Penname: theusagirl [Contact] Real name: Steph
Member Since: Aug 28, 2011
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Hello! I used to write a whole lot of *NSYNC fanfics from 2011-2013ish?? According to my last update, it was 2016, real life and some personal issues got in the way which made me stop writing for a while, decided to resurface and remove some of the dust I have on here... :)


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My name is Addie Parker. In 2000, I was a pop singer with a semi-famous girl group called Three4One. This is my story. I kept the details short and sweet up until the part you’re probably most interested in – touring with ‘Nsync and having my heart broken.

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Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Lance Bass
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama

Series: None
Chapters: 21
Wordcount: 68465 - Hits: 23125
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 26, 2013 - Last Updated: Mar 07, 2014 -
Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Aug 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

WOW! This is SO good! :D

This reminds me of a CSI epi I watched, there was this party and everyone was drinking and making out right in front of everyone..without a care in the world.

But really, JC? Don't be so jealous or whatever you have, relax..

But the drink that Chris invented made me giggle: “It’s called a Chris Special. Rum, Vodka, and Schnapps,” he replied. “Shoot it.” LOL

*reads next chapter*



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! And I've had a "Chris Special" and it was made during a drunken night much like the one I wrote about....minus Nsync being there of course! ha ;)

Alysen B. 

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Lance to the rescue! That part where Addie went to cry on him made me get all teary..

But OMG! JC is a beast! She's pregnant, I knew she was gonna be because they've been screwing eachother the whole time, at first Addie was enjoying it, but now I think she's starting to see a whole new perspective.

It feels like I'm watching "Sleeping With the Enemy." and I remember while watching the movie, I wanted to punch the sleazy guy on screen..hmph. I wanna do that to JC right now.. *balls fist* I can give a pretty good punch..

These lines here: “I didn’t want that,” I said through gritted teeth. “I don’t always want you like you think I do. You don’t care about me. All you want me for is sex. And God only knows what the hell you were doing or who you were doing two nights ago when I was in the hospital.” I stood up and faced him. “We’ve been dating or whatever you call this for almost two months. You haven’t taken me to dinner or to a movie or anything. You don’t let us hang out with anyone because all you want to do is fuck me. Well, guess what? I’m tired of it. I didn’t want it tonight and I don’t want it again. We’re done.”

Woot! She told him off, that must've felt so good..but the jerk didn't listen.

Great job on this chapter, off to read the next one!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

WTF JC! I wanna strangle him now, you controlling possessive FREAK! UGHH!

OMG This is SO good! A bit scary, but good..

I think Addie should quit, she should, and the other guys should help her out, ignore what JC said, but he makes it sound so threatening and it must be so hard for her. Damn.

So abusive.. *sigh*

Awesome job on this! Thanks for updating..



Author's Response:

It's super hard to write JC like this but I'm glad people are enjoying it. Thanks again for your response :)

Alysen B. 

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I'm scared.. :( But thanks for the warning..

Addie you have to tell someone, I mean Lance knows, but I think you have to tell someone now about all of this..

It was really nice that Addie and Lance shared their moment, go with Lance, he's safe..

I gotta remember this is fiction, not real, but I know that probably alot of relationships go through this, such a sad and scary thing..

*reads next chapter*

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Aug 22, 2013 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Wow oh wow...I'm SO happy that Addie and her friends were there to back her up...and kudos for Chris for being there as well..and I love the fact that Addie is getting the chops to talk back to JC...YEAH :D

Good job on this chapter, looking forward to read more.. Thanks for the updates..



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Alysen B. 

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Aug 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

*GASP* Oh wow..WOW! JC admitted everything, and everyone knows, good he's in prison, (can't believe I'm saying this) But I am SO GLAD HE'S THERE!

This chapter frightened me, :( the way you write in descriptive detail is incredible though.

She had such a wonderful evening with Lance and JC ruined it..Ruined it completely.

So is she gonna continue to have the baby?? And maybe Lance would adopt it?? That would be nice..

Good job though on this chapter..thanks for the update..



Author's Response:

As always, your feedback is so appreciated!

Thanks for reading!

Alysen B. 

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Nov 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

*GASP*

Ok ok um these lines here: "

“He,” I told him. “He deserves it.”

“We’re having a boy?!” JC’s eyes widened and he chuckled softly.

“Yeah,” I nodded and smiled at him. “We’re having a boy.”

A BOY?! AHH! Little JC! *squee* I kinda had a moment.. :D

But I DO hope he has changed, because I like how concerned and gentle he was with her now, and they romped multiple times of course, and Jenn and Brooke caught them in action, well..literally.

