Penname: theusagirl [Contact] Real name: Steph
Member Since: Aug 28, 2011
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Hello! I used to write a whole lot of *NSYNC fanfics from 2011-2013ish?? According to my last update, it was 2016, real life and some personal issues got in the way which made me stop writing for a while, decided to resurface and remove some of the dust I have on here... :)


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Past Featured Story

 

After a chance meeting at a coffee shop, Ari and JC develop a friendship that helps them both through some rough patches. Can JC make LA feel like home for Ari? Can Ari help JC get excited about something again after all of his recent disapointments?

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: Season 8
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Humor, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 31
Wordcount: 77184 - Hits: 35463
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jun 03, 2014 - Last Updated: Jun 16, 2015 -
Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 7: Wet Dog and Pool Parties

Must you end this chapter like that?? LOL

Being in the pool with JC sounds fantastic right now, especially with this heat wave going on, and its not even summer yet..

I need to read more.. :D *scurries to next chapter*

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 8: Names and Hands

I love that JC is so supportive of her, it makes me smile... :)

Now..THIS, is true, I agree on his last previous relationships:

:(

When he gets into a relationship he always wants a girl to feel like she belongs to him, that he can take care of her. He never had a habit of thinking twice when a girl would mention needing a little money or really liking something in a store. He had the money, why not use it? He always meant well, but they didn’t. It’s like he was a professional at finding and falling for girls that would take advantage of his giving nature and his soft heart. His Mom and the other guys would always be getting on his case about not realizing that he was being taken advantage of until it was too late. His heart would be broken and his wallet considerably lighter

I for one, and real fans of his would never take advantage of him like that...I work hard and pay what I can and save the rest for next month bills..lolz

But anyway, this is very good chapter, I enjoyed this one.. :)

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jun 18, 2014 Title: Chapter 9: Tell Me

Horrible?! Are you INSANE woman?! LOL This was HOT OMG!

It was seductive, and everything is explained in equixite detail... I love it ;) And I was gonna save this chapter for tomorrow, but its a GOOD thing I read this now before I went to bed.. :D Gonna have a good night sleep now..haha..

When JC tells Ari where does she want to be touched, I'm like, "You can touch me wherever you want.." :P

ANYWAYS...these lines here: He grins and turns to look at her again, “Oh honey, you ain’t seen nothin’ yet.”

Looking forward for more...oh yes sirree..Excellent chapter! :D



Author's Response: Happy you enjoyed the last three chapters. I hope you like the next ones too! As always I look forward to your reviews!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 10: Pizzas and Beers

These lines here: He brings that out of her; she likes that ;)

JC has that thing.. :P

I also liked when Justin re-introduced himself to Ari, and then he and JC played video games, aww! Joshtin moment.. :)

This was a cute chapter, I'll be reading more soon..

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jun 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 11: Bees and Brides

The shower scene is really sweet, nothing more happened there.. ;) Not yet anyway..

Earlier in this chapter, these lines here: “I miss you too. Especially since I’ve been having really great dreams lately. It really helps when one of the last things I see is you slipping into bed in nothing but your underwear.” she grins although he can’t see her.

“Oh yeah? Want to tell me about those?” he chuckles and she hears him move around a little.

Ahh yes..dreaming about JC is the BEST.. lolz :P Only to wake up and he's not next to you is the WORST..LOL

Good chapter...thanks for the update!



Author's Response: Wouldn't that be the greatest? Mmmm.

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jun 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 12: Breakfast and Confessions

It is the start of something good! I KNOW it! :D

Oh and THESE lines here: JC was standing at the stove cooking, wearing his underwear and a white undershirt. His feet are bare, his hair is mussed and he is wearing his glasses. That IMAGE.. *grins* I wish he was in MY kitchen cooking bacon looking like that.. ;) Don't we all though?? :)

I'm really glad that they are getting into deeper convos with eachother, thats how a relationship supposed to work first, communication is key, and respect for eachother..

Nicely done on this chapter..

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jun 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 13: Group Texts and Gallery Shows

*Places baseball bat back on the floor* GOOD! Next chapter..lolz

Oooh! They are gonna get dinner all right, and probably dessert too.. ;)

But OMG! The group chat had me laughing, I can HEAR them saying those things, and Chris, the only thing he's saying is "Whaaaaa?" HAHAH! I literally LOL at that..

I love that those guys in reality really DO group chat now and then..makes me so happy!

This is getting good! *reads next chapter* I must

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jun 26, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: 100 Ways

Insecure?? HA! With JC around even the most innocent girls can become...wild... :P

But this was SO HOT! OMG YES! I sound like a "Herbal Ensences" commercial.. LOL  Anyways..These lines here: Ari watches JC as he stands before her in all of his naked glory. His chest is heaving slightly, his hair is mussed and his…

I’m such a lucky girl…

*thud*

I loved everything about this chapter! 100 Ways..imagine what that man can do....And I quote: "Dripped through the hallways cause we started in the shower, we didn't finish until we hit the kitchen counter...*

:D Awesome update!

