There was a penniless, wallet less, white boy in my house in the middle of North Philly with cuts and bruises and memory loss and all I had was a pocket knife, three bandages, and a cat to protect me. UPDATED 9/21
Girl I had a hectic few weeks and couldn't catch up until just now. OMG!! I'm just shocked (though I knew it was coming). I guess poor Justin is tired of fighting against the cheating but what happens to our girl now?! I feel so bad for her. Please make sure she'll be okay because a person can only take so much! Great update!
Ok, so I don't want to get my hopes up for this because I personally feel that it isn't fair for him to just drop by like her heart can take that kind of teasing to be rejected again. Sorry for the run-on, I just want to make sure she'll be alright in the end. You are TOO good!
Ki
Aww I knew this would be hard. You should make her tease him...just a little. He knew what he'd be walking in on and damnit, he should see what he's missing. Put it in his head. I'm not one to condone cheating but in this case; it is what it is. You really should stop messing with ppl like this Mari, you're just to fab!
So, I've been waiting for this moment for a while. I just hope he doesn't let her down. She should act all out of character and flirt, big time. Well, that's what I'd do...hehe. Great update!
Ki
You tease! That was just wrong girl. Although, I understand a good fuck and duck, I didn't think it would be Justin to stop them. That was commendable (if that's how you spell it) of him. You and this slow, wonderful torture of yours. Awesome lady!
Ki
Girl...Sash is something else. I didn't think she had it in her to resist him that like that. I wish I could talk to her, or shake her or do whatever it takes to make her see that she's KILLING HERSELF! Okay, I'm done.
Awesomeness,
Ki
So, it took him long enough but I'm glad he came to his senses. Sheesh! Love the update, never, ever disappointed. Thanks for the update.
She's doing her job...making him crazy. I wanted to leap through the computer screen and scream in her face 'HE LOVES YOU!!!' Great update, per usual.
Ki
She should just rape (not in the literal sense ppl)his ass and get that shit over with. You know, you have all that sexy ass piece of man all up on you...I know I couldn't resist. You had me going in the beginning of the chapter but pulled me back at the end. Per usual, amazing!
Ki
Okay, them sitting back torturing themselves is killing me too! It's hard because I know how much he messed up but at the same time, they're both miserable without each other. I like the idea about how to handle mom though. Well that's because it's my glimmer of hope that something will click and all will be well again.
Ki
P.S-I totally blame you for my current infatuation of Trey Songz. Don't catch a case for trying to snatch Trey off the stage during the concert alright. I can't afford to get you out of jail!
Ok, so am I the only one who's frustrated with Sash? I mean really! I understand where she's coming from but how do you really know what something's going to be like until you actually experience it? It could be everything she thinks it is or the complete opposite. If you want something bad enough, you make it happen, point blank. I think (and hope) that she understands what telling him no truly means...misery. Because she won't be happy without him. Amazing update!
Ki
P.S-I'm sure you'll hear this over and over but I really am sorry about the art program. I pray that something better comes along...when one door closes, another will open. Just keep swimming...:)
Look who updated all fast and whatnot...awesomeness. Yay, Justin gets his little girl. Can you say rotten from the womb?I feel the ridiculousness of daddyJ! sparking up right now. I wonder what's going to happen on the date? He's going to be his natural self so we'll have to see how Sash accepts it huh? I'm excited!
Ki
P.S-Happy New Year hon!
Jessica's now a roommate for a couple days? I don't really know how I feel about that. She seems to be a sweetheart but I'm not letting my guard down yet...I know you say you don't like writing visual scenes but you're SO good at it! LOL!
Ki
By the way...it's like you have a hidden camera in my bedroom...seriously! :)
Author's Response: LMFAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. now my roomie's mad. i bust out laughing reading that. ;) lol
So, can you name the next chapter 'The Real Fight' where Sash has a change of heart and she goes back and attempts to beat the living shit out of Justin and Jessica? Then, just for shits and giggles, Trace actually jumps in and helps Sash in the process of kicking ass and taking names? I think that skunkbag took advantage of Justin in a weak moment and slept with him out of spite. I'm in NO way condoning what Justin did, but that heifer did what she did on purpose. That was an all around bitch move on both of their parts and I hope that sweet justice is served on them both.
I'm sorry that Sash had to have her heart broken like that, but real love has a way of working itself out. I'm keeping hope alive for the two of them; not for Justin's sake, but for Sash's.
Love the update,
Ki
P.S.-I knew I was right about her!
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