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An Unexpected Love Affair by d_simplicity (NC-17) starstarstarstarstar [Comments - 494]

I sneak peeks at him everyday but he never notices me. The exuberant emotions I bear towards him are far more than I can handle and are very unprofessional. I dream about this man every night in hopes that one day he'll acknowledge my presence or at least get my name right, but to no avail.... Justin is my fetish and secret guilty pleasure. That's all he's ever going to be and I can live with that....

A crush I can not love.
A heart I can not fill.
A love I can not give.
A bond I can not break.
For this love can not exist.

By Angela Moore



Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Angst, Drama, Humor, Romance, Suspense

Series: None
Chapters: 53
Wordcount: 296020 - Hits: 164285
Complete?: No - Published: Aug 08, 2007 - Last Updated: Apr 24, 2009 -
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Date: Sep 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: Painful Strides

That wasn't fixing things girl. I really hope they get over this hurdle because, even if they don't do the nasty like I want, I think the two of them can be great friends. Thanks for the update, I loved it and I really thinkg you should do it again soon! Justin and Zara need each other, and I think you know that too. And I'll be e-mailing you sometime this week, so keep an eye out for that (I have some ideas in my head)

Author's Response: I know I know it didn't fix much but it's not that easy! They are two very complexed individuals. hehe. :-P. 'Friends' Hmmm...yeah. They could be. We'll see what happens. hehe. The next update will be up soon and I'll rememebr to check my email. I haven't done it yet. :). Thanks for the feedback Tay.

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Sep 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: Admission Is The First Step

Finally they're getting somewhere! I loved this update, it's probably my favorite chapter so far! I'm happy they finally told each other how they really feel! Update soon girl! I can't get enough.

Author's Response: Hey thanks so much. :). More is on the way. But girl! You need to update your stories. hehe.

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Sep 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Strawberry

Ah, nothing like coming home from sitting in the freezing cold rain at your boy's football game and seeing an update from D. But seriously girl, you're kidding right?? They were so close and then BAM, gym boy ruins it. When's this vacation going to happen because the two of them really need some alone time to straighten things out. The sexual tension is killing me!

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Sep 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: Strawberry

Oh yeah, updates? What is that? :-. I e-mailed you, I'm stuuuuuck.

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Date: Sep 19, 2007 Title: Chapter 20: One Step Closer - Part 2

AHHHHHHHHHHH! Is really all I want to say right now. It's about time that they're getting somewhere, shhiiiit can I get a yacht from JT?! I can't wait for them to set off to wherever they decide to go, do I sense that there will be some love making on the horizon?? This def made sneaking on my sisters laptop worth it and it made me feel a little better about not being able to write for a ccouple days. Update soon! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen!

Author's Response: Haha I feel you Tay. It's about time right? Yeah, at least now, things can start moving forward for them. I'm predicting it will too. :-). Even though they got a few bumps ahead, I won't dissapoint. And I miss you already. I read the notice you posted on SB. Can't wait for everything to work out.  Oh and I read your email so I'll be responding to it soon with some ideas. But it looks like you've got a good grasp on where you want things to go. But I'll take some time off to work out some of my ideas and email them to you. Anyway, can't wait till you're back. Oh and thanks for the great feedback. :)

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Sep 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 21: Voice of Reason

And the song returns <3 This was great, signing on now that my computer is fixed (way) earlier than I expected. I loved the update, but seriously the both of them need psychological help with their bi-polar asses. They cannot go three weeks without seeing each other though; I know you're going to make them have secret late night meetings (if not, take the advice). Update soon!

Author's Response: Can't get rid of that song. I think Justin is going to have it stuck until he can "fully relate" To the lyrics. *hint*. haha. And So happy you're back. I've been working up a storm this past week. Expect an email from me over the weekend. :D. And I'm happy you liked the update. I agree with you on the help. They are both messed up in the cabeza. lol. I'll be sure to take your advice into consideration. *shh.* haha. thanks for the feedback.

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Date: Sep 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 22: No Holding Back - Part 1

First off, HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY!!...Second... ohmygosh yes! It's about damn time that this happened. She needs to leave gym boy now and be with Justin; when is this cruise thingy they're supposed to be going on?? You need to update part two, pronto! (Thanks for the update btw..I loved it if you couldn't tell).