 



Author's Response: Heeheehee! Happy you enjoyed it and I avoided the baseball bat!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jul 10, 2014 Title: Chapter 15: Ketchup Chips and Bridesmaid Dresses

Now its MY turn to shriek! I LOVE that she told her SIL about JC, LOL I would do the same thing, we all will.. ;)

These lines here: No. They know I am dating a great guy from LA, that his name is Josh-“

“That he’s incredible in bed?” he cuts her off and wiggles his eyebrows teasingly

YES! I mean yeah..:P

I'm so looking forward when JC and Ari attend the wedding, her family is probably gonna freak even more when they meet JC in person..HAHA!

*takes a swig of water from my water bottle*

Thanks for the update..



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jul 19, 2014 Title: Chapter 16: Cooking and Favorites

*grabs pillow tightly* AHH! :D loved when they both whispered there "I love yous."

And THIS: She shakes her head, “ Plus, now I’m banging the hottest and most talented one out of all of them so…” Yes she IS! Oh I WISH it was me the one that was.. :P But then, wouldn't we all want to do so much more with the man?? Ok let me stop...

I'm SO looking forward for JC to meet Ari's family, thats gonna be fun..

Thanks for the update.. :D

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jul 21, 2014 Title: Chapter 17: Cookie Dough and Suprises

That ending: “But if you don’t marry that girl, we’ll disown you" Reminds me of a scene in "Back to the Future" when Lorraine's father told her saying, "Lorraine, if you ever have a kid who acts that way we'll disown you.." LOL

Anyways, moving on, I laughed at this earlier because I could just imagine Ari's reaction.. tee hee.

“Uh-Hi.” She manages to stutter out.

He's still laughing! Traitor!

And when JC was with his niece, AWW! JC with kids is ADORABLE! He needs to get out of LA and find the right girl(me!) :D Hey, I can dream..lolz

So far, this is getting good! Thanks for the update!



Author's Response: I wanted to do something funny for the first meet and greet, glad you liked it!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jul 23, 2014 Title: Chapter 18: Parties and Pillows

DAMN! No wait..HOT DAMN! :D That was WOW! And I just turned off the fan..gonna have to turn it back on again..its getting HOT in here..;P

This was a GREAT read, enjoyed it very much, and JC is a tease..and OMG! Are they gonna have babies?? Because I so laughed at what Ari said...

I want to have his babies LOL That came out so random.. :P

If they do have babies I'll be like this... :D

Awesome chapter, lovin' this story! Thanks for the update...



Author's Response: ;)

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Aug 31, 2014 Title: Chapter 19: Cookies and First Class

THIS image! AWW! :D I can SO picture him!

Her lips form into a small smile as she finds him lying on his back on the studio couch, one forearm covers his eyes while the other hangs off the edge of the couch, his fingers rest against the floor where a pen also lays. He is wearing light colored pajama pants and a grey t-shirt, a notebook rests on his chest which is rising and falling slowly with each breath.

But glad that Ari's family are liking JC so far, I really needed to refresh my memory cause I forgot quite a few things..LOL

Now, OMG CONGRATS on your pregnancy! AWW! *hugs* And I have also been busy myself, I go back to work on the 4th of Sept, been on vacay since June..and I haven't had the time to update my story either, I'll get to it..:P

Above all, thanks for the update!



Author's Response: Thanks! My husband and I are really excited as this is our first child. Happy return to work for you, hope it went well! Thanks for always reviewing!

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Sep 13, 2014 Title: Chapter 20: Hockey Sticks and Bonfires

Major refresher for me..had to scan the previous chapter...now I remember! :D

I hope they move in together! And LOL Nick trying to get JC to sing the national anthem..too funny.

Nicely done on this one though.

Reviewer: theusagirl Signed
Date: Jan 31, 2015 Title: Chapter 22: Fan Fiction and Symmetrical Carrots

OMG THE SHOWER SCENE WAS SO HOT! It was steamy and perfect and just AHHH! :D And I can listen to JC singing lyrics like that..had me laughing..LOL But Wait..have I heard that  "Pass Me By song?? I listened to the rest of the unreleased demos that was posted, I don't remember that one..I gotta double check...lolz

And earlier in this chapter, I SO laughed at this! " When I go see my guy, I’ll ask him if he would take another client. I don’t see why he wouldn’t.”

Ari chuckles and raises a brow at his turned back, “You have a guy?”
LMAO

Overall, this was a very good chapter, so many fun moments, can't possibly post them all..awesome update!  Love LOVE! :D

 

 



Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed it! Did you end up checking out the song? Wasn't it hilariously perfect?