Reviewer: Hollie Signed
Date: Mar 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 20: The Art Of Lying
So I decided to write this view as a running commentary while I read:
A few THOUSAND CDs? Bloody hell, where does she have the storage room... you don't know the real Justin? Well you might have if you both hadn't spent all that time playing ridiculous gameswith each other and don't think it was just him missy... the fact that he gets all jumbled up and doesn't know what to say is not a sign of not being honest, it's one that he loves you dummy... actually, being in the middle of a divorce and changing your minds wouldn't be such a lame story at all, people ro reconciliate ya know... Justin stop smirking, it's a smug facial expression that makes you look too arrogant... sneaking around? You were worried how bad a reconciliation would look but you think sneaking around when you're both trailed by paparazzi and very liable to get caught is a good idea? You idiot!... oh, and lying to Chelsea again is a BAD plan. You think your already unhelathy relationship should be rebuilt on a bed of lies?
Hot sex though.
Author's Response: lol yes! i love running commentary!
haha... believe it or not, i myself am quickly approaching 3,000 in my own cd collection. and the storage room is pretty much where ever i can put them. lol. there are stacks of cds all over the place in my apartment. it's ridiculous. lol.
haha... you are soooo right on all of it. they think they're solving problems, when in fact they're digging themselves deeper. they'll never learn. lol.
haha thank you! i was so, so, so nervous about the last half of this chapter. i don't think i'm so great at writing the sex scenes, so i'm definitely glad to hear you enjoyed it!
thanks for reading and reviewing lady!