The Flaw
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama
Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1176 - Hits: 1646
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 15, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 15, 2010 -
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Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama
Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1176 - Hits: 1646
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 15, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 15, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I want to feel you from the inside...
Date: Oct 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I want to feel you from the inside...
I'm so confused right now. I don't trust him anymore...at least not right now. He's the guy I need him to be but how long will that last? I guess I'll see....
The choice
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama
Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1498 - Hits: 1684
Complete?: Yes - Published: Apr 21, 2010 - Last Updated: Apr 21, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: You can have my isolation...
Date: Oct 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: You can have my isolation...
The fantasy of having him do something like that is currently stronger than the need to punch him in the face. Nice going honey...
The Reason
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama
Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1262 - Hits: 1775
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 04, 2010 - Last Updated: May 04, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Its your sex I can smell...
Date: Oct 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Its your sex I can smell...
You and this slow torturous shit is getting to me girl...
*This is in response to the 'Carry Out' challenge.*
Karina decides to make good on the promise she made to her boyfriend for being a good sport at her sorority's date party.
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance
Challenges: Carry Out
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2611 - Hits: 1893
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 17, 2010 - Last Updated: May 17, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Promises, Promises
Date: Oct 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Promises, Promises
So note to self, 'don't read your stories late @ night if the husband has to work in the early morning'. That was crazy hot.
The heartbreak
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama
Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1780 - Hits: 1740
Complete?: Yes - Published: May 20, 2010 - Last Updated: May 20, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Closer to God...
Date: Oct 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Closer to God...
Good googa mooga woman!
The End
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Drama
Series: Closer
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1553 - Hits: 1545
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jun 12, 2010 - Last Updated: Jun 12, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I drink the honey inside your hive...
Date: Oct 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: I drink the honey inside your hive...
I can't believe it! I had a feeling but I didn't want to allow myself to believe it. How dare you?! Toying with my emotions like that...for shame! If it wasn't so deliciously awesome, I'd be pissed. LOL! You know you rocks socks girl!
This is a one-shot based off the lyrics to Drake's song bearing the same title off of his 'So Far Gone' mixtape. I'd had the urge to write a one-shot all day and this is what I came up with. Reviews are always appreciated. :]
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3143 - Hits: 2492
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 02, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 02, 2010 -
Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3143 - Hits: 2492
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 02, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 02, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Oct 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: Oct 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Can't even explain to you how hot this is...the hubby's in trouble! Fantastic job hon :)
Author's Response: oh damn, don't hurt him girl! and your comments always make me go and read over what i wrote. just a sidenote =]
Things aren’t always black and white. Relationships, situations, people - they're complicated and messy, and often heartbreaking, even when they make you happy. Sometimes they’re gray, sometimes they’re blue, and when Justin meets Zooey, everything suddenly turns… yellow.Categories: Completed Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Drama, Humor, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Wordcount: 83648 - Hits: 60444
Complete?: Yes - Published: Jul 04, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 24, 2011 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Oh Friend, You've Left Me Speechless
Date: Jul 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Oh Friend, You've Left Me Speechless
I am sad...that is all.
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: I Got A Feeling
Date: Jul 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: I Got A Feeling
The conversation with these two is so...so...easy. It really did feel like they knew each other way back when or something. This is a great start hon, good stuff!
Author's Response: Easy like Sunday morning! That's kinda what I was aiming for, I'm super happy that came across. Thanks so much for the review, darlin'.
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Fireworks
Author's Response: Well, not gonna lie, I wrote the chapter after listening to the song a few too many times, so that could be why lol. But thanks! And yeah, Scarlett is all oblivious and innocent in this, which sucks, but I think it's safe to say Justin will have to pay his dues eventually. I had to make sure Zooey could hold her own, though, I'm glad you were feelin' it! I like no-bullshit people, so you and Zooey are good with me lol. Annnyway, thanks so much for the review! Love hearing from you!
Date: Jul 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Fireworks
So like the song and the chapter matched a little too well. I just can't believe it went that way. And poor Scarlett seems like the perfect girlfriend/wife-to-be. I'd hate to see her get hurt. And how about how harsh Justin was with Zooey?! That shit's for the birds man. I like how she handles herself though.
And this line right here: 'You can't just take it back, you fuckin said it. If that's how you feel, own that shit' is so me...if you can't come at me with real talk, don't talk to me. Hehe, that's how my momma describes my level for bullshit. Anywho, another fab chapter honey. I hope he can work something out with Zooey, you know once she's done being pissed.
