Hi! Long time lurker of this site. Decided to finally join and put up some of my ideas. Feel free to leave constructive criticism; I take it well and I appreciate the time spent to help me with my writing.
I hope you enjoy.
In a lot of my stories, you'll find an OC by the name of Annaleigh "Ace" Carr. Annaleigh is a feisty, guarded, but fun loving southern girl hailing from Clinton, Mississippi and childhood friends with none other than Lance Bass. You can follow her and Lance's journey in the "Cards" series.
For my Secret Santa, AceofSpades!
Sometimes things are really similar...and sometimes that's a good thing.
Don't worry about the length, trust me, I get the school thing. This was perfect and put a huge smile on my face!
Merry Christmas and thanks again.
Author's Response: Aww thank you! So glad you liked it! It was so hard not telling you lol:)
Wade, Wade, Wade. That was a bad move, pissing Annaleigh off like that. haha. I feel bad for Lance, but that's exactly how she'd act.
You've got Annaleigh down perfectly.
Haha, you've got their banter down and everything. I was so excited to see that you got me. I loved ho you wrote Annaleigh. It was perfect. I really loved this, especialy this part:
Justin looked appalled. "I do not buy Britney lingerie. For your information, I'm a classy gentleman."
Joey stifled a laugh. "Yup. And JC has great red carpet fashion."
For sure the boys didn't have the most fattering red carpet fashion. Thank you so much! I loved it!
This is the story of my son and his father. But before that, it’s the story of his father and me, back when he was just some guy at a frat party.
Greeeaatttt start! I can't wait to read more. The dialogue was funny to read and it lowed well. I especially loved this line "I want to go home and watch Boy Meets World." I can't wait to see more.
Author's Response: Boy Meets World is the best. :-) Thanks for reading, glad you like it!
Awww, the chapter is over. I love their banter, it flows so well and it's so realistic. I loved their music conversation.
I can't wait for more. The diction and syntax in this story is incredible and keeps the reader wanting more. Awesome job.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
This is my Valensync story for AceofSpades who wanted to see: song, writing and cuddles.
Hope you enjoy it!
Kyra has finally realized her dream of becoming a published author. When she embarks on her first publicity tour and runs into someone from her past, she doesn't know how she will deal with it. Can she get over the past and move on with her life? Or will she get reeled back in by him as she always did?
Most of all, how will this story end?
I have absolutely NO IDEA how I had missed this chapter! And for so long! But, it was great! I loved how JC kept calling Duke "Douche", I laughed at the "Den of death" part and I "Awwwwed" out loud when I read the short note.
This was great and I apologize for how long it took me to notice this chapter. And I agree, he is sex on legs. haha.
No worries!
Sorry I've been sucking at updating, life is getting in the way a little but I'm almost done with the next chapter. It'll be quite long I think. Hope you'll enjoy it!
Ooooooh, I liked how that ended after reading what drove them apart in the first place. Can't wait for more. Update when you can.
Author's Response: Hahaha, I guess we were reading each other's stuff at the same time. Funny! Thanks for the review! I'm about half way through the next chapter, so it should come soon. A few baby naps and it should eventually get completed...hahaha :)
Yay! I'm getting a multi-chaptered story, too. I didn't just like it, I loved it. Off to read the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Yay! Yep, when I got my idea for the story it just kept coming and coming...lol
I will involve Lance as much as I can too! Enjoy the rest!
Bye, Bye, Bye.
Well, shit.
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Haha. I loved that part! I laughed for so long. I'm really enjoying this! I cant wait to see more!
YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!!! The awkwardness in this chapter was soooo good. I actually cringed while reading parts of it. haha. I loved the flashback at the beginning and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next.
Update whenever you can.
Every five years, seven friends gather together at a beach house to remember Lance, who committed suicide fifteen years ago. Through flashbacks and stories told, they soon come to realize it may not have been a suicide after all, and that one of their own is a murderer.
Oooooh, good ending. I'm so anxious to see ore of what's to come.
Author's Response: Thanks as always for reading, girl! I hope to be updating soon :)
LOVED IT! This was too cute! And Chris of course having a mind like that. Got a chuckle out of me. Great story.
Author's Response: Ha ha! Thank you!
Their relationship has always had its ups and downs. With a baby and a new tour about to start up, JC and Annie will be put to the test like never before.
Yes! I'm so glad there's a sequel. Great start. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!
I was just a regular girl, living with my college roommates and best friends Dawn and Amiyah, until a girl's weekend, one concert, and one guy changed everything.
And that was just the beginning.
“I don't do things like this,” I tell him.
“Things like what?”
“Take off to Orlando and meet some guy and have coffee with him.”
“Yeah, neither do I,” he says, looking at me with a smile. “But I think under the circumstances, Joey'll understand.
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I laughed so hard at this part. Great chapter. Update whenever you can. Lance is such a sweetheart.
Yay, a new chapter. That ending, though. Lance would make a great dad, I just know it. Update whenever you can.
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