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Ring Around the Rosy
A Pocket full of Posies
Ashes, Ashes
We All Fall Down

A baby changes everything.

Categories: In Progress Het Stories
Characters: Justin Timberlake
Awards: None
Genres: Drama, Romance

Series: None
Chapters: 26
Wordcount: 62677 - Hits: 186734
Complete?: No - Published: Apr 07, 2007 - Last Updated: Mar 12, 2008 -
Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Apr 11, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: oranges and lemons

okay, so i'm like TOTALLY rooting for a mae/trace relationship. justin is too fucked up for my liking. and the two of them get along really well. somehow, just because you are you, i know that my wishes will not be granted. lol. i love it anyway.

Author's Response: i love that you already know that i\'m going to screw with your head with this one....i can\'t help it, i just love to mess with you! love trace, you know that, but well...not giving anything away :)

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Apr 17, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: soon it all fell through

that was heavy. and i sympathize with both of them really... even though i don't agree with kate's decision, i see her reasoning and understand it... i just really don't think it's fair that she excludes justin from every decision that she makes about their son. i like it though... of course.

Author's Response: always the kate fan...interesting. i\'m glad that someone gets her:) plus torturing you is always a perk...

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Apr 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: bo peep did stray

this story worries me. all of these characters worry me actually with the exception of trace. i think he should grab mae and take her away quickly before she gets all soiled by the 2 crazy celebrities. love it though, naturally. :)

Author's Response: lol well i\'ll pass the message on for sure. as for the others...well they all have their issues that they cling to like baby blankets (look how eloquent i can be on a monday!)

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Apr 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: couldn't keep her

i think that if it weren't for trace and mae, i would be so depressed and heartbroken for jonah right now. and i see where kate is coming from... i do, i see that she's excited. but she's also a mother, she also has responsibilities, and she should really own up to them. great update once again... and, please, let's get things rolling between trace and mae. although, im sure justin is going to get help from mae now despite his stubborn ranting... and sparks might fly. and i don't know if i'm so crazy about that idea. :)

Author's Response: lol i love all your ranting. and are you *gasp* finally turing on kate...say it isn\'t so. as always i\'ll try to make you happy with my writing lol

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Apr 29, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: house is on fire

shiiiiiiiiiiit... i would be glad that he were there too. trace is killer. and this just totally lifted my mood because, as we already know, stace loves trace & mae. :) love it giiirl.

Author's Response: yay! stace approves...:)

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: May 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: stole them all away

i keep having this back and forth with your chapters since you switch from justin to kate... and, mama t, i just cant help but feel for kate. how sad for her. even if it was her decision.. nobody supports her, nobody really loves her... and it may have been by choice but STILL. sad. but loved it now that you've FINALLY decided to update. :p

Author's Response: you and kate. you just love that girl no matter what she does. why do i feel like i am going to end up making you mad with this...

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: May 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: baby and me

enter mae. i'd imagine this is when the tangling begins? and like i said, mae and trace should get together. not mae and justin. and SOMEHOW i have this little inkling that you're going to drive me insane with this. loved the chapter though. even if i felt like punching every single one of those assholes that frowned at jonah.

Author's Response: i think that a huge motivation is driving you insane. it carries all kinds of bonuses :) and go ahead and punch lol

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: May 22, 2007 Title: Chapter 13: goodnight moon

well then. excuse us all. they FINALLY kissed and she escapes from reality through justin's scent. damn girl. bring in a new character... name her something clever for me and get her together with trace... sexuals and all please. thanks. lol loved it.

Author's Response: *evil grin* the things i do torment you. but on a serious note....i\'m sure you would love some trace sexuals....but i can\'t tell you if that\'ll happen or not. would ruin the great streak we have going lol

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Jun 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 14: crooked man

okay so aside from the fact that im really on team mae/trace.. the tie moment had my heart doing a little skip in anticipation. and i love mae simply because she is fantastic. update soon ash that was a little bit of a teaser of a chapter. don't make me get into my analogies again. :)

Author's Response: stace....such a stickler. teaser. hmph that took me two hours lol. come back to me star!!!

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Jun 06, 2007 Title: Chapter 15: all for the want

oh poor kate. yet, somehow, i get the impression that she's going to turn into super bitch soon. i still feel bad for her though.. even if she was the one who made that crappy decision. loved the chapter of course.

Author's Response: i love how you almost know whats coming....just you wait. all this is going to build and buld and build and then....well i can\'t tel you lol

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Jun 10, 2007 Title: Chapter 16: still it lingered near

ok so trace got kind of close to entering my shit list this chapter. that wasn't really very sensitive or nice of him. and, well, i'm liking the mae/timbs combination more and more. loved it as usual darrrling.

Author's Response: hahah and it is all part of my plan lol i love that you\'re crossing over

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Jun 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 17: little boy blue

i just completely adore the dynamic of this "family" that you've got going on ash it's really great. and i love mae and i wanna see her give trace hell soon for his little stint. loved itt. :)

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Jun 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 18: cry baby bunting

...i really, really don't like people like that. kate's acting like a 12 year old who didn't get invited to the birthday party of a kid that she didnt even like in the first place. and she really REALLY needs to not bother mae. loved the chapter tho.. i missed youuu!

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 19: came tumbling after

ahhhh well FINALLY she updated and not that i expected anything less but it was absolutely FANTASTIC. and mae's feelings... and justin's adorableness. it's just wonderfuul.

Reviewer: smrkks Signed
Date: Jul 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 19: came tumbling after

oh you know what.. i have one more thing to add.. i better get a sexual. and that's not even a request- that's a demand. :)