Author's Response: Thanks for the late bday wishes by the way. :)

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Oct 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 23: No Holding Back - Part 2

Yess!!! They finally really did the dirty, and it was effing hot! And Justin loves her?! This is so great, all in one chapter, but I have a really bad feeling that this isn't going to turn out for the best (at least when it comes to Gym Boy and Mallory). Good luck on your midterms this week girl, and hurry back so we can figure out what happens next!! Thanks for the update, again it was great as usual.

Author's Response: They finally did it eh? Hehe. I know you've been waiting forever. And yes, he does Love her, but did you ever doubt that? all the signs were there...hehe. And you're right. There are going to be some serious obstacles coming around the corner that Justin and Zara need to overcome before they can really truly be together. Hope you stick around for more. :). Thanks for the goodluck. I needed it. And so sad that SB ended. I read the last two updates today. Hurry with another great story for us ok? Hehe. Thanks for the review Tay.

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Oct 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 24: Be Without You

Hate you? Never, but stopping right there was pretty messed up. Zara is effing crazy, what is her problem, hurting Justin like that. And what could Justin and gym boy possibly have to talk about other than the fact that Justin needs to beat his ass and get it over with?? Good luck on that midterm, and update soon!

Author's Response: Yeah I know. I agree Justin needs to beat Jeremy up for what he's done. More is coming soon. everyhting should be cleared up through the next few chaps i'm working on. Thanks for the review girl.

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Oct 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 25: How Do I Breathe

Grrrr, you're leaving off at bad spots D. You better update soon cuz I need to know what's going to happen with them. I'm glad Zara is feeling the brunt of everything, girl shouldn't have been so stupid to tell him she doesn't love him!

Author's Response: I'm updating now! Yay! You're going to find out. Don't worry. Everything is coming into place. :) Thanks for the feedback Tay. What's happening with Feldata? Hmm...So glad you finished second best. I've been so busy. Don't feel like I've forgotten. :(. Let me know ok?

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Oct 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 26: I Need You Now More Than Ever

Wow, I didn't expect this to happen. Malcolm has to be okay!! But they confuse me D, first he's hugging her like she's about to go away forever and the next he's acting like she doesn't even exist; something's gotta give girl!! Update soon!

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Date: Nov 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 29: "I Won't Tell Your Secrets"

Ah I know I'm late but you're back!! I loved the update(s).. definitely made my shitty week a lot better. They are sooo messed up, when is this going to get fixed? What is going on with Zara? Justin to the rescue eh?? Maybe? Please?? I missed you girlie! Hope everything is cool!

Author's Response: Gurl just the other day I was like where the hell is Taylor? lol. I missed you too. And I checked to see if you wrote anything new since I was a little out of it for the time. :) So glad the updates was a plus for you. I know those shitty times, my fiction fix always made things better. And yes, Justin and Zara are messed up, but I'm working on them. In fact, pretty soon, things won't be so complicated. Well, maybe a little but not like how it is now. hehe. You'll see, the next update is almost done already. Expect it soon and thanks for dropping a line girl.

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Nov 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 30: Turning Point - Part 1

That is just wrong.... I can't even say anything else about that.. lol it's just wrong and you know it. How dare you just leave me hanging like that..

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Dec 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 31: Turning Point - Part 2

Jeremy is a biiiiitch, when is he going to be gone from the picture? I don't think this is going to be good for Justin or Zara now that Malcolm knows what's going on with them (nice change in p.o.v by the way, it was nice reading what malcolm had to say) Update soon girl!


Author's Response: Yeah I'm going to have to agree with you on that one. lol. He really is a jerk. I can't say when or if he'll ever be completely gone, but I'm working on it. hehe. And Malcolm hmm, well he might be a challenge but we'll see. Yeah, I had to get his feelings out at some point. There might be another POV of his soon, so...hehe. Thanks a lot for the feedback Tay, so glad you're still enjoying it. :). More is on the way.

Reviewer: tda720 Signed
Date: Jan 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 34: "Be With Me"

Ahh.. I feel soooo behind. I had to do some catching up and damnn girl; what's going to happen with them now, since everything is sooo up and down. I can only imagine! Hope everything is going well! Update soon!!

Author's Response: Tay, where have you been? Like seriously though. I missed you. And ask for the drama dat is Justin and Jahzara, I'm working with them on it but it's not going to be easy. lol. hehehe. More will come soon and thanks so much for commenting and I hope you get back to writing soon. I miss you!