The slow torture is killing me!!! I need them to get back together or close the book with a romp for the road or something! The chemistry between the two of them is sick...really. This is just too damn good girl!
Author's Response: It's killing me too! And JC and Mayra! lol...final resolution is coming, I promise. I'm working on getting this next chapter out but it is being a little difficult and stubborn right now...kind of like these two characters! lol :)
Thank you for letting the torture subside. And YAYAYAYAYAY! I'm really happy that they finally got to get over themselves and admit how they felt. Burning a hole in the mattress didn't hurt either. Got me in here with my legs crossed all tight...damn that JC, LOL!
Author's Response:
hahaha! damn JC is right! It was fun finally writing them together and getting to let everything explode :)
Aww yay! I was hoping that they got married in the end but I didn't expect the twins. Awesomeness all around!
Author's Response: surprise!! hahaha...As soon as I wrote Mayra and JC back together I could see their whole life play out in front of me. It was kind of weird....I just knew that they had twins and so I had to write it because it was just too darn cute to see JC interacting with them :) Thanks for all the love and reviews <3
Sometimes knowing you've got to let go and not letting go is not the problem. The problem lies in not believing you'll be ok after letting go. Opening your heart one final time to get that other person to understand you is the greatest chance you'll take in your relationship. Why? Well, their response to you will either make or break you.
Thank you for leaving your heart on paper. I know how hard this must be for you but know this...beyond a shadow of doubt, you'll be FINE!! My own personal experience lets me know that it'll get better. Think of this as a part of your broken road, leading you to the greater later. Truly beautiful work hon. I look forward to the day that you're so happy you're delirious!
Ki
Silence stared me in the face
And I finally heard its voice
It seemed to softly say
That in love you have a choice
She, a young woman, abandoned by those closest to her, and yet embraced by those furthest from her. Life has thrown one, two, three curveballs her way, and yet, she keeps her heart open to love.
He, a musician who's lost his muse, finds himself discovering a terrifying passion. With his best friend alongside to guide him, he unearths the missing puzzle piece – his heart.
Gen Store Mom? Aww! I'm sure she'll be fine...at least I hope so. And just who is this sucky baby-daddy anyway? I don't care for him already. Thanks for the update, I was just wondering about this one. :O)
Author's Response: We'll talk more about him later on -- thanks for reviewing hun!
Ok, so I had pretty much the same thing for dinner last night...weird, lol. Good start mama. I love the good natured folks of the south, makes me miss home :).
Author's Response: I LOVE THE SOUTH! WHOO! we just make it home for everyone!
Try not to leave Justin too traumatized ok. I love that he was so caring when he could've been the complete opposite. Great chapter honey!
Author's Response:
I know right?!?! I think I'm gonna leave myself traumatized!
Southern Hospitality -- my inspiration for his reaction.
Thanks for the love!
Thank you for not traumatizing Justin too much. This was a very cute chapter. Can't wait for Valentina to meet JC. Because I love him of course, lol.
Author's Response: It would've been too easy to traumatize him! Thanks for reviewing!
So, if I have a baby, will you send JC to me?! LOL...j/k. I love this chapter!! I cried when everyone surprised her. And her meeting JC in this chapter was perfect. Beautiful job honey!
Author's Response: I mean, really, he is the TRUE gift! Thanks for the love, hun!
You updated, yay! I like this chapter mama. It feels like the beginning of something you know? Trace couldn't be more adorable with Evan...I love the idea of him and kids for some reason. I bet he'd be a good dad. And the diaper change scene? Hilarious! I could imagine many a daddy going through a similar situation.
You use the best metaphors mama! Good shit per usual. :)
Oh that was just darling! I know, don't kick my butt, I took a bit of a break but I'm slowly pulling myself out of it. This chapter is awesome! Now, on to the next one :)
Let it work, please let it work. I thing it'd be awesome if he joined her in Nashville for a bit. Did I mention that I love this story? Because I do, I really, really do. You rock socks mama!
"...love's the drug and this for the lovers..."
This was so sweet! I just had an 'I love you too much to put into words' kinda moment with my BFF yesterday so this has me crying. There's nothing in the world better than friendship...and love :) Thanks for writing this,
Ki
A response to the AwesomeAugust Challenge!
A day at the beach brings back the pain Charlie thought she left behind.
Aww! Why Lance? Charlie's a better woman than me...but I understand why she kept it as civil as she could with the kids being close and all. But man, that was cold...bad Lance!
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