Author's Response: Well, not gonna lie, I wrote the chapter after listening to the song a few too many times, so that could be why lol. But thanks! And yeah, Scarlett is all oblivious and innocent in this, which sucks, but I think it's safe to say Justin will have to pay his dues eventually. I had to make sure Zooey could hold her own, though, I'm glad you were feelin' it! I like no-bullshit people, so you and Zooey are good with me lol. Annnyway, thanks so much for the review! Love hearing from you!
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Eleven-Ten-Nine
Author's Response: Haha, I love Scarlett, too! It's hard not to, which is kind of what I'm going for. I want you guys to be just as confused as Justin lol. It may not have been the best decision though, you're right, and I don't think Justin really thought all of this out... which he seems to never do where Zooey is concerned, and that's dangerous for everyone involved. But in the meantime, we can enjoy that Justin and Scarlett are happy and adorable together, and we'll get to Zooey eventually, I suppose, so you will definitely have a story to read! lol Thanks for the review, boo!
Date: Jul 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Eleven-Ten-Nine
Ok, so now I love Scarlett even more (stop doing that to me because I'm scared she'll be hurt). I just don't know if it was the best decision because you know how he gets around Zooey and this is more than likely going to break her heart. The ceremony was adorable and they just seem to work don't they? The vows were very endearing and almost everything in me wants it to work out. But then, I wouldn't have a story to read right? Plus, I know there's something there with Zooey. Too frickin cute mama!
P.S- Love Dr. Seuss!
Author's Response: Haha, I love Scarlett, too! It's hard not to, which is kind of what I'm going for. I want you guys to be just as confused as Justin lol. It may not have been the best decision though, you're right, and I don't think Justin really thought all of this out... which he seems to never do where Zooey is concerned, and that's dangerous for everyone involved. But in the meantime, we can enjoy that Justin and Scarlett are happy and adorable together, and we'll get to Zooey eventually, I suppose, so you will definitely have a story to read! lol Thanks for the review, boo!
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Full Disclosure
Author's Response: Be afraid. Be very afraid! No, just kidding. You don't have to be too scared, but I can tell you that you will probably be conflicted for a while. Because you're right, this is how love starts. And it seems that Justin almost forgets about his adorable wife when Zooey is around, which is only a bad thing, so it's like he's just opening himself up to this dangerous prospect. Okay yeah, maybe you should be afraid lol. But in a totally awesome way. :giggle Thanks for the review, girl!
Date: Jul 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Full Disclosure
I'm so scared! You know this is how love starts right? I mean, he has an adorable wife and yet, is challenged and intrigued by Ms. Zooey and that usually grows from like to love. See what you're doing to me?! I'm all conflicted; in a totally awesome kinda way. Thanks for updating...
Ki
Author's Response: Be afraid. Be very afraid! No, just kidding. You don't have to be too scared, but I can tell you that you will probably be conflicted for a while. Because you're right, this is how love starts. And it seems that Justin almost forgets about his adorable wife when Zooey is around, which is only a bad thing, so it's like he's just opening himself up to this dangerous prospect. Okay yeah, maybe you should be afraid lol. But in a totally awesome way. :giggle Thanks for the review, girl!
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Up In The Air
Date: Jul 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Up In The Air
Why??????!!!!! Why is every fucking thing between them so damn easy?! As much as he and Scarlett seem perfect, he and Zooey feels RIGHT! Okay, I'm sorry for the caps (and for cussing lol) but really...this chapter was just easy...and very, very yellow. There are know words to describe this story mama.
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Aug 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Two Sides of My Brain Need to Have a Meeting
Date: Aug 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: The Two Sides of My Brain Need to Have a Meeting
I am yellow too! I want them to work but I just can't see him leaving Scarlett. What to do, what to do? Great update mama!
They kept meeting under rushed circumstances. Their chance meetings quickly start to become semi-regular. The more regular their meetings get the less rushed they are. Their feelings develop over a series of meetings, but in the meantime, what do these feelings mean?
I know this is a little strange
but in the meantime
she will be my girl
in the meantime
I promise her the world
in the meantime
I am hers and she is mine
I finally find the perfect girl
and I am pressed for time
in the meantime
Meantime Girl-
Jaron And The Long Road To Love
Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: JC Chasez
Awards: None
Genres: Celebrity/Celebrity, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 4405 - Hits: 2190
Complete?: No - Published: Jul 05, 2010 - Last Updated: Jul 15, 2010 -
Reviewer: Keediluv Signed
Date: Jul 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: There Goes My Girl
Date: Jul 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: There Goes My Girl
Really good start so far. I love that your characters are all strong, independent women! It's upsetting that Jason didn't tell her about the girlfriend but I'm sure Josh will help her past that right? LOL, good stuff mama!
Author's Response:
I think independent women exude a certain level of sexiness and it's important that if there are younger readers they learn it's okay to be independent!
Thanks for the reivew :)