Addie wanted him, and it looks like JC wanted her..lets hope it stays that way, and nothing horrible happens.

Nice job..and thanks for the update.

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2013 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

OH MY GOODNESS GRACIOUS! How scary that he just showed up! But he didn't harm her..he just wanted to touch her belly.. *sigh* BUT..super Lance came to the rescue, poor Addie, I think this little break to Mississippi would do her good..for a little while, I honestly would be crushed if I had to leave my homestate and leave my family and friends, but if the guy is psycho, then its for a good reason to leave..until things cool off.

Great job! Thanks for updating! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks! Stay tuned ;)

alysen b. 

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Oct 04, 2013 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Because Lance is different to what JC was, I mean JC was nice at first but then he kinda changed, hmm..looks like Addie wants JC back, does she?? Is she developing old feelings for him??

And for the surprise, I really thought that Lance got Addie a puppy! AWW! CUTENESS! But no he didn't..instead he got her Jenn and Brooke.

I think Addie should go back to Orlando and live with Jenn with Brooke cause it looks Lance is keeping her there under his thumb until she gives birth, I mean I know he cares but still.

Good chapter though..  :)



Author's Response: Still working through how I feel about Lance right now. Thanks for your review!!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Oct 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

So glad that Addie is out of Mississippi, and looks like she and Lance are taking a break off of eachother, I mean, I would be smothered if I had to be in Mississippi and be away from my friends and all my usual stuff, but it looks like since Addie is back in Orlando, she is also getting kind of stressed.

And JC really looks that bad?? :( Damn, I'm beginning to get a soft on him again, was that supposed to be a bad thing?? And it looks like Addie is slowly wanting to forgive him, and what is that skank he's dating?? What is he rebounding??

Hmm..maybe Addie needs time to think things through.

Good chapter, looking forward for more..



Author's Response: Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Nov 15, 2013 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

I gave in and smiled at him, as I always did. He was easy to give into, even when he was an ass. Of course she gave in, because its freakin JC, he has that thing..that sort of aura to him..BUT..he just gets annoyed whenever Ryden cries.

Now I'm glad that everyone showed up and Chris was playing with the baby..these lines here: "

“You’re a cute little pooter!” Chris cooed at him and JC frowned.

“That’s the dumbest name I’ve ever heard,” he told Chris and Chris rolled his eyes

LOL!

The interview went slightly okay, because it was so important to JC, and the fact that earlier in this chapter he was seducing Addie after he was kinda bickering with her..yeah typical..

Hmm..would like to know how the rest of this story goes, update when you can.. :)



Author's Response: Your wish is my command :)

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Nov 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

*dun dun dun

Well I'm scared a little bit..and JC dear, if you are angry than maybe you could've gone outside to take some air??

But looks like he apologized to her for yelling at her, I hope he doesn't become a beast again.

Good job though! Thanks for the update.. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review as always ;)

Yeah, he apologized, but I think Addie will have to learn the hard way.... 

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Dec 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

WOW OH WOW!

I just LOVE what Addie did to JC, she took control of him, THATS the way it supposed to be, switch the tables a bit, or roles..but before any of that seducing happened, it kinda creeped me out that JC heard what was going with Addie and Lance, but then like I said, she took control, an unexpected twist.. and he liked it.. :P

But Lance also heard the convo of what happened, hmm..

Anyways though, JC wants to marry Addie, and she said yes..I'm kind of happy for this, but a bit on the worrysome side..because I'm not so sure, but maybe JC changed???

Good update.. :D

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Feb 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

GOOD! He's in jail now..ooh! And the lawyer Marla was on a roll! Reminds me of the movie "Liar Liar" with Jim Carrey in it..

But anyways, I'm so proud of Addie, she's been through so much, she put her foot down and is ready to face the world without JC holding her down..yay! :D

I gotta remember that this is fanfiction... :P Its really well written this chapter..

Great update!



Author's Response: Thanks girl!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Mar 07, 2014 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Epilogue

I am CRYING! *grabs Kleenex tissues* GAH! 14 years have gone by..

And Chris and Jen have two kids! AWW! And Lance and Addie also have two more..:D

I love that Ryden is the spitting image of JC, and he still kept in touch after he was released from prison..(the ending of JC leaving and the fact that he remained friends with Addie and his son, got me)

So happy for Addie though, she's been through SO much!

I'm glad that everything turned out well in the end.. *tear .. :)

Great job, I enjoyed this story..



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and for reviewing it! It was hard to say goodbye but I'm glad you liked the ending!