Penname: Keediluv [Contact] Real name: Kijuana
Member Since: Apr 19, 2007
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Life As We Know It Will Surely End by AmberW (R) [Comments - 101]

Justin and Gretchen have a past.  A past that ended and was never heard from again.  One fateful day the past will come back and try to repeat itself.  Justin struggles with the idea of finality while Gretchen moves on and finds her happiness.  The question is, how long can happiness truly last?  Gretchen's life as she knows it, is about to end and new one is about to begin.

 



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Action/Adventure, Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 32
Wordcount: 84229 - Hits: 86840
Complete?: Yes - Published: Dec 29, 2009 - Last Updated: Jun 22, 2010 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

YAYAYAY!  I will always love JC scenes.  I really love what you have so far and I want to know how the lunch goes so, update soon please...thank you.

 

Awesomeness,

Ki 



Author's Response: Thank you!  I really appreciate the reviews!  I am writing the next couple of chapters right now so there should be an update in the next couple few days :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jan 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

So, I need to know what's going to happen on the finale' of this date.  Love that Joshua was so attentive, and masculine, and sexy.  Yummy!  I hope she really gets to enjoy herself on their weekend together.  Yay!

Ki 



Author's Response: I just finished writing the next chapter.  I should have it posted late tomorrow or early Friday :) 

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I'm so giddy that he's sorta dating.  I think they make a sweet couple...I'm excited!

Ki 

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jan 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Shut the front door?!  Not the baby....girl, you got my stomach in knots.  

P.S-Love the internalizing of these two, it's charming...and dare I say sexy.

Ki 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review...I have more written and will post it tomorrow (Thursday) afternoon!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

Wow, that was so thoughtful, sincere and all around awesome! I'm glad the baby turned out okay and that JC and Gretchen were able to get through their issues (even if it took her to the last minute or so lol) and see the love they had right in front of them.  Awesomeness lady!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

By the way...sorry I dropped out on this one for a while.  I honestly wasn't around for anything but I did just disappear and I'm sorry for that.  I'm back though :)

Author's Response:

We all have our time when we can't give everything our attention...it's life!

Thanks for the kind words and reviewing!

Make sure you check out the other fic(s) I have going!

Naturally by jersey_tenn (R) [Comments - 50]
Past Featured Story

 

When you know it’s meant to be
Everything comes naturally, it comes naturally
When you're with me, baby 

“Naturally” – Selena Gomez



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Group, JC Chasez, Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 29
Wordcount: 102642 - Hits: 86867
Complete?: No - Published: Jan 15, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 12, 2011 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Hanging...

Mayra, this is an absolutely wonderful story! The relationship between the two is truly free-flowing and natural and I for one really appreciate that. Ana is strong, independent, and good natured but she doesnt hide her vulnerability and I admire that.

JC is so yummy!! That's the kind of relationship we as fans hope to have with him or at least it's how we imagine him to be. Her relationship with the guys is cute too. I love how protective they are of her and I hope that continue. Chapter 14 was epic! I don't know what the fuck possessed JC to bring that hoochie around but I hope she's handled real quick. I was waiting for the drama and you certainly didn't disappoint. Awesomeness so far mama!

P.S- I'd love to hear more from her sisters. :)

Author's Response:

I'm so glad that you were able to read through it and catch up! Eek, this excites me too much! lol. I'm glad that their relationship comes off as so free-flowing and natural. it's exactly what I shot for - hence, the title. But, sometimes, I worry that I may try too hard and make it forceds. Ana is my baby. I've poured so much soul in her characterization, and it makes me happy beyond words to hear you describe her. Because it is everything that I want her to be. Thank you!

JC is oh-so-yummy! And you're so right about this is what we all envision, at least for a while. We all know that man is married to his music, and that's that. CH 14 was epic. It took me many pairs of panties to write that one -- lol!

We've all questioned many JC decisions, like bringing that hoochie around. Yep, will always question that. She'll eventually be handled - lol.

The sisters are coming -- in a hurry too! So, stay tuned...

Thank you for the love mama!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Shoulda Been You...

Fuck him and his couch...dirty bastard!  I can't believe his all oblivious and nonchalant about the shit HE set into motion. Then have the audacity to act shocked and surprised when she leaves?!  He can go to hell for all I care...or at least until the next update.  You put your foot on this one mama....too good!

P.S-Homemade Peach Ice Cream is the ish! 



Author's Response:

As outsiders looking in, I think we all feel the same. Just like Justin and Chris. But, as an insider looking out, like Ana, will she feel the same?

Next update will definitely be a lot sooner than I anticipated. I'm on a roll with this one, and my goal is to finish it before my one year mark. So, stay tuned mama! Thank you!

S/N: it really is the ish! lol...

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Jaded

O.M.G!  Eternally grateful that you put Aaliyah in this story! Was so shocked when I read that babygirl was the mysterious friend; that was a great moment for me.

So it took Chris verbally knocking some sense into Joshua for him to see his wrongdoing?  I'm glad it happened but something about that scares me for their future.  He better start paying attention and quick!  I'm glad Myra's in town and I think the advice she got was good.  She needs to focus on herself and her friends and family and let him do the work.  She deserves the time and energy she gives out returned to her.  Good chapter mama! 

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Dec 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Knight in shining armor...

Good chapter mama!  I need to see a little more effort on Josh's part before I'm on his side again.  Who are we kidding??  I'd be down with him through whatever, as will you. :)  Again, I enjoyed the chapter and I'm so glad one of her sisters was around for this one.  Their exchange is classic.  Loved it! :)

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Apr 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Fly High, My Angel

Heartbreaking, OMG!  Seriously, this chapter is amazing and I remember where I was when I heard about it too.  You did us Aaliyah fans proud mama, excellent work. :)

Author's Response:

And where have you been hiding, missy?!?! Hhmph, I'm feeling a bit neglected!

Thank you for reviewing, lady...now, come back to us!

Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: May 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: The Miracle Worker

This is so sweet!  I love that she got a chance to visit with Miss Diane.  She needed to be able to release what she had been holding on to.  And if JC isn't back to his normal, sweet, loving self?!  I need him for about a week or two.  I hope the both of you don't feel neglected lol. I'll starting to work my way back :)  Love you girl and great chapter!

Ki 

Midnight Snack by ltaylor03 (NC-17) [Comments - 15]
Cassie can't sleep. Her late night snack turns into something a little better than ice cream.

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 4728 - Hits: 3066
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 03, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 03, 2010 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Nov 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Midnight Snack

Well Happy Thanksgiving to you too!  That was beyond words woman.  This was really freakin hot mama.  Awesome!

Author's Response: hahaha...glad you enjoyed, love! <3

Part I by jersey_tenn (NC-17) [Comments - 6]
The meet

Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1461 - Hits: 1993
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 07, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 07, 2010 -
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Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Let me violate you...

What?!  What's happening?  I don't understand what's going on...and...scene.  WOW!  That was really animalistic and raw and just plain hawt!  Goodness...on to the next one. :)

Part II by jersey_tenn (NC-17) [Comments - 5]

 

Silence



Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama

Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1577 - Hits: 1657
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 08, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 08, 2010 -
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Date: Oct 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Broke apart my insides...

I'm between utterly pissed and strangely turned on right now.  Like I want to rip his shit off of his body for being so fucking ridiculous but he's so freaking hot.  Why are you doing this to me?  Moving on...