!! Anyways, to the story.. The running away part, well.. You said the story needed some drama, so i wanted some stuff to get interesting.. LOL Ahh JC is her hero!! haha Thank you :)) Sorry about the punctuation errors :/ But thanks for liking the story and reviewing! :))
*Sigh* And just when I thought that everything was going to finally work out in JC's favor. OF COURSE Allison is pregnant. SUURREEE she is. *wink* The thing is, thought, that Liz's and Emma's friendship I liked a lot before but now I'm kind of annoyed by Emma. Sure, she's being a great friend trying to help but she shouldn't have given up on Liz that easily. At least, that's my opinion. I love the bromance the guys have. Chris dissing JC about his pants was great. Update again soon.
Author's Response: Well let's see how things go shall we.. haha :)) Thank you very much for the read and review. I always love to hear your opinion! Will update later this week, hopefully :)) I can't wait for you to read the rest!
You write a story about loneliness, and you grab them all because everybody's an expert on that one - Theodore Sturgeon
I want to kill you for making this tug at my heartstrings but that meant you did amazingly well. You have such a way with words and emotions that I'm envious of. Great job, as always.
got to go back for the healing
As usual I am envious of your writing skills. Amazing, simply amazing as usual
And when that memory slips away
There'll be a better view from here
And only lonesome you remains
and just the thought of you I fear
it falls away
Yesterday was hell
But today I'm fine without you
Run away this time without you
And all I ever thought you'd be
That face is tearing holes in me
but today I'm fine without you
Run away this time without you
And all the things you put me through
I'm holding on by letting go of you
“Straightjacket Feeling”- All American Rejects
She's been forced to run. A past that she can't speak of lays behind her, and a future she's unsure of lays ahead of her.
So I looked at the cast page and then the prologue and, at first, I didn't get it but then it hit me, like, duh! I like the you made Justin a teacher in this AU, the picture helps with the image, haha. I can't wait to see where you go with this one.
Also, it seriously freaked me out when I read the lyrics of the summary 'cause I just listened to that song when I went to look at NF.
I was reading your mind :) Lol. I worried that it would be confusing, which is why I posted both the Prologue and the first chapter. I hope other people catch on, too! If not, I'll have to go back and fix it.
Thanks for the review!
The idea of Justin as a teacher has my mind wandering, hahahaha. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Don't worry, my mind regularly wanders :) Thanks for the review!!
“Are you sure? I mean…Shelby Forest isn’t Boston…”
“No…but it’s you.”
Awwwwwwww. I did that outloud, by the way. Those are my favorite lines in the entire chapter. Great job, great to see this updated again.
At twenty-two years old, Justin Timberlake was voted in as the youngest CEO in Goldman Sachs Brokerage company history. Reaching billionaire status by the age of twenty four, he is considered untouchable by most, especially by his own family. Greed has taken over his mind, and his lifestyle, his most famous motto being ‘business first.’ When tragedy suddenly strikes, Justin is faced with the responsibility of caring for two people he never thought he would have to. Kids are easy though, right? Wrong. Realizing he needs help, he begins to seek it, but what he finds is more than what he bargained for.
This chapter was great. I love asshole!Justin although I'm kind of mad at him for uprooting them but it's all right, should make for good drama, haha.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. Yeah it was a pretty extreme move but i'm all about the drama lol.
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