There should be more to this young lady. This is just adorable and the kiss was so sweet. Too cute.
Hell yeah! Punish me too :)
Because you're not with him! Wow, this was quite a ride young lady. You took me everywhere emotionally, which is always a good thing. I'd love to see where this goes :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It was one of my goals to make this a very emotionally involved story. I wanted readers to be able to follow the storyline but still be excited about reading the next chapter. Part 2 will be out this week-Firework. Thanks for the review. And I just started reading ur story-LOVE IT!
Aww, this is so cute! I like that they seemed to find themselves in the right place at the right time. It would be great to see if they develop further...just a suggestion :). Good work mama!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've thinking about writing something else with these two. I just might sit down and do it. Thanks again! =)
Utterly damn ridiculous lady! Dallas is kinda mean at first, grinding all that into him. You know he's an ass man...shame! I will say she more than made up for it by story's end. It's too hot mama, excellent work!
Author's Response: Girl you KNOW if he was gonna get it with a stripper she'd have to have a ridiculous ass haha. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
That was so super sweet! I love that the story was based on the guys...just our guys :). Thanks for warming my heart tonight, I loved it.
Everyone has that one person in their life that will always be there for them. One person they can count on that they can run to when things in life get messy. But what happens when the one you usually run to, becomes the one you're running from?
So Dean is freaking awesome huh? Wow hon, this is a great one. Justin is so cute and Riley finally let her head and her heart connect. This is an excellent read :) Great work!
Author's Response:
So I suck at responding to reviews sometimes! SORRYYYYYYYYYYYY! :)
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and I"m glad you liked it! I think Dean falls under the category of boys I wish existed b/c I haven't ever met one that nice. lol. It was easy to write Riley because I feel like a lot of us can relate to her b/c we've all been there at one point where it feels easier to run from something than to try and stick around and take whatevre comes at us.
Thanks again for the review, love!
<3LT
To have been the clothes on her back! OMG lady this is too much! I'm over here smiling harder than possible, just thinking of the possibility. Just too yummy for words. You totally rock socks mama. Incredible!
Author's Response: hahaha...everyone has been telling me I should have put a smile warning on this one. Thank you!! I'm soooo glad you liked it!!! :)
Let hopes pass, let dreams pass
Let them die
Without you, what are they for?
I'll always feel no more than halfway real
Till I hear you...
I love fairies! I know something yummy is coming down the pipe...right? Love it!
Why did she run? Goodness....*biting my nails until next chapter*
I agree with Ariella. Moving on...
Her voice? Really?! He sucks at life...:)
Aww, I guess he's put off by her not being able to talk. He'll get over it, I'm sure. LOL!
It's getting hot in here...hehe. Awesomeness....yay:)
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