Chris is in love with Lesly, but he's got a lot of growing up to do to prove it to her.
Great happy ending for all! I can't believe it's over, but I'm excited to read the next story in the series. I adore your writing and the way real-life is portrayed. Thanks for the awesome stories :)
Thanks so much! I hope you enjoy Daddy's Girl!
Alysen B.
Fall into Fall Challenge Submission - October 1st
oh wow, very emotional. thank you.
When Joey meets a girl at a Halloween party, he's attracted to her even when he doesn't know her name.
That was very cute :) I loved the masked theme!
I think my two favorite parts were:
"Remind me to flip the breaker switch to her room that has her computer in it. Serves her right.” haha that's something I'd do!
And also when Joey MAKES her ask him to dinner and not just give in and say I'll go.
I just re-read this :) such a fun story!
Dani is just another girl struggling to get by in the world shes had a rough life and made some bad choices that led her to where she is today. Her world is soon flipped upside down when someone comes into her life and offers her a deal of a lifetime or so she thinks that is until the deal she made ends up being the biggest mistake shes ever made. Can she make it right or will it be too late?
It's a good start and an interesting concept, my advice would be to work on your paragraphs and spacing so it makes the story easier to follow. thanks :)
Nothing's going to keep you quite as warm on a wintry night in Paris like a little body heat. Very cute :)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Leah takes the longest walk of her life towards JCWow, that was intense! I can't believe he is marrying another woman and we don't even have all the story yet! Poor Leah! I loved it :)
I absolutely love it! It inspires and is a great read. Can't wait for the next update :)
I loved how he answered the door! This one of my favorite stories I have ever read on here :) Thanks for the great read!
Is JC trying to set her up with Justin, hmmm.... Thanks for the update, still love this story. I look forward to more :)
JC is an eager beaver with all that help he's offering!! Easy boy!! lol great story, thanks for the update :)
I LOVED this part:
“So, Christopher Kirkpatrick, three younger half-sisters, an ex-stepfather or two, a current one and two dogs. October 17, '71, Libra.” Chris rambled on for a moment.
What?”
“The first date bio, thought I'd get it out of the way.” Chris' eyes wrinkled up as he grinned at Justin's sudden blush. “Thought so,” he said softly. “What about you?”
Great one chapter story :)
Very awesome :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Intriguing beginning, loved to see where this goes :)
Ahhhh Casey is bad news! Keep fighting for him Justin!! Great update
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